|
| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 › » ] | Reviewed By: Person... On: February 27, 2005 10:35 PST
Comment/Review:
Hey! Awesome chapter! It was nice, ya know the part between Youko and Kagome... I still don't think Kagome would approve of him going on a heist with Kuronue... lol. Especially not after finding out he was killed on one... and if her mom found out... lol, anyways, great capter, and I can't wait to read the next one!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 00:34 PST
Comment/Review:
You're forgiven! It was a minor mistake, I just wasn't able to over-look it. Heh, now that I think of it, I just want to go to bed. Ah well, I'll review with the next chapter, and now that you've acknowledged me, I feel so happy! ^.^
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 00:10 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My day was made when I realized I could block users on ff.net from reviewing if they were being nasty. While Genkai meeting Kagome scenes are so very often cliched... I would very much like to see how she interacts with Yukina. It is uncommon for such a possible friendship to be well-developed. If I were Kagome, it would take a lot more than words to get me to stop feeling so wretched about accidentally killing the man I loved. I think that's going to be a rather solid barrier between the two of them having a physical relationship for some time.
| Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 22:56 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
..XD I had a total mental picture of myself just.. +flying+ at youko. I so would, too. Poor little sucker wouldn't be able to escape. >) And You're right, there are only so many ways she can break down crying, but Kagome does the angst thing +so+ prettily! Anyway, I might go for the shorter chapters. Maybe. But you shouldn't be anxious to read, you've no idea how well/badly I write! XD Perhaps I should include the first paragraph or so in one of my reviews. I could easily convince you I'm nothing more than an extremely ameteur writer. Hell, I'm a wannabe ameteur. o_o Anyway, uhm. Thingummy. *shiftylook, subject change*
| Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 22:50 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 22:38 PST
Comment/Review:
humm... maybe we can invite this Kuronue's mate person by the name of Kura-kun's-lovr to have some fun with us... maybe we can even have Kuronue's twin brother come over too. Just think of all the fun we can have! And we can cook up the stupid baka for dinner! I'm sure hiei would like that meal! heehee! ohw! Ice cream! We can have some fun with that too! And some hot fuge sause, and 'nuts' ^^ I know what I'm going to be dreaming about tonight! How about you? I just love my hentai mind! My friends keep forgetting that my mind is so far in the gutter because I'm always so busy with homework and almost never talk to them. But when I do they're all like, 'Oh. my. gosh. Did she just say that?!' It's so funny to watch them do that! though I'm suprised that they arn't used to me doing it by now... Maybe I'm just that hentai... hmm... well I'm running out of room to write stuff in so I'll just go and save you from reading my mindless rammble of thoughts. Talk to ya latter! Bye!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 22:22 PST
Comment/Review:
Yet... I also feel like sulking. You forgot my review... T_T Sulk, or write... sulk, or write... I'd choose write if I was in a right frame of mind but I'm not so I'll probably sulk. Maybe I've been getting too much into Youko's character lately... the arogant, attention-seeking one... You forgot me... T_T
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 22:17 PST
Comment/Review:
O.O...O.O *is traumatized* I think you missed my review... *checks again* T_T You missed my review~! That hurts... even though you did have a reference to past reviews with your 'witness protection program'... You missed my review... T_T Nothing can express my deep sorrow... and my sudden un-talkitiveness... It was a great chapter... but you missed my review... Hm, this is embarassing, but I don't think I'll make it past 500 words for once... which means I basically have nothing too say. I reviewed! How could you miss me? This will sound pathetic to me later, but for now, let me mourn the feeling of being forgotten and over-looked. I feel like poor Buyo... forgotten and stuffed in a closet somewhere... out of sight, out of mind. You forgot my review... T_T Okay! Your chapter this time was amusing, 'specially the part about the witness protection program. I still like how you are portraying Kagome, and Kuronue.... I can't think of anything else to say, other than whine some more that you forgot my review. So I'll put I'll my negative energy to work in having Youko and Yusuke seriously maim eachother! Joy, joy! Other than that, 'till next time.
| Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 20:49 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Omg angst is sexy. >) And yeah, I wouldn't pass out either. I'm freakishly hard to shock, even though I blush like a little schoolgirl at innuendo if it involves me in any way, shape or form. Hah. But with Youko, I'd probably be molesting him as soon as the first hip twitch. >) Maybe sooner. ;) Anyway.. *sighs happily* You made this chapter better than I hoped. Like I said, angst is awesome. :] Anddd.. you can read what I write when I post it. ;D I'm trying to decide if I want to have frequent, short updates, or infrequent, ridiculously long ones. @_@ Hmmmm.
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 19:48 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you know how much it makes my day when someone actually reviews? [sniffle] I mean, it's so depressing when you watch your visitor count at both here and ff.net... so you know people are reading it, but no one reviews? or that one out of every 800 does at mm.org, and one out of every 250 does at ff.net? It's incredibly distressing. I rather wonder how Hiei will react, long-term, to Kuronue's presence. I mean, Kurama is really his only friend/acquaintance/person he tolerates/ person he trusts... and now Kurama has someone that he is closer to hanging around, I could see how that might upset Hiei, even if he won't admit it to himself. 'Sides, Kuronue is playful, or so I've gotten the impression, and Hiei is not. I'm forseeing a clash of personalities going horribly wrong.
| Title: wow
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: February 26, 2005 15:26 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow is it really? my mom says I need to get more sleep so when I do she gets mad cause I sleep in ^^; she said to get the sleep! anyways awesome chapter. Hiei is right, there was a reason Kurama and Kagome were brought together and that reason is because Kurama/Kagome pairings rule...oh wait ^^ uhh I mean because...that is their fate and destiny? Umm I'll just do my thing and sit and wait for the next chapter while I go over things in my head...
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl(not logged in) On: February 26, 2005 14:49 PST
Comment/Review:
*sniff* *sniff* That's so sad. I feel bad for Kagome, will she ever get over Inu-Yasha? I know Kagome will later on but she'll need guide of love and Kurama/Youko is trying their best. Anyway, hope Kag can pull through depression, it isn't easy, espeically with a dead person you killed on your mind. It shouldn't be any problem for you to find a way to cheer Kag up. Great chapter. Please update soon! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl(not logged in) On: February 26, 2005 14:49 PST
Comment/Review:
*sniff* *sniff* That's so sad. I feel bad for Kagome, will she ever get over Inu-Yasha? I know Kagome will later on but she'll need guide of love and Kurama/Youko is trying their best. Anyway, hope Kag can pull through depression, it isn't easy, espeically with a dead person you killed on your mind. It shouldn't be any problem for you to find a way to cheer Kag up. Great chapter. Please update soon! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 14:08 PST
Comment/Review:
Kuronue's mate? Who is this mate of his? hum? Can we cook her up and eat her? Yum. fried bat!
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 13:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh... there's been a huge debate amongst people of the kagsess mailing list as to who would win if it came down to Youko vs. Sesshoumaru. Kuronue, in my opinion, is probably laughing his head off at his friend. I mean, Kurama has to deal with sharing a body, dealing with a mate who is not in anyway submissive, and Hiei, whom I adore, but is ever-so-slightly demented.
| | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 › » ] |
|
|
