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| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 15:04 PST
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update update update update!! Houjo is such a jerk! I glad that youko had his way with him! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: Fogkit On: February 28, 2005 15:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Death to hojo! :D
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 14:51 PST
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That is sooo no fair! I want in! What is he demonstrating to you? hmm.... wow my minds hentai! It supirses even me sometimes! My day dream contains pop corn and a lot of naked guys and girls! what fun! *dreamy look* I can see it now... I never want to wake up from sure a good day dream! *wakes up* shit. My minds no fun sometimes. It just HAS to wake me up just when the good stuff starts! Why do I even bother? Oh yeah! Because it's fun! ^^ I'll type to you latter! bye!
| Title: o.o
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: February 28, 2005 14:38 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOJO MUST DIE! Hojo the hobo ^^, I think he should die, sorry, I just really don't like him. Yes I see, training has began and o.o you are very right about her slapping him. *huggles Youko* You poor thing! anyways, *hugs Youko and keeps typing* I can just see what would happen if Kagura pushed Naraku infront of a moving vehicle and lived, she would be in sooo much trouble. Hmm *does normal routine* I'll wait again for the next chappyteer!
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 11:36 PST
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Ya~yness! Another wonderful chappie! I say, kill off the idotic moron! A.K.A. Hobo, er, Hojo. Why can't he just die? He's so annoying and can't keep his filthy hands to himself! Yuck... dirty perverted young today are disguting (even though I am part of the youth section O.o). I can't stand people like that, except Yusuke, Youko, Kuronue, Miroku, and Kuwabara, they are an exception 'cause that's how they are. Anyway, I got other weapons instead of the butter knife. I've got bombs, stale crackers, chemicals from the science lab at school, a maga hammer from Paper Mario..., my Emily the Strange cat pillow, flashlight, and my manga collection! *Evil laugher could be heard in the background* Hehe, including great sound effects, got it off the internet somewhere... *shruggs* Please update soon! I need to know what happens! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [not logged in] On: February 28, 2005 00:48 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While I've not the time to do a full review, I saw one typo that made me CRINGE, so I'm going to obnoxious and point it out; I see it everywhere and it drives me crazy! It's "Dragged" not "drug". the verbs "to drag" and "to drink" are themost commonly mis-conjugated [or whatever] in the English language, to the best of my knowledge. I mean, it'd make sense for it to be "drug", but English is screwy, so it's not. Loved the chapter; Have a hell of a lot of calc. to do, so must go.
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 21:19 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For some reason, the thought of Hiei going berserk at Naraku gives me warm fuzzy feelings. He's seriously one of my favorite manga characters. [grin] His dragon thing verses Naraku's gross tentacles! I rather liked how you kept her stubborness intact. ...and I am totally with Kuronue; if I were watching them I'd probably be incredibly entertained!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 20:55 PST
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Thank you for reviewing, now I(being an idiot) need to edit it... I forgot and posted it. Heh, no worries, I'm going to badger a friend to help me do that. Your review really stopped the 'nervous attacks'. I need to edit it still though... ^.^; But I'll leave it up till then.. I guess I 'll just call it 'version 1'.
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 19:53 PST
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Are willing to murder him for Youko. *bits word limit* Heh, computer time is restricted, so if I want to get this chapter posted tonight I'll have to cut my reivew short... farewell my fast-updating friend! I need to post a chapter. Did I mention that I really enjoyed this chapter and have been looking forward to it all day? ^.^
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 19:51 PST
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A tornado? O.O Something about them just seems to remind me of Kagura's 'Ryuuji no Mai' I think the english translation is 'Dance of the Dragon.' Heh, you should look for an update of my story, I personally think it sucks, but that's what happens when you're learning the trade. Heh, I wouldn't ever hate you, you are too good of an author and seem like an over-all nice person(and awesome updater, can't forget that) to ever hate you. Yes, you leave a cliff-hanger from time to time, but that's part of your rights to hooking people into the story. Personally, I am imagining Hojo being eaten by the death tree once he makes his usual approach to Kagome, and the fact he thinks he's her 'boy-friend' won't help the situation. Heh, this is starting to make me think about how Youko's going to manage to kill Kouga after he calls her 'his woman'. Yes, yes, I won't mention it again as it started bothering me when my sister told me I am over descriptive and am sick. She has no taste though... and she should feel honored I shared my story with her ungrateful person. *affects Youko attitude* I find the Youko attitude fun, though it annoys other people... ^.^ That's their problem. Though I've yet to pretend I have a spirit fox stuck in my head, I still find Youko's attitude fun. Hm, Youko just got her mad... poor Kagome. No breaks for her. And now Hojo has shown up to sign his death warrant(or not, Kurama might actually succeed in controlling him). It really depends on whether Hiei and Kuronue | Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 18:07 PST
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Hello! Hmmmm. I wanna see Hiei get mad at Kuronue. That would be funny. ^_________^ Your doing really good so far I'm looking forward to the next chappy.
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 16:07 PST
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O.O did I morally damage you with my traumitized review? NO! What if I gave you the dreaded writer's block*...... Heh, I guess I'm just not used to a day without the speedy updates you provide the faithful fanatics whom read you story. Sadly, this one happened to encounter that* while attempting to write about the half-naked Youko and Yusuke fighting each-other. But I guess the only thing that comes to mind is the story I already have up... Hm, me being so distracted last chapter, I didn't really review. Did I mention that Kuronue and Hiei's 'conversation' left me laughing? Or the witness protection agency thing/reference you had Kurama think of. Hm, let's see... I feel as if I have somehow caused you to sink into a depression or something(though I truly doubt that...), but it isn't probable as you are probably just busy and haven't had time to update yet or you are currently writing it... Ah well, the world needs people like me at times. Very rarely, but we are needed. *nods seriously than goes to read book she needs to finish by tomorrow...* ^.^;
| Title: ^^ lol
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: February 27, 2005 14:02 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Exactly, nice way to put it! lol Kuronue and Hiei in a conversation o.o i just don't know if I could see that, but Kuronue trying to get Hiei to talk to him kinda made me laugh ^_^ poor Kagome, hopefully she can get training and maybe even forget about Inuyasha's death. o.o hmm...anyways ^^; *sits and waits* now its time for my usual routine again
| Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 13:15 PST
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OOOO!!! This is so good. I love you so much. You bring tears to my eye with all the time you update this very well written story of yours. I thnk that there will be more than ten chapters left. There are all these things going on and you still haven't had Naraku come into the picture more than a few times. Update again soon.
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 12:02 PST
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Yeah, ditto! (and no, it isn't that pokemon, it's also a word!) I don't think I would either, anyway... training time! Ya~yness *smile*! I wonder if Kagome will have a hard time controlling her powers... *nerves look* maybe. The best place to train is Genkai's sense she has a really strong barrier around the shrine and Naraku can't enter unless he got one of his so-called 'friends' to help him... damn bastard... *evil glare at the said bad guy* I should murder him with my bare hands. *nerves laughs could be heard* *turns around* Don't even think of leaving! *turns to you* Anyway, please update while I go and kick some bad guy asses! *raises butter knife* Oh where oh where could Naraku be?.... *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
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