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| "Tales from the House of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 509 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] | Title: WOW!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Jackialioncourt On: February 01, 2006 15:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANKS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR UPDATING!!!!!!!! IT WAS WORTH THE WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!! 3 CHAPTERS!!!!!!!! THANKS!!!!!!!!! IT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!! I CANNOT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPPENS NEXT!!!! BEAUTIFUL WRIITING!!!!!!!!
| Title: *awestruck*
Reviewed By: haleos18 On: February 01, 2006 15:20 PST
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Hang on, I need to regain my ability to think. ......That was beautiful. Normally, I don't like the part where Kagome and whoever finally get together, but you made everything so believable and miraculous, that I had to read the chapter twice because once just wasn't enough. I like how you remember their characters throughout everything, even throughout the lemon. It was beautiful the way Sesshomaru decided to live forever in their moment together - just beautiflu. Let me tell you, my rating of this story is 11 out of 10. No, make that 100 out of 10. This is by far, the best story I have ever read on this site. I love how you've captured every moment and made it so real. Thank you so much for sharing this amazing, heartbreaking, tearjerking, fabulous story with us.
| Title: Yes! YES!!!! an Update!
Reviewed By: badkitty0404 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 15:14 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so good and so worth the wait. I was in tears when she was pulling up the floor in the shrine. The description of how he felt and thought over the centuries was so perfect and so real. Then we finally get a lemon and it was soooooo worth the wait. Truely this is the best fic I have ever read and can't wait for another chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. What has happend to Myouga and the House of the Moon? Will Sess get his swords back and will he be able to blend in human society. Will Kagome be caught for destroying the shrine? Will we find out what happend to Youkai? So many many questions I can hardly wait to find the answers to. Update again soon
| Title: *dies of happiness*
Reviewed By: Adria (aka Iggy Lovechild) On: February 01, 2006 15:02 PST
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You've heard it a million times from me. Guess what: Here it comes again. This story is amazing. Every time I read a new chapter I'm reminded how brillaint it is. In fact every time I see that there is an update, I kinda forget to breath and all other things that I might have done with my limited online time is flung aside. You make me remember why I love this pairing in the first place. Thank you thank you thank you thank you and as always I wait for the next chapter with much eagerness and paitence.
| Reviewed By: Hahathatsfunny13 On: February 01, 2006 12:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm in tears right now. This was so beautifully written and a joy to read. Yes, Kagome's life is but a moment to Sesshomaru, so he lives in that moment. This is perfect and was well worth waiting for.
| Reviewed By: InuSaga (NSI) On: February 01, 2006 11:55 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, if anyone asks, I didn't violate my own principals by reviewing a WIP before it was over. I ask myself, does Res want me to give her my honest opinion or does she want me to scrutinize her story to find some point I can honestly critique? Sorry, Res, I can't find anything. You managed to write a Sess/Kag pairing that was not only canon it was believable. I read the lemon and didn't hit the back button. It was well written, it was funny, and it was very sweet. I can't criticise anything. I hate WIP and dislike Sess/Kag pairings, as I've said, but you got me. Good job. One request: I would love to see Kag tell Sess he has stupid, stupid pretty hair, for his reaction alone. Again, good work. ~_^
| Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL (not signed in) On: February 01, 2006 11:48 PST
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I agree with everyone else; this story was very well worth waiting for. Seeing those notices in my inbox made my day. Thank you, a thousand times over.
| Reviewed By: Inusbabe at work On: February 01, 2006 11:33 PST
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OHHH yes the long awaited chapters are here. Hopefully you are feeling better, and we can have more soon
| Title: Tales From The House Of The Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 09:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
| Title: Ch 35-37
Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 08:57 PST
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That was wonderful. Of course, that's the understatement of ... like... forever, but my mind is still reeling from their mutual release! Ahhh very much worth the wait, and I'm sure Sesshoumaru thinks so too! I need a cigarette, and I don't smoke! XD I loved how Kagome busted his ass out of purgatory and he repaid her with one of his snide remarks.... and she freaked. Haha! And being sealed up and horny.. I dunno.. I think that's the worst punishment of all! Couldn't even move to scratch his balls. Oh yes my dear... much fan art to be had from this one! Oh yes... I can see it now! But I think it'll end up being an "Extra" on Y!Gallery because it's gonna be too hot for DA! Wooooo! Oh well maybe I'll tone it down, but where's the fun in that? ^__~ Well, I'll be looking forward to that update! In the meantime, I will be catching up with the colouring of fan art from previous chapters and making new stuff..... and enjoying all of the new artistic submissions from your devoted fans! Oh how exciting! And inucest? Ho ho ho!!! I have my reputation to think about, but I'll see what I can do from here! Hey, sorry about the rambling review.. but not really. Love ya, dollface!
| Title: Wowee
Reviewed By: darkjewel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 08:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was worth the wait. Wowee! You are hands down my favorite fanfic writer, I loved Fugue and I loved this story. You have a style that can make me laugh and clutch at my chest at the same time. Also, Schrodinger's Sesshomaru? Can I use that in my signature? I just about fell off of my chair. Again, an epic that should be read by any serious fan of fanfiction, and an inspiration to me to keep trying to get my own beast to be even a vague shadow of your work. Hugs!
| Title: Chapter 37
Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 07:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for the MOST wonderful, thrilling roller-coaster ride of a fic that I've read in .... well .... the whole time I've been reading fics! Most of all, thank you for that LONG awaited lemon. And what a LEMON! You captured their thoughts (or what one would imagine thier thoughts to be under those circumstances) perfectly. It was simply a stunning piece of writing, with me on the edge of my chair the entire time. I LOVE your writing, and seriously hope to either see more of it here, or be reading you in print one of these days!! Congratulations on a job EXTREMELY well done! Wiccan :)
| Reviewed By: chibirin8 (not logged in) On: February 01, 2006 00:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story it took awhile to read but it was wroth it. I hope sesshomaru doesn't stay sealed like that. he is my fav. I don't want to see him like that, thats sad. well I cant wait to see how you will end it.
| Reviewed By: VelvetNight [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 09:37 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! Definitely one of the best stories I've ever read! I recently heard about this fic from someone (I don't remember who) and I said to myself that I have to read it. It took me a week, but I did it and now I absolutely must review. I'm not a huge fan of Sess/Kag stories, but hands down, this one tops them all. THey seem so natural yet so unnatural together. And I especially loved how Sesshoumaru stayed in character. In most of the Sess/Kag stories I've read, Sesshoumaru's character changes and it's almost as if the previous character (the one that Rumiko Takahashi created) disappears; however, in your story, his essence remains the same, but you gave him such subtle developments that we can see that Kagome is changing him little by little. Mad props to you!! The plot twist in Chapter 34 was totally unexpected. Kagome as the Madoushi...wow...did not see that one coming...yet it makes total sense that you would do that. I soo can't wait to find out what happens in the chapters to come. Your writing style flows like buttermilk and I find myself completely captivated by your words, amazing! I especially love your sense of time. Narrative pace in this story was impeccable as well as the time loopholes within the text. The fact that Kagome was able to go back into the past, but only in a specific time period and only to complete a specific task, as well as when she does go back to the past...the time intervals seem to shorten. I must say that you have definitely raised the bar for fanfiction!
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Paintedbutterfly On: January 22, 2006 19:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best fan fictions I have read in a long time. I would never have imagined I would like Sess/Kag together, but the way you put them together just made it fit. This is the type of story where you have to force yourself to stop reading so you can go to bed and work/or school in the morning! Greatly looking forward to last chapters.
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