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| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] | Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 22:15 PST
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Ya~y!!!!XD I'm soooo happy that I could help in a way! Usually I don't see people these days use the three kings of demon world in their stories and I think that is horrible. Maybe Hiei could spread the word in demon world and it somehow reached the kings, that would be interesting. They might be really upset about that. Anyway, I'm happy I could help you and is there a possibility that one of the characters can be reincarnated? 'Cause that happened to Kagome for Kikyo, I'm just curious 'cause I heard if your reincarnated, you have to finish a job that was left behind and continue that work. Please update!:-D *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 18:09 PST
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A fight scene between Youko and Yusuke? *drifts off into an alternate reality* Yes... they would both have to end up shirtless. Heh, I'm working on the second chapter, and suffering. The 2x4 keeps soudning more and more appealing as time wears by... I really liked how you portrayed Shuichi! It made me think of how I act like that at times, big words and all. Luckily those instances are few and far between... and I usually end up running circles in words around whatever unlucky person I come across. Enjoyable, really. I also liked how you had Kagome's mom react... it seems very realistic, as did with her kid-brother. How well Koenma and Spirit World in general react to the fact a miko they all know and adore is mated to a kitsune? A kitsune who had stolen from Spirit World, no less? Now that I think of it, maybe they should keep the shirts... but it should be raining so their clothing sticks to their bodies... Heh, that was about the fight scene. Which I suddenly want to write for the general yumminess of it... *sighs wistfully* Good health to you!
| Title: ^^
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: February 19, 2005 16:01 PST
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Your welcome for the chocolate, there's plenty more *has a bowl full out* ^^; hehe. She took it better then I thought she would and that's a good thing. Poor Yusuke, he is very much in character and that's gonna get him in trouble with Kurama if he's not careful, just like you said. Yes, poor Hiei o.o, I feel sorry for him. Now we will see Kagome's reaction to seeing Kurama right? ^^ she thinks they are both gorgeous! yay! well they are! anyways, I await the next chapter! hope its up soon...
| Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 15:47 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I was so scared you were going to hold of on introducing Kurama, when you changed scenes. XD It took all a good deal of self control to keep from scrolling down to make sure you didn't. XD *snickers* Youko is jealous of himself, and I love how incredibly vain that is. =D
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 15:39 PST
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well... no. We wouldn't want that to happen... I don't want your story to end too soon. But you always leave off at the good parts!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 13:34 PST
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Yes, he would have a hard time explaining to the hospital, what would he say? "I'm an evil, demonic hanyou from the Feudal Era and I found a time portal on holy ground which transported me here, and I was hit by a car.... got any vacancies?" Yes, he wouldn't say that, but that's all my mind can think of at the moment. You must retain your good health! Cough drops help, for me at least... I can actually stand the taste now. Okay! I was rooting Youko on with the whole, 'messily slaughter the detective if he asks any more questions then have red do clean-up'. Yes, I was. I must admit, Yusuke can be rude, crude, but he can fight. And Youko will lose all chance of killing him once he meets Kagome. I'm still wondering how in the world you keep up these updates... ah well... that's it for now! Remember, I wasn't able to find that 2x4... but Nyquil works too knock you out also. Now I have to go work on chapter two! *was knocked out before finishing chapter* Update soon!
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 22:08 PST
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Ya~y! Sorry I haven't reviewed but I'm now! Anyway, you have a big surprise for us reviewers on the final battle, ne? Good, I love good surprise. So, when will Lord Fluffy enter the picture of your story? If Naraku is going to get Kagome and the jewel... will he take over the human world? Or worse.... demon world! Ahhhhhhhh!!! *runs around in a very small room* we're all doomed! Unless... *bangs into wall* Owwie... Ugh.... *shaks head* Unless Fluffy-sama and the other three kings of Makia do something about it. Now that would be interesting to read about. The three kings of demon world wouldn't be to happy about that, no sir-ie! Good chapter, please update! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~* (If you want some info about the three kings, just ask in the review response! I'll be glad to help out!)
| Title: Awesome AGAIN
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: February 18, 2005 21:58 PST
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^_^ yay more chapters, I hate the fact that I didn't get to review for all of them each but I do really like the story and I am hooked, I am so happy you updated again though ^_^ hope you get to update soon *hands you chocolate* you deserve the chocolate for updating the story and to keep you awake and hyper? ^^ hehe anyways I hope Kagome takes the news of what exactly Youko is, pretty well and hopefully Kuwabara and Yusuke won't mess anything up ^^ new friendships though so yay!
| Reviewed By: Person... On: February 18, 2005 21:36 PST
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Hey! I abolutly loved this chapter! Although I was a little sad at the lack of Youko/Kagome interaction, I thouhgt the InuYasha/Kagome part was sweet, and definitally needed for Kagome to be able to move on! I can't wait to see the next chapter! I have to wonder though... son't you ever sleep? I appriciate the updates and all... but they come out frequently throughout teh day and night... I don't think I would be able to do that! Ja ne! ^.^
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 21:06 PST
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Wow, Arbor and I are both sick! Don't you feel special? We're both so addicted or something that we read this! At least, I'm addicted. She's stalking you and your awesomeness. Heh, this is the last random review for tonight! I swear!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 21:02 PST
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Hah! I exactly used every single character! And I said everything I wanted too say! Go me! ^.^ *sneezes and is thrown out of chair* @_@
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 21:01 PST
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Go you and your wrath! I feel better now! *has sat typing for the last hour or so listening to anime soundtracks* That is, I don't feel like knocking myself out with a blunt piece of wood... no one would help me find some anyways... In retrospect it's a good thing. That dream scene made me cry! Really cry, not just say I did. It was sad, yet sorta encouraging... T_T Poor Inuyasha! Ah yes, I updated my story, the first chapter. I know have to work on the next one... I'm beginning to wonder how in the world you update so much... Ah well, I guess I'm going to have to wait as my parents are planning on knocking me out with Niquil in four or so minutes. Knocking myself out with a blunt object isn't okay, but pills are? This world makes no sense. So this actually leaves a few options that Youko doesn't know, for the whereabouts of Naraku, he either made his malicious way to the future and rampaged while Kurama was searching him down in the past... O.O Is Shuichi going to go to the past instead of Youko? No... Shuichi wouldn't really stand a chance against Naraku... his spirit energy reserves just aren't enough to bing out the big guns Youko uses... So anyways, or he is hit by a car. *was reading you reviews earlier* Or a train, that would be amusing, but impractical to the plot. And there wouldn't be enough dramatic tension... unless you did it just right... OKay! 'nough babbling on my part, Update soon! And re-read the first chapter, I did mention major edits? Liked this chapter!! | Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 20:59 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm sorry. I would lick you apologetically, but then you'd get germs. @_@; I've been in bed, sicker than a dog for the last 30 hours. But even running a fever of 101.7, I stalk you. :O! You simply cannot get rid of me. Anyway, I found out that Hiei is actually a lot more talkative than a lot of fics imply. Or he is in the manga anyway. ..sorry, ramdomless splurts out of fevered minds. I dont remember what chapters I have and have not reviewed, so I'll just be general as possible in my response: YAY. There, I think that sums it up. ;) The fact that Youko likes her so much more than Kurama does, right now, tickles me absolutely pink.
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 20:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know... it's the only, comment dit-on, tender? picture of him I've found. for Kagome... There are those scenes when she's in modern Japan wearing those dresses... like when she's on the unwanted Hojo date? or when she's sleeping? That I thought might go well with it all. Hmm. I'm curious to see how the whole bondage (non-kinky!) Naraku's trying to pull off will work in conjunction to Youko Kurama. which leads me to the question, do we know how old Kurama is? It gets really confusing when there are two at the same time in the same time... paradoxical, gives me headaches!
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 20:41 PST
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Stupid evil Naraku! why does he have to be so mean!? Just go and kill him off already!
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