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| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 05:59 PST
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O.O Eep! Heh, I better cut out the name-calling then... I don't feel like dying today, tomorrow, or any other day this year. Hm, I had the insane idea the Kurama was going to tie her to the bed when he was 'stopping her' from going. That just shows how wrong my mind is early in the morning... Heh, I still think it would be a good idea... Yes, if Hojo is to become a boytoy, he'd have to miracoulously heal from the wounds Youko gave him, but then Youko would hunt him down again to help him 're-learn' his lesson... ^.^ Er, wait... I'm not really supposed to be happy about that... ^.^; I do feel for Yusuke, in a small insignificant way. Speaking of that, I came up with a nickname for Kurama also, unimaginatively, rose-boy. Heh, oh yes! There's a picture I think you would like thr url is http:// www.dzalpha .net/ imgs/ kuro%20 yomi%20 youko%20 kurama. jpg Okay, you know the drill, remove the spaces, ogle, fantasize, and such. On to this chapter[39]... You're really getting up there now, and it doesn't look as if it is going to end anytime soon... Er, anyways. Kuronue, my mental image of him in this chapter, just appeared to be gazing at Kagome with the slightest tinge of dread. How's Keiko going to manage to keep Kagome there? I dunno... You do, perhaps, but that's about it. Hm, Kurama and Hiei's reaction were like 'Well, so? You're friends kidnappedby a homicidal hu- NARAKU?!?!' Heh, at least, that's one way to sum it up. 'till then! ^.^
| Reviewed By: Phalon22 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 01:51 PST
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Okay I took all day to read this highly well written story. I love what you did with the character, however my interests are peaked about where the Miroku & Sango reincarnations are. Question why doesn't Koenma recruit Inuyasha? He obviously has enough power to go into Kagome's dreams? It's just a thought and I eagerly await Chapter 40! Update Soon!
| Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 23:05 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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LOL. XD I love Youko, really, I do. He has selective times to refer to himself as "I" and as "We". I, obviously, when he has done something good. And, of course, "we" when he's in trouble. I love it. :3
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 20:37 PST
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Your welcome for the browny. I forgive you. I can't believe Kagome's jealous of Keiko since she knows Keiko has Yusuke and then Youko's ego grows into a much bigger ballon *snickers*. Let's hope Keiko tells Kurama that Naraku is at the mall before the demon idiot does something wrong and ends up killing people. I'm doubting Kagura will rescue Naraku with her life, she'd rather have Naraku dead then anything else. I wouldn't be surprised, I'd rather watch Naraku suffer with Kagura any day. *smile innocently* Hmm, yes, suffering will do nicely... I'm so evil sometimes, it's scary!:-D Please update soon! Love the chapter! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 20:30 PST
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Did you know DeJaVoo accidentily reviewed your story for 'Humor Me'? I was just wondering if I should re-read my chapter again, before she re-reviewed and admitted her mistake. Or His. I dunno, but it made me feel special. Other than taht, I'm sapped of all comments, so, 'till then! And now~... um... I forgot... Heh, night!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 20:24 PST
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Ah! That was so amusing! LOL! Keiko and Kagome, both knowing the same thing, but not knowing eachother, so they were trying to pretend it was 'Shuichi' and... LOL! *cackles insanely and is soon plastered with fake ofuda* Heh, that was quite an amusing chapter. Keiko unable to get ahold of Yusuke... that means he has enrolled in the Witness Protectin Program! ^.^ Okay, so Keiko's friend is being held hostage by Naraku, Kagome is ready to purify someone, Keiko is out of breath, and most of all, I am amused. So are Hiei and Kuronue, but they are inconse-*is attacked by masses of other fangirls* X_X Okay! This one is lowly, and His Shortness and The Bat are all might and superior! *grovels, then runs from His Sh- Hiei and Kuronue, who don't like their nicknames* Er... I'll get on with the review response thingy, any more comments about this chapter will probably just be 'LOL's anyways. I don't want to wait though! I need to know! Though I highly doubt you'll divulge this information to me, I can still beg, as I dodge His Shortness ans The Bat with my amazing author powers! Ta-da! Anyways, I guess I must wait then, how cruel you are... how cruel you are... T_T Not really, but still, I'm allowed to be a 'Histronic' I believe it was. An overly dramatic person, even if the over dramaticness is purposeful. If you handed Hojo over to Naraku, Naraku would have no fun. Hojo scares too easily and is scarred for life, so there's no point in giving him too Naraku. ...*pouts at word limit*
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 20:11 PST
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NOOOOOOO!!! I stupidly indulged in my habit of reading your reviews, before suddenly remembering the fact there is another chapter I need to read! Other than that, I managed to out-wit the word limit! For once, no I did not manage to do more than 1500 words, but I managed to say at least half of what I had to say before I was cut off. Anyways, back to the subject I was on... The projects I seemed to have signed up for. Ah yes, I'm suddenly remembering why I was merely a reader, not a writer. Far too much stress for the lazy person dubbed 'Rabid'. Arg, I want to read the next chapter now... Jealous? Kagome? I'll answer the rest of your response later. My curiosity has been aroused.
| Title: Chapter...37!
Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 20:07 PST
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Yes, I'll review by chapter as I have so much to say. At least, I think I do. I knew what you were referring too with 'Naraku's Boytoy' but that was an idea that wouldn't leave... and it would be interesting. Hm, is it wrong for me to be laughing as Naraku is about to be 'arrested'. Or shoot full of holes... :D Ah, that was so amusing, I feel sorry for Kagura though, as she has to deal with him. And his whining, geez! You'd think he was possesing the body of a spoiled prince or something. Youko, is probably not pleased with the way to keep him 'under control'. Hell, I wouldn't be either, especially at waht Koenma suggested! Grr, I seem to be changing moods rather fast... Anyways! It was just the orange juice. ^.^ Okay, Koenma actually seems to be doing his job here, unlike in some others where he seems to live for the sole purpose of comedy relief. Heh... no comment... ^.^ Er, anyways, he seems serious, though Hiei, Youkos, and Kurama's conversation was highly amusing... and I'm betting my family was wondering 'What the hell is she laughing about this time??!' and ignoring me... T_T Hm, You could torture Kurama, and without knowing it to! Just think! The sensation of brushing your hair without brushing it... *dreamy sigh* Getting your hair messed with feels good, specially with long hair! ^.^ That fight scene... is slowly being imagined as I attempt to stay awake at school. Heh, but I need to deal with the over-load of projects I stupidly got myself into... I'll cut off here
| Reviewed By: [Shabopo] On: March 03, 2005 19:16 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
[wrinkles nose] I'm not overly familiar with Yu Yu Hakusho; I've never seen a picture of Koenma in non-toddler form, I'm afraid. LOL. Have you ever had the misfortune of walking into, say, Tower Records the day some major pop/teeny bopper cd comes out? The rush of psychotic, giddy thirteen year olds fighting over the cds? [shudder] ...Naraku would be doomed. Kagome jealous. I think I'd be as well if some chick I didn't know was hanging off my hypothetical boyfriend. I look forward to seeing him try to wriggle his way out of this!
| Reviewed By: DeJaVooo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 18:49 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Haha...so Kagome is jelous! so much tention there in the end of the chapter, but i bet it is only going to streghten the feelings that Kagome and Youko have for each other, right? and i guess that when Naraku finaly makes his move some one is going to suffer. i wonder....but anyway update soon!
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 18:42 PST
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what? *kiss kiss* what did you say? *grope grope* Sorry, I can't hear you over all the fun we're having!
| Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: March 03, 2005 18:15 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I was actually able to review for the last chapter, usually its the chapter afterward that I get time to review since I am not usually home yet. Hope you are able to get somene off the phone, lol...Jealousy is rising at the moment and Kurama needs to tell Kagome that Keiko is Yusuke's girlfriend. Keiko needs to start explaining what she heard about quickly before something happens and Youko needs to calm down. ^^ there's so much to do! lol anyways *sits down and waits for next chappy* ^^
| Title: ^_^ thanks
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: March 03, 2005 16:40 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks then, I'm glad you're not mad seeing as how I was not trying to get you mad or anything. I see what you are doing then, very clever indeed my friend..err..>.> anyways...i liked the part of this chapter where Hiei,Youko and Kurama were talking mentally, i cracked up laughing. At least Koenma agreed to the option Hiei gave, it makes it alittle easier. Hmm i think i will end my blabbering for now, and i shall do normal routine, Kurama says hi ^^ >.> he hasn't changed into Youko at all when I do reviews, oh wells, Ja ne for now
| Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 16:39 PST
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*Glomps Ryu* Yay!
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 15:20 PST
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Grr, the thing cut my review in half, now I have to tpye again about Naraku. He was a total idiot at the mall and I can't believe she has to put up with him. What a moron, really he is. Lord? O.o Now I've read everything but that's just plain funny. Hopefully, Kagura will get herself a nice hot coffee at StarBucks, she deserves it. Please update and love the chappie, so funny! >.< *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
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