| "LOVE POISON" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 18:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! another chappie! for some reason mm.org didn't notify me like usual... so i was just looking and BAM! you updated! ^-^ i was soooo happy! you made my day... and today sucked for me, so claps 4 you and your story! i love it! O_o i will go mad if you don't update soon! keep up the GREAT, AMAZING work!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Hanyou On: March 19, 2006 22:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this chapter, thank you for updating! It's been so long, I thought that you had forgotten about us. I cant wait until next week. Kitsune Hanyou
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: March 17, 2006 00:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Happy, happy, happy! That's me again! You always deserve more than a 10. I would call this chapter one of those, "Let us have a breather from intense angst and still give us a very interesting storyline." I love emotional fluff! Favorite parts (conservatively stated)? "Night closed in like velvet," such beautiful words. The restless leg scene, so telling of InuYasha's state of mind and so in character. The incredible lap scene, including "I love saying your name," the surprising navel licking, and the "Shouldn't what?" Another favorite, "to cling, to taste, to caress." You work the characters so well with interaction between them all (kinda like when the mouse succeeds in the maze and gets the cheese). I thought that this chapter was chocked full of information even though the action was low keyed. Your the best! Forever your fan (runs around the room with "YM" jersey and pompoms), Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Maerlyn221 On: March 15, 2006 21:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't normally post reviews, but I had to say I've been visiting MM every day for the past two weeks looking for an update. Fantastic chapter as usual, I can't wait to read the next one.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: March 13, 2006 10:15 EST
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Just checking in with you, wondering where you are. Hope life has not become too hectic. I am having YM - LOVE POISON update withdrawal symtoms lately,so I am looking for my fix, since I have become so spoiled. Good talent is hard to find these days. Wishing you the best, read you later. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 15:34 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is going in my favourate for sure! I love this story, I've been sneaking on when my mom is sleeping just to read this wonderful story. Please DO update!!!!! I jus love it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 01:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gods! I've been absolutely glued to this story since I found it a few days ago. The physical and emotional torment both Inuyasha and Kagome have been going through ought to make them martyrs! It's really a fantastic story and I will barely be able to wait until your next update. TORTURE! Keep up the great work, I love it!!
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Reviewed By: cheryl On: February 19, 2006 21:27 EST
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Would you believe, I'd been saving the update notice in my email 'til today? Goofing off and reading your story was my REWARD for getting an A on my midterms!!! (I've been that busy.) Anyhoo, this story is a bunch of fun, and I can hardly wait for the next update. What an entertaining plot! I'd also like to point out that as you've gained more writing experience, the coherence of your storytelling improved, and you seemed to find more of a balance in writing the internal monologues vs. moving the action along. (Which are both well done and needed.) Thanks for sharing- you made my day.
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Title: Chapter 23
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: February 06, 2006 16:29 EST
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Another great chapter, though I did have to go back and read a chapter or two to remember where I was in the story. Excellent characterization on Inuyasha. Even in his demon form he is still concerned and protective of Kagome - perhaps a little too much. I hate that he had to go and hurt Kouga and Miroku, but perhaps that will make him come clean and strengthen his human side. I have always loved the conversations between the two inner Inuyasha's, but this chapter was especially good in that reguard. Thanks so much for writing for us. I look forward to reading more of this story! Thanks! Caitriona
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Title: HELLO!!!!!
Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 18:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best fics i've ever read! i hope the lemon comes soon! i just started writing my own fics and i hope you can help give me some support? feel free to email me at littlewhitfox01@yahoo.com ! love the fic! long live Inu/Kag, death to Kikyo!
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Reviewed By: Tara222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 14:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic. can't wait for the next chapter. I think mm.org hates everyone, tho. I tried to upload a fic but mm wouldn't keep it all on the page. weird.......
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Title: Stop Flattering Me
Reviewed By: Trusurprise On: January 19, 2006 17:33 EST
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Girl, this chapter was all you, and it turned out great! And for the record, I didn't like writing Inuyasha kicking Kouga's ass, even though he deserved it. Keep up the good work, girl. Each chapter shows your improvement and skill in character development and plot parallels. You continue to amaze me!
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 15:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...YEAH FINALY AWSOME JOB WOOT UP-DATW ASAP I WANT MORE WOOT WOOT!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 15:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah, another beautifully written chapter! the excitement during inu and kouga's encounter was at an all time high for me. i really thought there for a minute that he might kil him. i didn't expect kagome to do what she did, either. wow. what a way for her power to show itself again. amazing job. i thought there for a moment that he would kill miro as well. he is just going through pure torture here isn't he. poor inu. i feel so bad for him. now kagome has a bit of an idea of how inu feels. they should know (but i see why they're afraid) that they would never really hurt the other. such anguish and drama. tho, i so love the comic relief miro provides. lol. still one of my fave fics! keep it coming.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Hanyou On: January 18, 2006 20:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have loved this fic from the begining. You are a very talented writer. Please update when you get a chance. I cant wait to see what happens between Inuyasha and Koga.
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