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 Title: Waiting patiently
Reviewed By: Ladyadel69 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 14, 2017 12:34 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Waiting patiently for an update. I know it's been awhile since you last updated. I have read this story many times and still enjoy it ^^
 Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Akari Shibo  On: February 20, 2011 20:50 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
spelling frankly i dont know :P well i was wondering if you are updating somewere else because its been like 5 years with no updates and i really like your fic its good, i am really bad with grammar mostley because english is not my main speaking league so if you can find it in your heart pleas conty soon or tell me were i can read the rest thanks my mail is iyvker@hotmail.com in subject just put mediaminer and i will know its you (if you can ) if not it was a greta story and i hope you can make a sequel:D
 Title: HELLO
Reviewed By: iyvker [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 29, 2010 20:18 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i know a lot of time has pass but i think you are a really good autor, i love this fic and i started reading it yesterday, so if you find it in your heart conty this one so i can know how they kill naraku and pseudo-kill youske or youske begining to be taught a leason son pleas i will be waiting or you can write to me the rest at your peace i am in no hury but january its a good month o well you will do what you want so first of all be happy and my mail is iyvker @ hotmail . com a pd sorry for spelling and grammar i am still practising
 Reviewed By: LuLuCraZeD [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 26, 2009 12:09 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i really love this story even if u discontinued it
 Reviewed By: Lady Cadaver [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 30, 2008 23:22 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG!!! OK OK umm I compleetly ador this story. i started reading it on ff a LONG time ago and then i couldn't find it. so you don't know HOW thrilled i was to find this again. and might i add that your vocabulary useage makes me EXTATIC. you don't know how iritating it is to hear 'good' and 'fun' over and over. so i commend you on that! you are writing about my fave 2 characters and again i can't tell you how much i am enjoying this story! you have me in fits of giggles when it come to kag/yo kur/kuro/hiei and how the react to each other. thanks for the comidy releif! and please, take you time writing this story. i can't tell you how much i dislike a porely writen story, i being a writer myself (and a perfectionalist at that). thank you again for the entertainment!
 Reviewed By: LadyNorth76  On: November 24, 2008 17:49 PST
Comment/Review:
I've been waiting for this story for 3 years.^^ Hell, you're a talented writer. Please don't give up! Thanks.
 Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 05, 2008 11:53 PDT
Comment/Review:
I know its been awhile since you wrote but I love the story very much,you are a great author and I hope to see more pf your work no matter the story,,hope to see soon,,but no rush,,,promise lol
 Title: ? I don't know what this box is for...
Reviewed By: Kyuthe  On: May 23, 2008 16:37 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm not sure if 1 or 10 is the best, but I went with the American way and assumed that More is better. 10's across the board~! I've spent the last few days reading this fic, and I'm sorry to see it discontinued. I did take your author's note into account, but I feel that after approxamately 3 years, asking you to reconsider picking up the fic again isn't a pressure to 'update please.' I mearly wish to urge you into rereading what you have, and if you don't feel the need to continue, well, I fully understand. I truely enjoyed reading your work these past weeks, and was hoping a little 'buttering up' could persuade you to revisit this 44 chapter wonder. Maybe after all this time you have absolutly no desire to finish this story, but I was wondering if you could at least give your audience a summary of outcomes? As a reader, I too have become invested in these characters, this situation, and this story. It seems a shame to leave your ideas unknown and unfinished after puting so much effort into good writing. Regaurdless of your decision, I look forward to much entertainment from your other works. Thank you for sharing, Kyuthe
 Reviewed By: channen209 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 06, 2008 09:24 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this story! and whispers in the night!
 Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 07, 2007 08:51 PDT
Comment/Review:
I love it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
 Reviewed By: randomperson72  On: February 28, 2007 15:02 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this fic SOOOO much! can you update please?? you kinda just stopped writing... T,T anyway...thanks for writing!
 Reviewed By: MissSesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 16, 2007 21:23 PST
Comment/Review:
All I can say is nicly stated. I relize that I dont review very often and I am sorry for that. I will try harder on that. Thank you an to your co-wrighters for all of your hard work. You realy do turn out nice stories. *smiles*
 Reviewed By: Kunehira  On: December 20, 2006 17:21 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey there... I read the author note which you inserted and I just wanted to say, I understand where everyone is coming from. The story is great. I personally like it, the character and their personalities. You've done a great job in maintainning their true characteristics and personalities from the animes and mangas, and it's to be expected that everyone would like to know what is going to happen in the following chapters. Demo... I also understand where you are coming from. People have to understand that when a writer's notes "go up in flames" it does make it harder to continue with a story. Anyways... I just wanted to say... great story and I'll be looking forward to your next update. Heck, I waited close to a year, (or was that a little over a year...? Anyways... ) to get the final chapter to "dreamer awakened" a great continuation fanfic of the anime Blue Seed. So... take your time. I know that you will write a great following chapter for when you do update. Take care Ryohko
 Title: A job well done!
Reviewed By: Kaji Hinomiko Kitsune  On: December 11, 2006 00:16 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey babe, no worries! I know what it's like to lose a compy and all the notes to a story. *wink* *comforting hug* I'm just pleased to death with this story and to be honest i'm very happy that you are going where YOU wnat to go and not where WE THE READERS want to go... i've had many short stories go to crap because of that lol. So i just wanted to let you know that i'm behind you one hundred percent of the way... and i'll be making my way to your author page to read the rest of your stories... sorry i didn't leave a reveiw for the other chapters but your stories are too good of a page turner to slow down and reveiw for each of them... so i just gotta settle for leaving one really big love filled one at the end! *huggle* *gives pomegranate pastries* i much on these all the time when i run into issues with my muses... and all three of them have taken a liking to them... hopefully your don't get addicted to them.. they might be encouraged to give you problems more often... and that's no fun, especially for you. I love you writing style so i will be making my way now on to read your other stories and get caught up with them... i think i'll be using all of the x-mas break to do so =P much luv and many huggles, Kaji Hinomiko *hug and comfort*
 Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Harvest Berries  On: November 08, 2006 15:19 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please update soon! Is Kagome's body still a virgin because she didn't do 'it' with her physical body? What I mean is... is she going to still be a virgin until Shuichi Minamino AKA Kurama (Human-half)becomes intimate with her too? That thoughtful question cross my mind. Don't forget to update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Title: Waiting ~_~
Reviewed By: Grey-green  On: November 08, 2006 13:40 PST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm waiting. Please update soon!
 Reviewed By: shadow fox101  On: October 08, 2006 07:31 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay there is no word that i can think of about how amazing this story is. And i'm not just saying that! i love reading IY YYH crossovers with kag/kurama/youko parring but none of them are this good. :) I can't wait to read the next chapter and i hope you will continu this story! 10/10!!
 Title: this is not an "update" review
Reviewed By: Nicnivan  On: August 26, 2006 23:38 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love this fic!! you are so right in that there isint a lot of really good crossovers out there and i am so happy to have found yours ^_^ i hope that you will continue to add to the fic because if you dont i think i might cry T_T dont let me down -your not "updating plz" reviewer lol
 Reviewed By: Golden_Fire_Goddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 23, 2006 21:17 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this fic of yours. Yes, i read your Author's Note and I hope that all is going well for you. I understand the want to not rush, good things come with time. But Even though I said and think that, I can only hope that you would please update soon.
 Reviewed By: adorkablebanana  On: May 21, 2006 13:45 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I know what you think of this fic but I just had to reread it, its one of my favorite kxk fics.
 Title: This is so awesome!
Reviewed By: animebook fan (not signed in)  On: April 25, 2006 14:43 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your story it so awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! Take your time. If someone really loves your story, like myself, then they will be willing to wait. TTFN! You rock!!!
 Reviewed By: Yoko Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 27, 2006 22:49 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*waits patiently for new chapters* I will wait as long as it takes for new chapters!! BRING IT ON!!! WOOT!!!!
 Title: wow two storys in one day
Reviewed By: bookreader  On: February 27, 2006 16:35 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your storys, and I love you style of writing. I managed to read two of your storys in one day. Please update soon. I understand that it can be agravating to constantly hear people saying that, but its probly cuz they'er losing sleep not knowing whats going to happen next!!
 Title: imagining
Reviewed By: Rayne17  On: January 29, 2006 10:10 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ah...the main thing I'm hung over is what image Hiei sent Kurama! I'm so curious! Lol, anyway, great job on this fic and keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: foxgirl94 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 21, 2006 14:33 PST
Comment/Review:
luv the story. i like a circle of souls better though. plz finish it soon.
 Title: Commitments Made in Blood
Reviewed By: Aymia [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 19, 2006 16:02 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your story and cant wait for the next update!! I also love it how you pay such attention to your reviewers. So take your time, so that its as great as the entire story. Your fan, Aymia
 Title: Chapters 1-45
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 04, 2005 19:55 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awesome!!! Update again soon. Cant't wait to see what happens with everyone and how Kagome gets her part of the jewel back.
 Title: Commitments Made In Blood
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 26, 2005 16:36 PDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
 Reviewed By: faerygirl44 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 28, 2005 15:37 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your writing. It is so hard to find well written crossovers. Please finish this, I can't wait to read more.
 Title:
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 12, 2005 10:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
Ack, the jewel in the mirror, is that how Naraku gets the jewel?? What was Kagura doing during that fight? I'm interested in how she spent her time over the 500 or so years she was without Naraku. Are we still going to see those bracelets that Naraku commissioned for Kagome? Yuske is a real jerk, maybe something bad could happen to him? What happened at the mall after the police figured out that Naraku was gone? How is Naraku going to punish Kagura for her behavior? Why doesn't she talk to the Spirit Detectives, or Kagome, help them in some way when Naraku is otherwise engaged? Er, I seem to have a lot of questions, I'm looking forward to your next update!
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