| "Tales from the House of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 509 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blackat On: March 29, 2005 19:52 PST
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If i may y not make it a threesome?
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Title: WHOA
Reviewed By: DAMN GURL On: March 29, 2005 15:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't believe how damn well you write. i luv the storyline of this story. no acutally i luv practically everything about this story: characterization, correct usage of grammar, HUMOR! i luv how u didnt rush into the kagome n sess relationship. but i really wish they'd have sex sooner or later. please keep writing! even though pple dont write as much reviews as this story deserves, they still read em, im sure! write more write more!!! currently, ur stories are the only things that give pleasure to me in my life. lol. i l luv u!!
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: xXxMriokuisMinexXx On: March 25, 2005 21:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it...At points I felt like I was reading a novel instead of fanfiction. I hardly ever see fanfiction this well written...The only thing about it is sometimes* you flashback and the style in which you do it makes it hard, for one to keep their place. This is only a few times though and it still quite readable. I haven't happened upon a singal gramatical error, either! I think that alone adds a sophistication to the story. I love your use of figurative language. Stories are just so much more real with it. Also I like how you make it so everything isn't perfect, and that love isn't formed so quickly, it makes me more emotionally attached to the story. So please do keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Foxflame [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 12:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am onli up to chapter 7 at the moment lol, for i jus found this story the other day....but i jus cant wait till i finish to review!! i must now....i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeee it soo mcuh....the way you have portrayed the characters, esp. sessie, whos broken spirit is acted out so well, and Kags as well. You made them come alive and so well thought out that it is almost as if they are true people who truely are so down....the info yu provided into their minds is astounding...how can you explain things so well? lol....well i shall update more as i get a little farther on, but for now, NEVER STOP WRITING -fox
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Reviewed By: kittyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 16:29 PST
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wow.....ok so im not usually a sess/kag fan but i am really fond of this story. the problem i usualy have is the bashing of inuyasha, which i think is unfair, but i dont mind so much that he died in a human way. i like that you dont really mention him a lot. i also like that your not just making sess fall madly in love with kagome, but keeping him in character. and i love! that youve made sess so internally sarcastic and witty, esp. the exchanges between kag and sess. well i really hope you continue this story, and im sad that you dont have more reviews because you deserve them. :)
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Title: STILL WAITING
Reviewed By: twiddledee lazy not signed in On: March 23, 2005 17:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I am sure everyone is biting their lips waiting for the first kiss. Umm any hint as to when that will happen? No! (Damn) Well as long as mt plastic surgeon keeps my coll.injections handy I'll keep biting. Thank Gods for the beauty of medical science. HAHA Keep it up!!!!
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 07:27 PST
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Yes! anoter chapter! I LOVELOVELOVE this storey. ^_^ I hope to see another chapter up soon!
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Reviewed By: LoriUWolfGirl-not signed in [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 22:11 PST
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As catching as ever. Your fanfic just keeps getting better and better. I love how you ended this chapter, it gives a new meaning to 'Love is Blind', well, I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: March 18, 2005 21:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update again soon ok?
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Reviewed By: pixieme On: March 18, 2005 14:48 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just keeps getting better and better ^___^ Love it! Good work!
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 14:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I am sure a lot of people (including me) wanted Fluffy to just give in and take Kagome in his arms and tell her he missed her, but let's face it, it is not that easy. Fluffy has a lot of responsibility and so does Kagome. Besides it will only make it that much better if they ever do get together! As always your writing style and descriptive language enhance your story. You make sure every detail is in place. It is excellent, very polished writing and highly enjoyable. Thank you for such a wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: March 18, 2005 09:40 PST
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Wow. Simply amazing. Everything you write is so beautifully shaped and just calculated down to the last syllable. It's breath taking, to say the least. The servents behavior is quite amusing, as if the rest of the story. I was desperatly hoping that Sesshoumaru would give into his desires and maybe kiss or simply hold Kagome at the end-- but what you did was lovely. It left me wanting more, as always. I hope that you continue this magnificent work and I cannot wait to read on further. Great job! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: mariann On: March 14, 2005 12:58 PST
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WHAT THE HELL!? is it all ready done? damn there chould have been some more chapters. love the story btw.
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Title: Tales From The House Of The Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 15:29 PST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: number 30
Reviewed By: asiancherries [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 09:08 PST
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more people should have reviewed this, but i'm happy to be the 30th. i'm addicted to this, and your writing. you know these characters, almost like they're your next door neighbors and you peek out the window and watch them fight on the lawn. the story, the characters, the language that you use, and the epic themes behind it all...well, lets just say you should go out and buy yourself a pedestal that says "the best frikken fan-fic writer in the world" and then sit upon it and laugh at everyone below. you have made Sesshomaru, the ruthless murdering demon, endearing, and yet still ruthless and murdering. you succeed where others (myself included) can only hope to try. i read this and i want to delete everything i've ever written and start over, because i want to reach that high standard you swing about in. groveling aside, this is one great fic, and more people should be reading it. go poke people for not reviewing. i am patiently anticipating what the ensuing chapters will bring.
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