| "LOVE POISON" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Title: First time reader
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 20:14 EST
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This is the first time I read this fic and I'm loving it. I just added it to my favs and I can't wait for you to update again. Stupid dead bitch...Grrrr...I hope Inuyasha tells Kagome the truth. She'll forgive him! She has too! lol
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Reviewed By: thoughts On: January 20, 2005 12:21 EST
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This is a wonderful story. This story shows why writing will always be popular -- you get a view of what the characters are thinking. Your Kagome and Inuyasha are beautifully written. It is lovely to be able to read the conflicts in their heads and to understand the reasons for their actions. Your struggles with the story aren't showing in your writing. I hope you will continue with your story. I'm intrigued with your characters and where you are going with them. I've only watched first 50 or so episodes of Inuyasha so I don't know if the characters you have introduced are ones from later in the series or your own characters. There is certainly nothing in the writing to give any indication either way since they have been so well introduced and are being rounded out beautifully. Thanks for your time and for the effort you have obviously put into your writing. It is a pleasure to read your work.
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Reviewed By: naughty angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 11:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really really great please continue updating quickly. I love it!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 08:53 EST
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Argh! I just realized it's Ch 4 "Trust..." that I'm utterly in love with! Of course, I think all of your writing is terrific...but that's the one where you express Inu's thoughts about Kikyo and Kagome so beautifully! :)
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 08:45 EST
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Thought I'd leave you a review here to "welcome" you :) Unfortunately I'm not too sure about how to navigate mm.org's posting section myself. Sorry! But I took a quick look at your chapters and thought that things seemed to be in place...nothing looked horrible! But the important thing is your CONTENT! You know this already...I've told you oodles and oodles of times already, but your writing is fantastic! First of all, you have an original plot - and it's hard to come up with a good Inu-Kag plot that hasn't been done already! Second, your command of the english language is so impressive (esp b/c it's a second lang for you)! Wonderful imagery...accurate characterizations. The only character I thought had been OC originally was Kikyou (and I've already told you that)...but as I've continued to read your story...I've come around ot your theory of her suppressed desire. I also happenend to watch "Kagome's voice, Kikyo's Kiss" again the other day, and could see your point. At any rate...this story lacks for nothing! You have the readers in suspense...we know that there's a ticking time bomb with Inu-Kag's relationship...all because of Naraku's spell and Kikyou's lust! More people will find this story, you'll see! I can't praise it enough...especially your Chapter 5!! Sigh. That's so what I would want to write!! :)
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Reviewed By: dark pheonix On: January 20, 2005 03:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfiction but I really hope that it ends with kagome and Inuyasha being together happily. I just saw this fiction today and was interested to see what it was exactly like so I began reading it and I just could not stop!!! I really like ALL kagome and Inuyasha fics and this one is very interesting because of the things Inuyasha is going through. I am excited for the next chapter and I really want to know why inuyasha is having so much trouble. I hope you update soon. you are a very good writer!! believe me I do not review unless the story is important to me. Just please make the ending happy I have read one to many fanfictions that are not fun to read at all because they are just to sad. I LOVE INU YASHA AND KAGOME!!!!!!!! I also REALLY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!! Take my word for it my sister has published a few books. you have ALOT of potential!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Heyla!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 19, 2005 20:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this story yesterday, and though a bit crude in the *cough* descriptive area, I like how the characters are interacting. InuYasha's current dilemma is heartbreaking. To not trust one's self...agonizing. (and yes frustrating, especially after his nighttime visit to Kagome, LoL) I hope he finds the answers he's looking for. --- I find it a shame that so many of the villagers still hate and fear him considering how many times he's protected the village. Oh well, extenuating circumstances. --- Sesshoumaru's appearance seemed rather sudden, but then he comes and goes often without an obvious reason. --- InuYasha's internal struggle with his 'inner youkai' is facinating. He can't be sure that his youkai will hurt Kagome, but with it's apparant bloodthirstyness, he can't be sure that it won't hurt her. He definately needs to find Myouga. Then again, Bouksenou the 1000 year old magnolia tree has often had answers to difficult questions. Bouksenou is the one who explained the danger of InuYasha's youkai blood to Sesshoumaru when he wanted to know why his brother's smell and youki had changed, becoming more like a full youkai. --- Keep on going, lets bring this baby home!
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