| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] |
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 20:29 PST
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heehee! Yeah! I love this story! But I feel sooo bad for Kagome! how sad!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 18:28 PST
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Okay! Now, the actual review, I found those two chapters oddly absorbing. As in I hasn't expected to really want to read anything while sneezing, coughing, and having excess moisrure forced from my eyes. I wasn't crying, just feeling generally miserable. Youko was portrayed excellently as usual, everyone is to be given their moments of doubt. The scene in the kitchen made me laugh, I was thinking 'It's Dr. Jeckl... or whatever that one maniacs name was...' Through that. I have to say, I can't really symphasize with either of them as they are going to have to work this out. Kagome is understandably like that - I'm glad you didn't have her totally understanding and such. Or maybe you did and I'm just really out of it... idiotic pills make me tired and lethargic.... I especially like how Kagome and Hiei were like, "Hey long time no see! What was it now??? Ah yes, 500 years for me, a week or so for you!" Not really, but that's the over-all impression I got. Update when you feel like it... I will update my fic soon too... if Fate doesn't decide too send me more diseases... Good health too you!
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Reviewed By: phoenixs_paiste [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 17:39 PST
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MMMM...snuggle the fluff moment. even if it was kinda a sad fluff moment it was Still cute and sweet!! Hmmm.... as stupid as I feel I have a question about some thing from two or three chapters ago. The part of the well the demon wizard (or what ever he was -.-) when he changed the spell on the well he said that it only allowed people (or err...demons too) that from his rivals blood line to pass throught. Who was the rival that cast the spell???? When did he do it and Does that mean that Inu Yasha and Kagome were related???? I would love to hear what your answer to that little part is. I have to apploude you for that explination of the well though. I think that is a very good and plasadle way that it allows her to pass throught to the past. Never would have thought of that on my own. HMMM... nother reason to bow down to your abilities as an author.... Loved the chapter can't wait till the next.
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Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 17:22 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me, #100? [woosh] That's never happened before! So I put the pix up here, should you wish to see it; it's the first Youko pix. http://www.geocities.com/shabopo/images.rough.htm.htm If you've a good copy of photoshop, google around for good images and transpose them. [shrug] or at least that's what I'd do. It's wonderful how fast you're posting this... though sometimes I've'n't had the time to review yet! not complaining though! Your writing style is somewhat reminiscient of my best friend's; it makes it all the easier to get into the flow of the story.
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: killerkitty1106 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 16:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude this is so cool i cant wait for the update! i wonder what naraku is going to think of the future?
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 16:06 PST
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X-X I know I'm going to have to re-read those chapters again... damn cold... Ugh, no long review today, I'm going to go drug myslef to sleep or something. Medically... or hit myself over the head with a 2 x 4 board... that would also work... I can only say I think you will need to update soon, but take a break if your feeling stressed. After all, wait... then you'd get a bunch of pissy people after you... 'scuse my language, I don't bother censoring when not feeling well.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 10:53 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You just had to stop there didn't you!!!!!!!!!!!! *screams head off* It's like stopping in the middle of a lemon!!!!!!! I'm going to kill you!!! *stops to think* Madey I won't, 'cause then who would finish the story^_^! Great chap! But please update again Soon!!^_^
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Reviewed By: phoenixs_paiste [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 09:45 PST
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You evil evil tempterst!! Don't stop there!! MORE!!-.- Anyway another great chapter. If I wasn't addicted before now I am throughly now. I can't wait till the next chapter. I like the way you've handeled the characters!! HEHE I can't wait till the next chapter with the explination.
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Reviewed By: Fogkit On: February 18, 2005 07:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*bows down to the awsome updating powers* Very cool story I can't believe how fast your updating and with such long of chapters I told my friend to read this and how fast your updating and she didn't believe me.:) You should bring Fluffy to the future. I'll bet Naraku would almost or would get hit by a car. :P
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Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 01:37 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
issocute! I have this one pic of youko with a tender expression on his face, and it totally matched how I pictured him acting towards her. I've been looking for the link, but... me being me, I've lost it at the moment. Reagrdless, reading more was wonderful!
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Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 22:40 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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+content little smile+ I love, love Youko being so soft and caring to Kagome. and this makes three chapters displaying something of that nature. Its just so sweet! Although I find myself taken over by helpless giggles if Yusuke saw Youko playing the part of a mother hen. xD I believe when we chatted on AIM, you posed the question to me, if there was anything I wanted to see in particular in this story. I'd been distracted from answering you then, so I'll do it now. Nope. Absolutely not, I have no desire to guide your hand, because I believe you are doing a more than fine job on your own. Thank you for being so very approachable and un-scary, and allowing me to carry out my stalkerish tendancies against you and your immense talents.
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Reviewed By: moonlightdemonKita On: February 17, 2005 22:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurry with the next chapter or I shall sick my giant 3-headed dog on you! I really like this story
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Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 21:00 PST
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I totally agree with you, Kouga has to ditch the fur and armer look and trade for maybe leather or even a sexy cowboy look...*drool*... I wonder what Fluffy-sama would look like with a tux.... hehe I can just see him now. Anyway, did I mention how much I hate Naraku? He's really getting on my last nerve and pushing me on edge. *right eye twitches* Yep, he will most certainly will die by someone but it can't be me 'cause I'm not in your fic (even though I wish I could... ) If I did, I would secretly go undercover as his servent and then attack the bastard (sorry, got the strange habit from Yus-kun....) Anyway, good chapter, even though I hate Naraku's guts and everything about him, update please!:-D *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
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Title: SessKaglovur
Reviewed By: SessKaglovur [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 20:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good! i hope u update soon! i just hope this was NC17 instead of PG! but thats ok
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Title: SessKaglovur
Reviewed By: SessKaglovur [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 20:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good! i hope u write more soon!
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