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| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 20:19 PST
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Hm... I'm feeling forgiving right now so I won't murder it, referring to the limit on my babbling per review. Hm, I should get moving on the fight between Youko and Yusuke... and indulge shamelessly in my sudden desire to see Youko tie someone up. I think your earlier statement about us being demented individuals is proved. Heh, the world's more interesting with people like us in it anyways. Thus, we should continue acting this way and spice up everyone's lives. *nods seriously* Back on to the Youko 'throwing her against a wall' and such, I think he'd only do it if he was at the point where he couldn't take it anymore, and has decided to give up all pretense of a graceful dance of seduction, weaving it about her senses. Nope, just overwhelm her with sheer sexiness, and thus, appease himself. Heh, that's an odd subject to ramble on about... was it me or did Koenma seem a little grudging to bring back their souls? Especially after looking in on their passionate love-making in the shade of a tall, beautiful tree. I think I'm waxing poetic... no problem there! ^-^ Hm... I guess 'tis time to read 'On the Night of the Blood Red Moon'... 'till next time my friend! *glomps thee for updating so quickly*
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 20:11 PST
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*wide eyes* His Shortness is a shameless pervert. I have the oddest idea death is going to be visiting me soon... I'll update before I die though! ^-^ Yes, we are a couple of odd ones, but really... do you think he would be able to restrain himself around her, especially as he probably wouldn't have had any? Ugh... now I'm getting disturbed. And I'm sure Kurama has a few seeds with my name on them... That was an interesting way to deal with it, I should have thought of it though, as they did place Yusuke's soul back into his body. Yes, they did... but would the jewel really want to let her go that easily? I take it were entering the final stage of this fic, the aftermath. Naraku 'tis dead, Kagome's lost her virginity to Youko, willingly, and Yusuke needs to be taught a lesson. Yes, I envision him as a romancer to... *dreamy sigh* Hiei still is a shameless pervert. Though it was amusing when Koenma looked in the mirror... *can see his expression in her mind* Yeah! You didn't kill Kuronue! *cheers* Interesting as it is, it would be pretty depressing. Okay very depressing. Not to mention the fact you'd have Kuronue lovers chewing your ears, legs, arms, and any other body-part they can get ahold of off. Not that I would, I'd just indulge in this overly emotional side I've suddenly realized existed and cried, or laughed... er, or did nothing at all. Heh, I wrote a short one-shot about Kurama's midnight craving, take that anyway you wish, if you'd like to read it. I like it. dumb w | Reviewed By: phalon22 (not signed in) On: March 29, 2005 19:19 PST
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Great chapter!!! Interesing little goings on. Please let Youko kick Urameshi's butt for earlier chapters. Cuz that would be great! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Jade Catzeye On: March 29, 2005 19:00 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. You've got a good plot going and its well written. And i must commend you on updating regularly, something that I can't seem to do for the life of me. Keep it up! ;)
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 14:39 PST
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Please update soon! I want kagome to come back! Though I am happy that we finally got a lemon in this story!
| Reviewed By: SIT! On: March 29, 2005 14:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do enjoy your writing style. It actually gets to the person telling them the emotions of the charicters. MyMom is calling me so, goodbye.
| Reviewed By: Miko Of Avalon On: March 28, 2005 21:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How can you just stop there? It was going great.When the site returns from hiatus, I want you to check out this site called A Single Spark. It has nothing butSesshoumaru/Kagome fanfiction in it...I'm an author by the name of *~*Stylized_Silver_Miko*~*.....I'vejust started a story called 'My Give A Damn's Busted';, you should go! Please PLEASE update soon. I'll be watching this fic.....you led me off guard when the story said it was completed...
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 13:36 PST
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is wrong with him? Maybe, some sort of glitch occured when he was 'revived.' O.O What if it was only temporary, for the duration of Naraku's stay, that he would be alive? O.O What if Koenma plans to kill him again, or 'put his soul to rest', now that his purpose is served? Though, my mind could be jumping to conclusions... I hope I'm jumping to conclusions. Actually, that wouldn't be that bad of a side-plot, as it would wrack Kurama up with grief, having just seen Kagome die, then having to see Kuronue die.. again. Then! Then... *bawls* Okay, it would be an interesting side-plot, but I feel sorry for poor Kuronue now... I'm going to read your other story now... T_T Ah well, 'till next time.
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 13:29 PST
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*bites word limit* I lost my place. *kicks word limit* Okay! What if Koenma took the jewel, didn't extract Kagome's soul, and put it in the vault? Youko would steal it back, but what if he was stuck in the mirror... how are they going to get the jewel out of the mirror? O.O and what if the jewel was unable to leave the mirror, but Youko was taken out, and Kagome was all alone in the mirror? And then the mirror was taken to the Reikai vault, and specifically safe-guarded against silver kitsune? ...*begins ranting out-loud, scaring the others in house and making her brain hurt even more* Ugh... I guess que sera sera will have to apply in this case. I have no clue what's going to happen, but I will just have to wait. And stop thinking about it. Though I have always wondered if I could clutter up a whole review page with meaningful stuff... nah. Anyways, I bet Youko didn't like that, and I think Yusuke just dug his grave a bit deeper. Youko still needs to deal with him for telling Koenma against his wishes. I can see them gallivanting around... just stick them in my story with Kuronue, then they can all have fun! ^.~ Speaking of Kuronue, I wonder how Youko will approach him about the mishap of letting Kagome escape. Now my mind is conjuring scenes.. which are impossible due to the fact Youko has a mate... I wrote had... er, 'has' a mate already. Though Youko is right, Kuronue is sliping if he wasn't able to catch Kagome. Hm... is this a side-plot I smell? Perhaps something | Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 13:19 PST
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*sniffs* You made me cry with the first part... It wazs so emotional! Ugh... anyways, a very good chapter. Two spirits making love... it sounds romantic! It does though, and it is feasible. It's your fic... I'm trying to recall why it's feasible... anyways! Once again, my fast-updating friend, you surprise me. I would never have guessed the you were going to put Kagome's soul in the mirror, through the jewel, then have both her and Youko proceed to have a passionate 'consumation' of their bond. Though I may have thought of it if I had meditated upon your story for an hour or so... ^-^ If reviewers were too rip out your liver, I wouldn't help... but they would probably go after me too for all those unintentional cliffhangers... heh. I finally remembered what I thought Youko might do, 'necrophilia'. Yes, it took me a while, but I recalled the word and scared people half to death by standing up and shouting it. Yes, yes. Though I think my version is... what if Youko is reincarnated into a human's body? O.O Er... wait... what if his soul is reattached to Shuichi's body, but Kagome is reincarnated? O.O Wouldn't that make him a paeodophile? O.O My mind is disturbing me today. Okay, now on a different subject... or maybe just another branch of the same subject... The jewel, it has Kagome's soul insode of it... while it actually want to give it up? After all, her soul does contain power, and id very large. Then again, what if Koenma decides to take the jewel into custody, or put it i | Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 12:18 PST
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*meditating to keep from attacking author* Great chappie, BUT....I really hope you have a good reason for killing off Kagome or my evil little lawn gnomes of doom will eat your toes. Just kidding! I'm actually scared to death of lawn gnomes! ^_^ I know you have a good reason for killing her and I wait anxiously for the next chappie...Ciao!
| Reviewed By: [Shabopo] On: March 28, 2005 00:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hnnnn a few things... I was 99% positive Kanna's mirror could only take Human souls. Else Naraku would have had her try to take Inu-Yasha's, or Shippou's, or Kirara's... Oh well. Hm. The question I think is in whether you portray the Shikon no Tama as sentient or not. If it is- it could bring her back, or at least keep her soul until her body is repaired, and after which it could be returned- we know, thanks to the scene where Urasue re-creates Kikyou, that all it needs is an appropriate vessel of a person who previously owned the soul to animate said vessel. Just a thought. Koenma- keh, he'd get off his butt and help the day Hiei volunteered at a human day care center. I so appreciate you putting markers so I can skip the lemon- it's very considerate; I just wanted to make sure you knew that it is effort that is not wasted. I look forward to seeing how you resolve things.
| Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 22:11 PST
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OoO I would murder you but I need your stories.
| Reviewed By: Fogkit On: March 27, 2005 19:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay you continued the story just keeps getting better. hope you continue soon can't wait to see what your going to do with Kagome's death
| Reviewed By: DeJaVooo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 19:20 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Muhahaha! ...and she is dead!? Wonder if she will be revived and offered a job by Koenma, (that how it goes in some stories) ah. but what ever it is i nkow it wil be good ;)
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