| "LOVE POISON" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kicnlus_Inuforeva (too lazy to log in) On: July 13, 2005 23:28 EDT
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This is AWESOME!!!!! I really love your story. People have said that I do some good angst work - but this is amazing. It really is. I hope you become a writer so I can buy all of your incredible books! I hope you update more, and if you want to read something sadly inferior that is rarely updated (so hard for me to update often...) look me up! Kicnlus_inuforeva is my username (of course) my sort of angsty one is Spiritual Machines. Well - thats just if your ever bored and feel like something different I guess. Whatever. Well, again, amazing work and I hope you update! Bye for now!
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Reviewed By: neh On: July 13, 2005 23:18 EDT
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yay.
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Title: GREAT RE-WRITE
Reviewed By: momcitrus not signed in On: July 13, 2005 22:40 EDT
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Since I get email notifications when you add a chapter, etc., I just re-read your chapter 10 re-write. WHAT A GREAT JOB! It adds so much clarity to your overall story, not to mention suspense to the plot. Made a good story even better. YAY!!!!!!
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Title: Love Poison
Reviewed By: ^_~ On: July 13, 2005 21:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kudos! I read all chapters in one day...great story...please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: July 13, 2005 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You are doing a fine job. The story is VERY entertaining! Count on me to be checking in regularly. I really liked the touching moments between Rin and Sesshoumaru. I always enjoy InuYasha when he and Kagome are angsting. Keep up the great work. Sounds cliche' but gets my points across. Thank you, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: bk On: July 12, 2005 21:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent story. I can't wait for the next chapter. You are a fantastic writer worthy of an IY Fan Fiction Guild Award. Good Luck. Please keep writing I know there are many of us waiting for your updates. Thanks for the great story.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 20:06 EDT
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lol. *edges away* I'm reviewing! I swear! *holds hands up in ront of her* Inuyasha's musing were quite amusing to me. I never thought Inuyasha would be one to talk to himself...but, you have changed my mind with this fic! ^_^ What DOES Kagura have to do with Kikyo's new body? Eh? I can't wait to find out! The suspense is killing me! X_X Update soon! And you can't yell at me because I reviewed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: July 12, 2005 19:48 EDT
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Wow, I never get tired of reading this story. Thanks for the Sesshomaru interlude. I always love to see what he's been up to. Yet again you seem to have pegged the personalities perfectly with your own little twist to them. I hope that when you finish this fic, you'll write other ones. If I give you a list of my favorite anime, will you write stories for them? Just kidding, (unless you really would do it) Anywho, can't wait to see what kind of trouble Naraku and Kikyou have been cooking up. Until next time.
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 18:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea! i'm finished at last. i wonder how you will have kikyou's plan turn out. i know you said no more inu/kik and i believe you...but man, to think of what she wants to attempt is too much!! i luv it! =p i am eager to see where you take us. this fic is too good for words, but hopefully words of adoration are enough to get you to update soon. please do so when you have the time. i'll try to wait patiently. umm, maybe that's asking too much. ^_*
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 16:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have only read the first chapter and i am in love with this fic! i can already tell that it will be amazing. man, i just couldn't wait until i read the last chap. to tell you so. btw, your grammar is actually better than some of the american english writers out there! you're a very talented author and i am going to finish reading the rest of your kick@$$ fic right now. i'll review again when i am caught up. bye 'till then. *_^
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Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 10:50 EDT
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yo! i absolutely love sango the cop & how miroku actually looked like the thief he is. & tho myouga doesn't actually call inuyasha "the master", i still like it. i also like how kaede calls miroku et al "young ones". i also like the classic kagome treating inuyasha like the dog he is moment! but i do tend 2 skip parts not dealing with the inuyasha-tachi. anyway, i look forward to ur next chapter! ja!
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Reviewed By: Tetsuya Yamatashi (formally Diablos_II) On: July 07, 2005 03:25 EDT
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*Gasp!* You were in the hospital!? And I was starting to get impatient! I feel like such a jerk-off now! I'm so sorry, YM! *gives YM a BIG hug* ahem...anyways...I really liked this chappy, It was very cute and well done. And I feel for you on the writer's block. I've had it for like, 2 months now...No fun... But as always, keep up the good work, I'm keepin' an eye on you!
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell- not signed in On: June 25, 2005 21:02 EDT
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I hope everything is alright and that you're feeling better. Thanks for the update - it was great as usual. When do we find out what Kikyou's been up too?
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Title: Great chp
Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 15:26 EDT
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Great chp. I hope you're feeling better now? Don't worry about the updateing thing. The people that do update every day are no where neer as good at writing their fics as you are ^_^ trust me on that. As long as you mange to every once in a while its all good. Ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: Diablos_II On: June 19, 2005 19:57 EDT
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well, I'm back, I told you I would review this last chapter...I just never really got up to doing it...yes, Im just lazy I guess. Anywho's, here is the review you asked for, and the one I told you I would give. Even though this chapter didn't revolve around Kagome and Inuyasha, I am still very happy for it. It was really good. I love how you can take the origonal plot of the anime/manga and work it in to how you need it in the story. I might have already reviewed...so If I have, I guess your getting the same review twice. I seem to remember saying most of this. Anyways, keep up the good work, Musashi!
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