| "LOVE POISON" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: DarkDemonHuntress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 11:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very good fic.i hope u update soon! now don't get my wrong on this but i think kikyou was made out to be a little more "evil" than she really is. u still did a great job! seriuosly! but after watching a rerun ep. of kikyou and kagome in the preistess cave.... she just seemed nicer there. well keep up the fantastic work! 100% satisfactory :-D
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Title: "Wow!"
Reviewed By: Trusuprise [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 13:36 EDT
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Filler? Keh. No way. This chapter focuses on Kagura in the first half, and Kikyou in the second, both of which heavily muse on current events, hinting at Naraku's plot. Your characterization of Kagura is top notch. From describing her appearance and body language to her emotions and the reasons behind them. You simply bring the wind youkai to life. You really capture the essence of Kagura, regardless of the fact that she isn't the main character in your fic, your readers must trust that this exciting chapter will be beneficial and needed to your overall plot. It's obviously not filler simply considering the amount of time and effort you put into this awesome chapter. The piece with Kikyou is truly brilliant. I really enjoyed the additions you added since I read the draft! Remember, KS, originality is in everything you write, whether you believe it or not, baka!
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Reviewed By: momcitrus [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 23:49 EDT
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Still asking for reviews, even after 15 chapters, huh? Okie-Dokey, here ya go. This has been great fun to read, and assuming you are some sort of student, I certainly HOPE you'll have the time to update this summer. Looks like Kagura's FINALLY gonna get laid, eh? I say, so what if it breaks manga canon, since the whole point of fanfiction is FUN- you might as well re-write the story to suit your fancy. Abrupt topic change: Love and sex are basically the same story written over and over again, but it never gets old, does it? I'm no writer, and therefore it would be almost impossible for me to write a lemon/lime. How does one describe the inexpressable? But, hey, you did a great job, with the added bonus of an actual PLOT, haha. I truly think it all rings very true, and doesn't seem contrived or silly like so many fanfic lemons. It'll be so much fun to read the rest of this. Thanks!!!!
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Reviewed By: ucf_cheryl On: May 25, 2005 18:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy %&*%$ - That was absolutely the HOTTEST kiss scene I have ever read in my life. (Referring to chapter 4) Very, very true to life.
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Reviewed By: ucf_cheryl On: May 25, 2005 18:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You begged for reviews, so here ya go. (And by the way, I'm Mom the Manga Fan at ff dot net.) Following, I've pasted a paragraph from your chapter 3 so I can make some comments: "Such a magnificent, complex being...wicked yet adorable, a child but also a man, his need to protect as desperate as his secret need to be protected, his heart as immense as his temper was short. He was so passionate about everything...so wild and kind, despite his best efforts to hide this. How could he possibly see his own kindness as a weakness? He was a walking paradox...by the gods, she loved him." Okay, I absolutely LOVE these observations that you make- nobody comes close to your skill with this sort of poetry-prose stuff. HOWEVER, pages of this all at once bog your story down. I think you should leave the high-flown stuff as is, but try alternating it with action, plot advancement, etc. As far as WAFF and romance goes, ah, this is great good fun. Thanks for your time and trouble. (I'll be begging for updates by the time I get to the last chappie, I'm sure.)
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Title: My opinion...
Reviewed By: Ayumi Shinjuno [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 13:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! You really know how to write and I hope you'll update soon... Keep it going!
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Reviewed By: Kicnlus_inuforeva [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story!! I really hope you update soon - can there be lots of Inu+Kag to make up for the last chapter? Keep it up!! *hands FIVE cookies* see how much I like your story? You get a bonus! ^^ Update soon!!!
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Title: wow.....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 11:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow you story is really really really really really really really really (got enough in there?....um...NO!) really really really ..........GOOD!!!! ^__^ keep up the good work and updatye again soon please? i'll give you POCKY!!!!! lmao no one can resist POCKY muahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahaha
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: May 08, 2005 00:31 EDT
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Long time no see =) Thanks for the update, I love this story. I appreciate the different points of view in this chapter. It's always fun to get a different perspective on the same story. Keep it coming
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Title: its times like these I wish I had a boyfriend
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 05:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man oh man, the limes in this story are just to hot...I really need to...ooh well I'll not tell you what I need to do, but I'll tell you that your story is the cause of it...I have you on my fav's list so I'll be back to review again when the next chapter is out...Ja
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Title: Keep it coming
Reviewed By: IYFan On: April 04, 2005 03:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep this one going, you've got me hooked. Love it.
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Title: Really good work
Reviewed By: HimeG [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 00:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If only I could rate a 10+. I really love this story. I read the update as soon as it came out and then I reread it again yesterday just to make sure that I still have everything straight. I do have a question, how is it that youkai inu can speak in full sentences when talking to hanyou inu but not when he is actually dominant? I do understand that the youkai would understand primitive sentence structure better though. Thats all that I have. I hope that you update soon. I do have a habit of falling in love with stories that never get finished and I hope that this isn't one of them.
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Title: koishii
Reviewed By: ZAM On: March 28, 2005 01:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok... ::takes big breth:: i love your fanfic it is awsome ilove it its the best one i have ever read its just that in chapter uh... ok i4get what chapter im on...grrrrrrrrr i hate being stupis anywayz u used the word koishii and i dont know what it means wayyyyy ::makes sad face:: it would so rock if you could... tell me u r an awsome writter ok thats all i wanted 2 say im not done reading all you have written yet so im gonna get back to it... wow its late... i blame u 4 keeping me up late and making me tierd in the morning lol k bi ~ZAM~
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Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 01:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I noticed that you are in the process of updating your earlier chapters ... I hope that also means that you will be adding more soon!! I'm enjoying following this fic VERY much (and tracking it through several different sites!!) and am looking forward EAGERLY to your next chapter. I can hardly wait to see WHEN InuYasha is going to finally spill the beans to Kagome (if ever) and when the two of them are FINALLY gonna officially mate. The suspense is killing me (maybe not literally, but you know what I mean?)!! Thanks for making it FUN to follow this fic through all its twists and turns!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 21:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only two chapters and I'm already in love with this fic! Please update soon! I'm just a little confused. Sango babysits Mirokus' daughter and Kags babysits Inuyashas' kid??
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