| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] |
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 18:10 PST
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*blinks* And you have just demonstrated another way for them to meet! Kill off all of Kagome's friend's with the help of a mind-manipulator, then have Hiei save her, then go to the future and meet up with Youko. Ah, I'm not really sad... I think the only time a character death would upset me is if it's in the original or just pointless. I'll call their deaths 'blood sacrifices for the plot'. I'm applauding you right now though, you didn't skip out on describing their deaths! Though that does lead me to an interesting question... what's it like to be pulled apart limb by limb? Er, no, I don't really want to know... Hm, I wonder what the traveler who goes through their next is going to think? Glad I made you hyper, now I have to go and finish stuff... that I was avoiding... Heh.
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: February 16, 2005 18:01 PST
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Yay you updated already and once again I can't wait to find out what happens. Sounds like a big confrontation, will Youko find out Hiei is knew her from the Feudal Era? guess I'll find out ^_^ wait til Kagome finds out it isn't Inuyasha (Youko is WAY better >.>) hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: Mandie On: February 16, 2005 17:30 PST
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This is a great story. I love your writings. The only other one I've read of yours though is the Circle of Souls. Others you have wrote, if any, are probably just as good. It's sad that all the Inu group had to die though, but that's understandable. You had to do what you had to do. Only thing is I hope you don't turn Youko and Kurama against Hiei. He's another one of my faves. Hopefully he will be able to tell them what happened before the event occurs. But if it doesn't happen that way I can understand, you have to do what you have to do, it's your story anyways. Who am I to complain? Anyways, I hope you update soon, which I'm not complaining about the time between updates because theres been updates everyday so far. Good luck with your work. I hope to read more soon! (-_-)>
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185(not logged in) On: February 16, 2005 17:15 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! POOR KAGOME!! YAY NOW IT CAN BE YOUKO/KAGOME/KURAMA^_^!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: phoenixs_paiste [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 16:43 PST
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MORE MORE MORE!!! I loved it, yep sad about Shippou but you did really well with that part of the story. Not vomit gore but can't stop reading and skip to the other parts good gore. By the way I think the fight sense was done very well. You lie your better at them the you say. I like how you fixed the how did she get to the well problem. Evil women Poor Hiei, he's gonna get his ass kicked around before he can tell the truth isn't he ;p From the few yyh eposiodes I've seen Kuwabara is umm... very brave and kind hearted but very dense, slow learner and the propetual comical relife for the group. I have complete faith in you being able to pass him off with out making him too OOC. You've done so well so far. HEHE Can't wait till the next chapter. HEY do you have any authors and or stories (cross overs preforably YYH IY crosses) That you can recomened. Looking for some new ones to follow well waiting for the others I read to update.
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Reviewed By: Nature's Child On: February 16, 2005 16:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful. I have read a few fan fics and I am sorry to say that most lack the quality that is flowing out of yours. You have a wonderful voice developed. I am sorry to hear about the Kurama/Kagome thing, since I happen to be quite fond on Inuyasha. Oh well. Can't have everything. Do continue.
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Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 15:10 PST
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Wow, nice chapter! It wasn't fair that they had to die...*sigh*... oh well! I get over deaths very quickly once they are done... hehe, that spell stuff must work like a charm. I wonder if Leiko can controll my idiotic brother of mine... hehe that would be totally sweet! To control ppl like that... hm that would be really cool. Anyway, I love how your mind works with Youko getting wild up about Hiei's scent on Kagome, even though it was the past Hiei, hehe. Really good. Hmm, I wonder if Naraku will try to pass through the well... so far only Inu-Yasha and Kagome can, I doubt Naraku can even pass it with out splatting on the floor of the well.... hahahahahaha!!!!!XD That would be an interesting sight! Okay, now I'm rambling on again.... UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!XD
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 14:48 PST
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NO... Hiei wouldn't do something like that! That's mean! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 14:47 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'll just assume Kagome didn't sit Inuyasha because her injuries muddled her mind. ;) Poor Shippou. ;.; I understand the need for the character deaths, but.. *sniffles sadly* on the complete opposite side of emotions here.. *demented giggle* Hiei gonna get his butt handed to him on a silver platter. =D OH! Guess what your bad plot bunnie did to me? I have the barest beginning of a YYH/IY crossover plot beginning to form. Once I've got a better idea of it, it would be good to bounce ideas around with you again, if you don't mind. :3
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Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 08:49 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Squeek! I already told you my morbid love for killing off my favourite characters, but that doesn't mean I have to look forward to it in someone else's story. XD I can't decide if I should be upset about their deaths, or eager for Kags to go home and meet Kurama. I'm so, so pushing my time limit here, I need to be at work in like.. 15 minutes and I'm not at all redy. See what your story does to me? XD *waggles finger* Bad, baaaad addictive stories. Bad! o_o.
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Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 08:42 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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And you said you disliked writing battle scenes. Silly goof. You write them just fine. You did use the word deflect two sentances in a row I think, but thats the only thing I noticed. *cheers* I love Hiei when he keeps things from Kurama with the sole intent on being irritating. Ehm. o_o The total lack of sleep has ruined any and all abilities to write good sentance structure, for me. Eeks. XD
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Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 08:30 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aiee! My father forgot to pay the phone bill, and our phone company is.. full of imbeciles. They said they fixed it, but really they didn't. *twitches* Must... finish other updates before going to work. XD Oh! I noticed: The girl's open and friendly nature would easily be here downfall if she wasn't careful. 'here'. I dont know if you want to fix that or not, but I thought I should point it out. I love how you did Hiei, by the way. =3
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185(not logged in) On: February 16, 2005 04:11 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the great story!!
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Reviewed By: phoenixs_paiste [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 00:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MMMM...By the way I found a picker of Kouronue (SP RIGHT??) and I have to say yes not at all guilty about drooling. Yes, They really need to stop making the umm...cold, evil, not nice demons so damned hot! They have gotta give a girl a brake once in a while. I love the story. I'm really loving the depth your giving to each character. Especially to Youko. I have to agree with you on the way he has to really feel about his situation. Thought I'm sad to say I love they way you've added depth to Inu Yasha allmost makes me not want to see thier love ended. I have to say GOOD your finally getting to that part in the story. Though I love the depth and set up, I'M DIEING HERE to see the meeting between Kurama and Kagome!! I don't wanna see Shippou suffer thought. That would be so sad Anyway can't wait till the next chapter.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 23:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome ^_^ I love your story and I hope you get to update it soon. I was looking through and I saw and I am already hooked on it ^^; I plan on reading your other fics too. Can't wait for the next chapter ^^
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