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| "LOVE POISON" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] | | Pages (14): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] | Reviewed By: Inuyashas4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 14:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry I couldn't review before..but that's because I just found this story yesterday! I love this story. I don't know what else I could critique on but...I just wanted to thank you for writing this story. I really enjoyed reading it and I can't wait for your next update! I also can't wait for the lemon and the moment Inuyasha FINALLY tells Kagome what happened with Kikyo...He is going to tell her..right? I am a Kikyo hater..soo some of my comments will be disrespectful to Kikyo...sometimes..anyways. THANK YOU!!!::hugs:: ^_^
| Reviewed By: Trusuprise [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 09:47 EST
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From the discussion with Inu-tachi outside the village to the interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha, yet another wonderful chapter down. You have a great way of making me hear Kappei's fluctuating voice when Inuyasha is bouncing between youkai and hanyou forms. Of course I especially like how Inuyasha speaks to Kagome when he's in his youkai form. The primal need, the short sentences full of meaning really grab you and convey the youkai's primal nature. Even though youkai Inuyasha does not speak this way in the anime, I like it, and wish he did, I think the series could benefit from it! And Kagome, in her endless understanding knew to communicate in like fashion. "In his full demon state...words did not seem relevant. So she reverted to touch, voicing only what the inu-hanyou, now supressed by his youkai, would understand" So, now that Inuyasha and Kagome have spoken about mates and there being only one, it seems that Inuyasha's youkai and hanyou side are each fighting to be "the one" Argh! again, they have the wrong idea! When will they see? And when will Inuyasha freaking tell Kagome what happened? lol, you saw that one coming... Again, great chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next one!
| Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Ditke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 09:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This new chapter was amazing! You know how to describe InuYasha's feelings. And I found the idea that InuYasha is speaking to himself very good! Continue! I love this story!
| Reviewed By: morwen re, not logged in On: March 24, 2005 01:20 EST
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great story! it took me a couple of days to get finished reading it, and i normally quit if a story doesn't catch my interest. i know what you mean about not getting reveiws at mm, 'cause i never seem to get them unless it's from ff.net. i hope you update again soon!
| Reviewed By: Mangomoo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 21:09 EST
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YEAH! U UPDATED! This is once again my favourite fanfic currently and I'm so happy that you posted! I love this chapter atleast Kagome is getting some understanding of how InuYasha's other side is. The chapter to end all chapters is when he finally tells her what happened and just letting you know I am constantly checking for when you update an I can't even express how anxious I am to see when he tells her and her reaction. I really REALLY hope that chapter comes out soon (yes, I know you have a life beyond writting this fic! :P) but I really can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the writting!
| Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 not signed in On: March 22, 2005 21:40 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for the update! It was once again an awsome chapter and I loved every single word of it!! I hope we don't too long to wait for more.
| Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: March 22, 2005 21:13 EST
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Okay, I think one word can sum up this chapter, heck this whole story - WOW! You always keep me guessing what is gonna happen next. I have to say that I enjoyed that little demon-Inuyasha interlude. I think the best part of the whole mess is that little Shippo is the one with the best grasp of the situation. So, when is Inuyasha gonna admit ? It's almost like Jerry Springer, Sengoku Jidai style. Can't wait to hear from you again. =)
| Title: Previously reveiwed as Miroku_girl
Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 19:08 EST
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Yeah, i got another acount because i couldn't figure out how to work the first one. but it's me Miroku_girl. that was so beutiful. it brought tears to my eyes like one of those sappy soap opras, only not sappy and has a better plot. i'm serious i was so touched i cryed *sniff* and still am. poor Inuyasha would never hurt Kagome but doesn't see this and it he's so afriad he will, that he's in pain himself. this is amazing, please continue!!! 10/10 Ja ne!!
| Reviewed By: Inu Yokai On: March 19, 2005 10:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn, ur one hell of a writer! i absolutely LUV ur fic!! I cant wait until u post again!!! its awesome!! THis is one of the best fics i've read on mediaminer, and i mean that! omg, it totally rox!! u HAVE to update and like, soon!! peace out!
| Reviewed By: Ditke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 16:28 EST
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Yeah! I loved it, too! It's cute, and very interesting... I have no idea what will happen next, so please update! Please!
| Title: Oh My God!
Reviewed By: CresentMoon21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 19:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've already reviewed for this chapter, i believe but you want more reviews, so i figured i could spare some time. I love this story and praticularily this chapter. Quite good. Now, since they have gotten so far together, i think Kag should sometime soon tell Inu how she sees him as one person, not two or three like he thinks. Wow.... this chapter, very.... heated. i love it and i'm surprised they weren't interupted. lol. i love your story and please update soon!
| Reviewed By: Diablos_ii On: March 12, 2005 17:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Du du du du du, I'm lovin' it! Such an awsome story! Im so glad you wrote this, it makes my day. The only problem is that you haven't updated yet!!! It makes me so sad! But Im not going to go all annoying on you, like some people. This story Is definaltley getting added to my favorites. also I wanted to ask If I could link it to my websight, I put all of my favorite stories there. Email me back at, beach_side_gal@hotmial.com with an awnser, okay? Keep it up!
| Reviewed By: sarak On: March 06, 2005 00:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for creating such great work- it is often hard to find such lovely writing within an anime fandom, or within any fandom for that matter. Thank you, I hope you get more reviews so that you continue your works.
| Title: Show me that this is not a dream...
Reviewed By: Trusuprise [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 11:44 EST
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Very nice. Chillingly beautiful quotes, great physical and action descriptions. I love Shippou's line of, "Miroku... you were such a good friend, I'm sure gonna miss you." The word Koishi still throws me off a little, I can't really see Inuyasha using this word, but aside from that, Inuyasha is very much in character, especially when he is being demanding. So, in this chapter, Inuyasha almost calls Kagome his mate, and he tells her he loves her while she sleeps. We get closer and closer to a confession on his part! He's yet to learn, despite Kagome's insistance, that there are not three Inuyasha's, but rather only one. (Sounds familiar! :))You've created a great mix of Inuyasha being both guilty and selfish as he debates telling Kagome about what happened with Kikyou, while Kagome is trying to get him to agree to her request. You summed his feelings up well with: "he couldn't ignore that his love and desire for Kagome was stronger than his guilt." I will still, however, continue to pout until he finally confesses though! We also see Kagome get an ego boost power up. In other words, Sexual Prowess +1! The ending of the chapter was sweet, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. How will Inuyasha and Kagome feel about what happened when they will wake up?
| Title: YEAH!
Reviewed By: Mangomoo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 22:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC! I would have updated the last time but I didn't know that you updated. This story is just so exciting! I dunno how 2 explain it just makes you wanna read more. Now just so you know, I. Cant. Stand. Kikyou. I.. lol I'm not going to start about her but I just want to see when Kagome finds out about what happened with InuYasha cause I want to see her reaction. I can't wait to see that chapter cause I wanna see some action but just to let you know, I'm your side with that playdo. Anyways update soon! YOUR BIGGEST FAN!
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