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 Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2005 23:31 PST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Awmigawd. XD I was totally picturing poor Youko as a tennis ball, with Kagome and her mother being the players. Poor, poor unfortunate soul. I've always pitied any man who had to try to placate two women at once. I will be greatly amused if some of the stuff Youko brough up got him in hot.. well, maybe not hot. Just lukewarm/tepid water. Because we love him and don't wish actual harm on him. But he'd be so cute convincing her it wasn't just his instincts making him take care of her. (Yes, I am a hopeless FLUFF brain, I can't help it.) and and and.. Yusuuuuuuuke is in trou-ble! *hums happily and somehow maliciously all at once*
 Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2005 23:23 PST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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..Bad Yusuke! BAD! >>; Anyway.. xD I can totally see Mrs. Higurashi just blinking and going "How" to that last bit. Poor traumatized woman, can't take much more! Of course, she is a very understanding woman. o_o She'd have to be, with the life Kagome leads. anyway, nice as always. *lovemuch*
 Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2005 21:01 PST
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And it seems the general consensus among your reviewers is that Yusuke is an idiot! And a dead man. *starts selling tickets to 'Youko vs. Yusuke'* Bets anyone? ^.^
 Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2005 20:57 PST
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Ah yes, fun fun. We need the mom to react humanly for once... she gets rather creepy if shes always 'Oh yes! Grandchildren!'. Ah, I don't know, but at the rate your going, Youko is going to beat the shit out of Yusuke. It's almost like Yusuke signed a death warrant by Youko's hand with that call. I wouldn't really be surprised though... Kuwabara for once was the fountain of wisdom. Just goes to show caution goes a long way. How's Koenma going to react to this? Though he doesn't seem to overly concerned at this point, more concerned about her health than anything else. He so far hasn't freaked out, so either he doesn't really care, or it hasn't impacted him yet what happened. I wonder how the Reikai gossip-base will take this? I liked this chapter over-all, it seems to have just hit my head at the right time. I am feeling better- maybe it was those mental images... ^.^ 'till next time! I can't wait for the next update!
 Title: Mistake!!!
Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2005 18:29 PST
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Oops, sorry for got to tell yeah that it's really http://www. absoluteanime .com/ yu_yu_hakusho/ without the htm thing, anyway... Great chapter, I wonder if Kagome's mom is going to faint or either going to have a earful of fits... that would be interesting!
 Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2005 18:11 PST
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Hehe, I thought you would. Anyway I found a website that you would like to go to for that information. It's: http://www. absoluteanime .com/ yu_yu_hakusho/ .htm. The names of the three lords are: Yomi, Muruko, and Raizen. You can also can get good info on the other charaters in the anime and more into their pasts, I myself use it all the time. Update please!!!XD *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
 Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2005 17:35 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I've simply given up on trying to figure out the spellings/pronunciations of characters! I mean, they are originally written in kanji, so there's no 100% correct translation to use anyway. I sort of just decide that the r's are r's, the l's are l's, and leave the rest up to those who speak the langauge! [hn] See there's this one clause that I really, really don't get. I mean, sure they're mated, but... for every reincarnation afterwards? That doesn't make much sense to me. Perhaps I don't know enough about the religious philosophy, but... if that were the case, then there's the whole Inu-Yasha, Kikyou situation - we don't know just how far that went- and it just seems, well, implausible to me. Aside from that detail, which sort of bugs me every time I see it on any story- I loved the update! I'm savoring the chance to read this because I'm about to start cramming for a midterm.
 Reviewed By: phoenixs_paiste [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2005 15:43 PST
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Yey Love the new chapter her mom is soooo...calm and excepting I don't know if I could be. Yusuke's turn to get his ass kicked around the room by Youko! *snickers* anyone else in line ;P Well be sides Naraku but he's getting more then an ass kicking. Koenma sooo cheats getting info that way! Is he gonna get an ass kicking too?? Tell me your not gonna make him an ahole and have him try to get ride of Kagome or seperate them or even take the jewel from her protection?! Anyway can't wait till the next chapter.
 Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2005 14:50 PST
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Egh! I know! Don't you just hate that! I write too but I want to FINISH a story before I start to put it up or I'll get writers block and never finish the stories! wow! Run on! Don't you just love those? heehee update soon!
 Title: again Yay ^^
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess)  On: February 20, 2005 14:46 PST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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^_^ yay again for the fact that you updated, two chapters at that! I don't want to give you a stomach ache! o.o *takes back bowl of chocolate and pushes a thing of sodas to her instead* >.> there its a little better. Hey I'm on FF to,just under a different s/n sorta ^^; anyways I realy hope you update again soon. Her mother has found out O_O she's taking it well so far but what will she do next is the question. I am dying to find out, seriously o.o, I don't feel good so waiting might kill me! Yusuke is digging his own grave by getting Koenma involved when Kurama hasn't gotten the chance to talk to Koenma himself yet! *sigh* Yusuke needs to learn to listen more, but he has yet to do so. -_- anyways! ^^ hope I get to read another chapter soon!
 Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2005 14:45 PST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Yuskue's a dead man!!!!
 Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2005 12:10 PST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Great chapters!!! Sorry I was out of town for a couple of days^_^!!!
 Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2005 09:01 PST
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Naraku is an evil bitch-whore, and I love it. o_o; Just had to let you know that little bit. XD and I know I've said it before, but I still love how you're having Kagome/Kurama/Youko interact. *licklove* And *I* think you're going at a perfectly fine speed. :P Rushing things never brings any good.
 Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2005 07:51 PST
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Yes, a curse. But then again this chapter wasn't that bad. You left off at a good spot this time! Yeah! If this was a book I would of been going, 'one more chapter, one more chapter'. It's a page turner! I would never get any sleep! whooh! Thank god it's on the computer! I can't take it upstairs with me! Update soon!
 Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2005 00:26 PST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hn. Naraku has issues.[shrug] I guess he's just someone who's into bondage... lol. I do like how you didn't, uh, "idiot-ify" Kurabara/Kuwabara [I see it spelled both ways!] in this chapter. I mean, sure he's a little annoying, but I can't stand how so many authors rag on him as being mentally deficient. He does have his uses. He would sense something like Kagome when Yusuke's too busy being testosterone- poisoned to use his head. I liked. [happy dance]
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