| "LOVE POISON" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: February 19, 2005 23:15 EST
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I love this story! Where are you taking this, what is Kikyou getting herself into, how is Inuyasha gonna break it to Kagome, what kind of trouble is lerking around the corner for them. Please update soon, I can't wait to find out
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Title: that rocked!
Reviewed By: Miroku_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 22:27 EST
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awsome! so sorry i didn't review last chapter, i haven't been on in a while. anyway, that was sooo good. hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: spumante [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 21:33 EST
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good story so far keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: euphoricbliss [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 20:21 EST
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i love inuyasha's human form~ its so cute and i'm really glad that kagome understands the emotions that inuyasha's going through. i think you do a really good job of portraying their emotions. please update soon~ i would hate to be left hanging for a long time
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: February 19, 2005 15:28 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very touching and emotional. Your writing has alot of depth and feeling. I really am enjoying this story. Keep up the good writing. Thank You, Cynbad146.
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Title: This is me...
Reviewed By: CresentMoon21 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 18:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! I can't believe you left it like that! Argh! Please update soon! And don't worry, I feel for you! i only have 10 reviews and i have 7 chapters! Oh, the inconsiderate people that never review! Anyway, I LOVE your story! you have the greatest story line! If only the evil bitch Kikyo wasn't there... but i suppose if she hadn't done what she did inu never would have admitted his fellings... you have the greatest imagination! so much liike ookami-chan and amyfushigiyugi! i think i'll re-read your story now! Please update soon! -CresentMoon39
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: February 17, 2005 23:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay
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Title: Buyo MUST weigh more than 7 pounds!
Reviewed By: Trusuprise [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 14:25 EST
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Its great to see how much work you've done on this since I beta'ed it. Awesome job! Kagome's dream sequence was well done and well thought out, what a great way for her to find out what happened to Inuyasha at the village, even if she doesn't fully remember the dream. The writing for that part was excellent too, so descriptive with wonderful imagery. Again, you portray Mrs. Higurashi expertly, and have really honed in on her character. You summed her up in one sentence so well: "Her mother had a knack for seeing the kindness in other people and was the most open-minded being on the face of the earth" That, and her slipping... 'something' into Kagome's backpack was just awesome. I can see the woman doing just that. You also did a great job with the angst Inuyasha went through as he contemplated the approach of his human night, and the reminisence of his human nights as a pup. As always, your Inuyasha/Shippou banter is right on and a great break to all the emotions flying around. Can't wait to read the next half and the exciting lemon to come!
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: February 16, 2005 22:08 EST
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I think your work is really good. The story line and the writing seem to be wonderful. You have my attention and interest. Keep up the great work! Thank You, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: naughty angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 15:11 EST
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Once again I have to say I am completly in love with your story. And the whole "Kagome is My Bitch." is classic. Keep up the great work and update soon.
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Title: Waiting for the Next Chapter!
Reviewed By: Trusuprise [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 14:36 EST
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Hard to believe I finally make it to your last posted chapter of this epic! I'm glad to see that Inuyasha is owning up to his mistake by rebuilding the village, and I espeically liked the image of the little girl hugging his knees. Inuyasha has a long way to go before the villagers can fully accept him again and I'm glad that you decided to focus on that, and especially the fact that their perception of Inuyasha is important to him. "He did, because Inuyasha believed he had earned these people's trust. He had secretly liked it when the children of the village talked about him like he was this big, powerful demon who would always protect them." I was also interested with what you've done with Naraku and Kikyou, now that she has asked him for the help that he offered, asked him to give her a body that feels. I could feel the sexual tension between them. Naraku must be torn between his own twisted desire for her and his desire to destroy her and Inuyasha at the same time. Let me know if you need help with the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Trusuprise [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 10:52 EST
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Wow. Again, great descriptions and word usage in your writing. I simply love your style. Now we finally know the WHY and the HOW behind alot of what happened in previous chapters. I must say, I think this would have flowed better if you had written the story in a more chronological time line as opposed to keeping the bit about Naraku a secret for later. I feel that if you had revealed this before hand, you would have had many less upset readers! :) Also, Inuyasha's zombie-like acceptance of Kikyou's orders would have made more sense. Still, I like what you've done, and its still great. I particuarly liked the angst between Naraku and Kikyou and I like the way Naraku turns things around with Kikyou. Now who is not worthy of who? "Are you worthy of a filthy hanyou's love?" Very nice line. I'm eager to see your next chapters, to see how Naraku implements his plan to further destroy all three of them: Kikyou, Inuyasha, and Kagome too. I assume his motivation to do this (other than just being a mean man who gets off on destroying people) is to further corrupt the Shikon? You've really capitalized on Naraku's cold, calculating personality. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Mangomoo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 23:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOUR STORY IS SO... WOW! I just discovered it yesterday and I have gone crazy! Four about hours I just read from the first chapter until this last one and this story is so amazing I can't get it out of my head! I kicked people off of the computer to read it, I suddenly recall the story in my head at any point in the day. I'm just... addicted!! You have got some serious talent girl and you *must* post another chapter and soon! This is the best story that I'm reading out there right now and I need more!!! Do your thing an keep writting them fanfics! Your biggest fan, (bigger than a fat pig big) Ren!
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Reviewed By: naughty angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 14:23 EST
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I still love what you're doing. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 08:20 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story! The limes are so well done! I really like their first kiss ::did someone turn the heat up?::. I am a huge Inu/Kag fan so when I read what Kikyou was doing to poor Yash, I was horrified. Eventually, I got over it (with counseling) (just kidding, lol). When I read the part about Naraku and the insect bite, I felt much better. Anyways, I think your story rocks and I hope you update soon with good chappies. Later.
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