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| "Tales from the House of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 509 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 › » ] | Reviewed By: InuSaga (NSI) On: February 18, 2006 08:45 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reading this reminds me of eating an entire jumbo sized bag of semi-sweet chocolate chips in one sitting. It was bittersweet and almost made me sick sometimes, but so good that I couldn't stop. You made me cry at the end, something that very rarely happens to me. I've cried over something I've read four times, and two of them happened in this story. I really enjoyed reading this, you made me see Sesshomaru in a new light, and Kagome was awesome. I'm glad they got to be together in the end. Thank you so much for writing this, and especially for finishing it. I feel liberated, so I can only imagine how you feel. Congratulations.
| Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 08:06 PST
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this fanfic makes all others just....found wanting. its worth it tho. love everything about it, thatnks for writing it.
| Title: You are the BEST!
Reviewed By: tsukihime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 09:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Resmiranda, How can one aspire to write a review for something so beautiful and not sink into incoherent stuttering along the lines "Your are the best! It is so good I have no words etc.?" I guess, no one can! I only wish, I would not turn into a silly fangirl but I think it is too late for that. So here are my disjointed rambles on the subject of ch.35-38 of HotM… These "next to last" chapters were simply brilliant - sad and funny, they left me in deep owe of the time/effort it probably took to make it work. They were everything I wished for, and even more then that. 400 years of agony and hope… How can this be described on one page? Alas, you did it! And masterfully so! I so much admire the unique style of your writing -the choice of words and expressions, the emphasis on thoughts and feelings and colorful, vibrant descriptions you give to both, almost forcing the reader to re-live and re-experience the events in a story!!! I could see Kagome, tired and beaten, searching with desperation through the shrines' book… I could feel her fear and hope of finding Sesshoumaru sealed for centuries... And that wonderful easiness with which you create atmosphere of your story! Your characters are more complete and alive then their manga/anime prototypes. I think my perception of Sesshoumaru has totally and irreversibly changed after reading House of the Moon… You really made me a fan of Kagome/Sess pairing - and now it is impossible for me to even imagine it being otherwise… I love the way you avoid clichés even when it seems unavoidable and make things more realistic and believable. So many would suspect that, after finding Sesshomaru, Kagome would leap into his embrace… It would be the easiest and most probable course of events and because of that, uninteresting and plain. You let your characters be themselves, with all imperfections and it made them real!!! Whatever the end of the story will be - I'm sure it'll be great, either they'll live happily ever after or die trying… you'll make it the only logical end possible. Thank you so much for being such a wonderful writer - don't you ever let self-doubts tell you otherwise!!! I kneel in front of the shrine of your talent and praise you, oh the Goddess!!!
| Title: Chapter 37
Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 12:52 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for not having Kagome fall because her feet were tangled in her underpants. Thank you for the many lemony pages. I almost had to wake up my husband. Almost. Finally in re your AN about the reconstruction of shrines: Seeing as how the Bone Eaters well remained intact, I think it is reasonable that the area of Sesshoumaru's sealing could have also remained intact. You worry too much.
| Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 16:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is, by far, the best fanfic I have ever read. So full of angst...melencholia--you actually go through the moodswings with Kagome and Sesshoumaru! If this isn't the end, update soon, please!
| Title: your #1
Reviewed By: lovely liz On: February 13, 2006 13:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was the first story in this site i read. i love the pairings and the way you write in ever chapter. i am so glad you added more chapters and cant wait for the next chapeter to see what happen next. your story pulls me in and i feel like i am in it your the best i jest love this story in tell next time.
| Title: ~`^-^`~
Reviewed By: go you! On: February 10, 2006 17:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing style! People like you are what makes reading fanfictions fun. You can make even this overused pairing seem original and entertaining at the same time. BRAVO!!
| Title: yay
Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 23:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In my opinion this is the best fanfic on this site. I read it, i burst into tears when Sesshy gets sealed, everytime.
| Reviewed By: notausedname On: February 07, 2006 21:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have never, in my life, read such a captivatingly well-written story. which is only sixteen years, but...yeah... anyway, it took me forever to finish reading this fic (my dad thinks i'm looking up porn or something. i'm not, i say! only lemony goodness--which is completely different.) but that's how i like it. long chapters that make me live and think and cry-YES CRY-so much that i feel as if the emotions that aren't even trully real will overwhelm me. or make me procrastinate on all of my homework. either one works. OKAY, i have a point, REALLY. my point is, that i have been avidly reading fanfiction for at least three years now, and reading any and all novels that i could get my hands on before then. i have probably on written a grand total of three reviews in all this time. i know my opinion on your style isn't a divine gift from the gods, but i hope that it inspires you to keep writing as well as you do. i thank you for sharing your talent with so many people, without asking anything in return except some feedback. in all truthfullness, i can't really critique this story in a negative way. i don't think i even saw a misspelling. wow. well, enough of my rambling. i'm being way too serious and sane for a person at twelve PM with three hours of homework to do. so i bid you adieu(chao, adios, sayoonara), and patiently await your next work, so that i may send you another pointless review to laugh at.
| Title: Your worse nightmare
Reviewed By: Goddess of Death and Chaos On: February 07, 2006 21:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: freeflowers On: February 05, 2006 14:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read the new chapters, I burst into tears, this is the most amazing fanfic on this site. Its beautiful *cries more*
| Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 20:21 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~RES-O-VERSE~ I laughed so hard, which I needed to after writing that huge kickmyasswhydidIgotograduateschool paper. I think this is my favorite chapter and it is not for the smut. *shifty eyes* I actually love how you portrayed Sesshoumaru! This was great. I can totally imagine him like this. Counting the seconds was a nice touch. I can imagine his OCD kicking in and him keeping track of it. The village idiot scene was a hoot! You really have the ability to get inside peoples heads. The emotions you portrayed him feeling were indescribable. I felt like I was right there feeling the same way he did, especially when he feels her for the first time. The anxiety, anguish, anger and then anticipation (yes, today my special letter is A) were incredible! He waited so long for her to come to him, he passed out from exhaustion. This was such a great plot bunny because she thinks he is dead and he thinks she is a dream. I love the way you have them discover one another. I still can't believe what a tight ass he is. I mean you portray him to the very end and that is great. Hello fluffy boy naked chick in front of you don't think about that stuff. Then again that was the greatest line. Thank you, I loved it. I would love to just leave you one of those reviews that knocks you over, but I suck with words. That's why I am a science geek, but you have defiantly knocked me over.
| Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 19:42 PST
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"What are you doing here?" ~Oh, what a line. I wouldn't know what to say to that. It is one of those do I scream, punch him, or cry! I loved it. The beginning was comical with Kagome in stealth mode, well delirious stealth mode. You really did a great job with this chapter, I felt like I was riding the emotional rollercoaster with her. Thanks. I have really enjoyed reading your work.
| Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Jules89 On: February 03, 2006 22:41 PST
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I am simply Amazed at how wonderful it was to read your new chapters,words cannot describe it...OMG! I love this fanfic! keep up the Great work!
| Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Spirit-Wolf25 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 20:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...my. What more can I say? This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read, and I'm not just saying that. You have a way of writing...let me put it this way: You like to draw out the tension, and, just when it gets frustrating, you launch me straight into the story without a way back. And I abolutely love you for it. I cannot wait until the next, last, chapter. Truthfully, I have to say that I'll be sad that the fic is over, but I'm sure I will most definitely not be disappointed in the ending.
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