| "LOVE POISON" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2012 11:13 EST
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I'm still waiting on you to finish this one up! You have a great concept, and your character development is believable in the canon universe, I hope you take the time to return to this story. |
Reviewed By: Eris of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2010 18:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story so far. I really hope that you can work on it some more.
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Reviewed By: Cee_cee On: June 10, 2010 05:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please tell me you are going to continue this wonderful story. :) Well done, you have a great writting skills which is hard to find now adays on fanfics. Please update.....pretty please? lol.
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Title: So what's next
Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2010 13:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooooo, I'm loving this, ut I want to know what happens next. Are you going to finish it? I hope so. Please update soon. YOU ROCK!!!!
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Title: NOOOOO!!!
Reviewed By: Angel Luv Joy On: December 30, 2009 05:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story but, they never got to have sex..... PLEASE find it in you heart to complete this story!!!
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 03:01 EDT
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is this story on permanent hiatus
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Title: too much
Reviewed By: Chitzi On: February 07, 2009 06:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
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oki.. the storry is not to bad... but i read till here.. and i have to say.. i got tottaly bored!!! you repet the same sentance over and over again, making more pages, but making me bord! OKI i get it! she smells nice... she's beauthiful.. but did you had to say it 200 times in one chapter!? X_X" the storry is .. overall .. kinde of boring.. needs more dinamic..i`m not against description and caracterization... but your's was TOO MUCH! i`ve seen that the storry is around sice.. 2005.. but i just had to expers my oppinion! ^^
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Reviewed By: Isa91 On: August 20, 2008 17:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hola, I just wanted to say I adore your fic, it's one of my TOP FAVORITES, and I am very selective about the fics I like! It's one of the only fics I've read that I can't guess where the plot is going, so I can't wait for your next update, since you said in an author's note that the plot would start to move faster after chapter 25. Anyway, I would just like to say how pleased I am that you wrote such a WONDERFUL and enthralling story! Thank you! And I am eagerly awaiting your next update! ~Isabel
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Reviewed By: CCKXS [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 18:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv this story and i wish u would continue it. i wanna know wha's gonna happen? when is inuyasha gonna tell kagome about what happen or is he even goin to geta chance to? how will kagome react.DETAILS PLEASE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Keribdis On: January 18, 2008 16:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing. I've never read anything like it before; I've read a lot of fics, too. It's been so long since it has been updated, please don't tell me that you have decided to abandon this. I really want to know what happens.
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 23:06 EST
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oh i forgot to tell you i love your story ^-^
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 23:05 EST
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are you alive? if so when will you be updating??
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 08:39 EDT
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Please come back, I miss this!
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Reviewed By: starryxxeyes [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 21:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love this story. Please Hurry.
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 11:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow great story. I really like how you get into the psychology of the characters. But you repeat too many things. Maybe by repeating less, you could move the story along more. (this doesn't sound right, it sounds like I'm mean... if you need explanations, email me). Hope you update this story soon. Hmm... maybe I'll go on AFFN.net. Anyways, great job with this fanfic.
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Reviewed By: JMaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 15:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess you've let this one go. That really is a shame. It's quite good. Hope to see how it ends someday.
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Reviewed By: misfitstep [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 21:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh. What a really great story! I hope you do update very soon. I saw that the last chapter was updated March 2006. Hope this isn't the end of the story. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 23:07 EDT
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sorry typo...12 months
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 23:05 EDT
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I like it so far. Do you plan on updating or have you abandoned it now? It's been over 2 months...
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Reviewed By: raiseyoureyes On: May 15, 2007 14:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, I hope you continue this! I want to see how it ends. All these great fanfics I'm reading lately haven't been updated =( So yes, I hope you haven't abandoned this!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 21:58 EDT
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Hi, Jesse! Found LP over on AFF a few months ago, but am glad to find it here as well. MM is much more user friendly. The tension in this story is wonderful. Got to know how it all turns out. Please tell!
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Reviewed By: orcillia On: March 26, 2007 14:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i really really love this story. there hasn't been an update in about a year and i'm sad that you may not continue it. i'd love it if you kept writing because you're incredibly talented and i really enjoy reading your story.
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 19:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is ironic that both Inuyasha and Kagome both fear themselves but not the other. I really love your story and a lack of an conclusion or even a continuation is driving me nuts. So please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 15:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You going to give Kagura a happy ending? I know what is happening or going to happen to her. Kikyou has really gone off the deep end in your fic. Well, the body that looks like Kikyou. I don't hate Kikyou, frankly I pity her but I disagree with her actions. As soon as she found out the truth of what happened between her and Inuyasha she should have been content and ended her resistance. The fact that she was reincarnated meant she found peace and her reincarnate did what she never could, love Inuyasha as he was. To accept him without demanding change and trusting him and in return Inuyasha trusts her. If she truly loves Inuyasha she should have been happy that Kagome loved Inuyasha as she never could and that Kagome healed his heart. By simply staying, preserving her false existence it proves that she is not the real Kikyou but only a shadow. If she went through with dragging Inuyasha to Hell her soul would return to Kagome, her reincarnate, and Inuyasha would be left alone. Everything about Kikyou is sorry, especially because she causes her own by refusing to let go. I hated the fact that Kagura died in canon, I liked her. She was the only "bad guy" character I liked. I could understand her because I too want to be as free as the wind but is enslaved. Kagura by Naraku and I by the fact I'm human. I hope she gets a happy ending in your story. I am actually sad that I am finishing chapters because it means I am going to run out of them to read soon. So could you please update soon. Your fan and hopefully friend, Ivellios
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 22:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is so absolutely heartbreaking that I can barely stand it. I can only hope that I too will be able to bring such emotions with my writing. Hope things are going well and I hope you update soon since I don't want to stop reading.
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Reviewed By: avidreader On: February 14, 2007 01:08 EST
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i love it! please please please update!!!!
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: tarashi On: February 12, 2007 01:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE this story. It's incredibly creative and beautifully written. I hope you haven't given up on this story. I'm really really looking forward to reading more!
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Title: *smirks*
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 05:18 EDT
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yes, i actually signed in, just to leave you another review. You deserve more reviews, and i want people to read this story. You put enough time and effort for it to be truely remarkable. So im gonna review it everyonce in a while, in hopes you will update it soon. And when you do finally finish this story i want you to write a new one. I eagerly look forward to any future endeavors you partake. Autumn
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Title: yay u rock
Reviewed By: too lazy to sign in On: October 01, 2006 05:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes, im too tired to sign in, its 5:25 am. But, i wanted to tell you that this fic is awesome and i want you to continue writing. I want to know what happens next!!! :) keep up the good work and until next update.. Autumn_the_Reviewer
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 15:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! I forgot! I have questions. *cough* Okay... 1)What's going to happen to Kagura. I know Sesshomaru's on his way to rescue her, but the last time you gave a look into what was happening with Naraku-tachi, he went downstairs and smiled at Kagura. That's not good. Can't be. Another question is 2)Just how long is Kikyo going to be in possession of Kagura's heat and soul? 3)Why do you say 'souls', instead of 'soul', for that matter? Just wondering if it's a religious thing. I know some religions/cultures believe the body has many - up to seven I think - souls, not only one like Christianity. 4)Will Kagome's mother ever have a serious conversation with Kagome (with or without Inuyasha present) about their current relationship? I know you said she 'trusts her daughter' and would wait for Kagome to come to her, but damn... Umm… I think that's about it for now. Oh yeah. I meant to say OOC-ness for my Sango and Miroku comment and 'non-chalant' in my previous review. ^^;;;; Bye~!! *wavies* (again) ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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