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 Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 24, 2005 19:21 PST
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*whacks head* Heh... I just skipped a chapter... Heh, I'm going to read it again... but I have too say, Kuronue! YAY!!! I dunno why, but he's one of my favorite characters. Him, Youko, Kagome, Shippou, Sesshoumaru, Kouga, Yusuke, Kurama(human), and Naraku. Ah... I should read chapter 27... But I read your review response(after I realized my mistake) and I gotta say, I am seriously tempted. Seriously. I'll try it, but knowing me, I have no clue how it will turn out...
 Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 24, 2005 17:47 PST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh my god, you fiend! We lost power, and I come back to like, six chapters! If I didn't enjoy reading them so much, I would be horribly mad at you. *Shakes fist* But being the wonderful author you are, and being the stalker obsessee fiend that I am, its better to come back to that that less. Even if my brain DID melt. *nods* I'm totally loving this addition of Koronue, and shippou. Haha *demented chuckle* It doesn't look like you're leaning toward shippou being a royal pain in Youko's butt, and I don't think that would even be plausible, the way you do your story, but that doesn't mean I can't be amused by the thought. Or that I can't do that in my own story. ;D Well, anyway, lovely as usual. Few spelling errors, but that is my only crit.
 Title: commitments made in blood
Reviewed By: pheonixfire  On: February 24, 2005 16:32 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love the story, keep up the good work. Cannot wait for a new chapter. I read someone wanted a kurama/kag/Kuronue. Please do not do that. You stated in previous chapters that kag is faithful and would not want that and it was even stated that youko would not want anybody not even his old partner to touch her. So please keep with the original pairing. Well keep up the good work and thanks for updating so much
 Reviewed By: Person...  On: February 24, 2005 16:20 PST
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Hey! Great story so far! It's really interesting especially with Kuronue and Shippo in it now! I would really like to see a Kagome/Kurama/Kuronue, I really like the pairing, and it would be interesting to see... but, either way it's all good... lol, well later! ^-^
 Reviewed By: kagomeme2000(notsignedin)kk  On: February 24, 2005 16:07 PST
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Do tell me when re sango and miroku going to come into the picture! ive been reading your story scince day one and im still wondering!
 Reviewed By: blackshadowz243  On: February 24, 2005 15:49 PST
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completely love your story. Hmm... I haven't seen Kuronue so I cant wait to see how he reacts to Kagome being Kurama's mate. And Shippo is back as well! Adorable little furball...A Kuronue/Kurama/Kagome triangle would be great.. but Youko seems too possesive.. Great story.. you dont see that many well-written Yu Yu Hakusho/Inuyasha crossovers. Cant wait to see what you do..
 Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 24, 2005 15:48 PST
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 Reviewed By: Kit Kat Fla Girl  On: February 24, 2005 15:00 PST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well I do like the Youko/Kag/Kuronue triangle. Although I'm not sure how that would happen with the way the story is so far. But if you decide to go with it, hey .... it's all good!!
 Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 24, 2005 14:15 PST
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Ya~y! Torturing is fun! But, which idea are you doing? I like all in my opinion. Yayness, Kuronue is in the house, literally! Including Shippo *smirk*! Here's a question that's been bothering me, will Kagome's mom adopt Shippo? It would eventully happen soon, now wouldn't it? Hehe, I would like to see, er, read what will happen with Kurama/Youko explaining about himself to Kuronue. *sweatdrop* I can just read what will happen... "You what?! How in the seven pits of faming hell can you die when doing a job, you baka!" Kuronue would say... *snicker* that would be entertaining! Please update soon! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
 Title: Yay
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess)  On: February 24, 2005 14:09 PST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay ^_^, a Youko/Kag/Kuronue is fine with me. o.o Inuyasha might be reincarnated when Naraku is dead, talk about big problems. Yay, Shippo is back! Her family seems to be accepting everything well...except for her grandpa but he senile -_- Yes it is Chocolate Chip Cookie Dough ^_^ Koenma seems skeptical still but oh well. wait til Kuronue finds out Kagome is a Miko o.o; then Kurama is really going to just have to sit down and explain everything to Kuronue, like he hasn't been explaining alot of things lately anyways. Ok there is still plenty of ice cream,soda and chocolate and candy so enjoy!
 Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 24, 2005 13:45 PST
Comment/Review:
Ya a sin alright.puddles of goo. But I would get to say I told you so to all the people I know that don't think that Kurama would ever become real.
 Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 24, 2005 13:42 PST
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Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! Kuronue! He's cool. I wouldn't mind a Kag/Kur/Kuro pairing. In fact I encourage it. It's one of my fave triangles. Please update again soon. ^^ Your story rocks so far. ^^
 Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 24, 2005 13:39 PST
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Well... I have to say I like the Kurama/Kag/Kuronue fics but, I really don't think it would go with this story. Youko s a little too.... yeah. I don't think he would like that much.
 Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 24, 2005 12:46 PST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
...Eh, forgot something! Kuronue and his original take on the situation... "He would find out the answers later on, Youko would fill him in and they could get this "mission" over with. Then perhaps they could pick up where they left off." That has some very interesting implications, ne? Kuronue is not all-willing to become a happy member of society. Though I am unsure if you were referring to picking off where they left off catching up wise, or thievery-wise.
 Title: nooo...
Reviewed By: kettricken [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 24, 2005 12:45 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
No triangles! At least not with Kuronue! I'd love to see him paired with SOMEbody, although I don't know who it would be, but in reality it's already a triangle, what with the multiple souls happening. Adding Kuronue would just make it kind of a...square. =D No love squares for me, thanks! (Not that I'd stop reading, of course. Great story so far!) Besides, do you really think that Kagome could bond with Kuronue as much as she already has with Kurama? I think she might be as adverse to this as Youko...
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