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Title: wow
Reviewed By: tessiefanfic(not signed in) On: September 30, 2005 10:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow..that was amazing. the way you wrote it was perfect...not only did you not make her enjoy it... u made it so that is was beautiful...am i making sense? what i mean is, that other writers forget what has happened and she is not bothered by the memoires..however you did not do it that way..i'm amazed at how you wrote this chapter..it blew me away...i hope this don't offend you..i couldn't think of how to put it...you made this chapter perfect...btw..I'M SO GLAD YOUR WRITING AGAIN!! till the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Tesmoname On: September 29, 2005 23:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the greatest chapters I have read in the story! Not just because it was super eventful (and full of dark fluff-as well as not so fluffy things...) but also because of the amount of detail, the lengths you went to get across the pain that Hiei is feeling.. that you stressed this tension out (perfectely might I add) has definitely alerted all readers to an approcing event that will have a big effect on the fic. I love it-already I find myself pouting at the non-existant link to the next chapter! However, despite my bitching, know that I appreciate (as well as everyone else I am sure) your continuous updating habits. You are a dedicated author, bursting with creative ideas, and it shows in your work. This is my favorite fic, out of all of yours (all are great) and it is my belief that this is one of the greatest psych/angst/dark/fluff fics out there. I eagerly await the next addition to this fic!
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Reviewed By: Neko_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 23:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, I read it before when it was only a couple chapters long, i just about died when there wasn't a conclusion... Now I found it again and have read it again, only to have no conclusion, If only I could have found it after you had posted the time when Hiei gets to be intimate with Kagome, even if it wasn't the end of the story. I would have at least survived, but now... i can feel my spirit leaving my body. Please update soon!
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Title: On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Sithathoryunet On: September 23, 2005 22:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall a 10. It was nice to see Kouga again. As for the lemon, I was half expecting Mazakasu to show up. It's going to be interesting to see where this goes. And please don't let that one person discourage you from writing. Your stories are wonderful and it is obvious you have plenty of followers who love your work. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (nsi) On: September 23, 2005 17:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do i get the feeling that the next chapter will be the climax of this whole heat thing. Good work and keep it commin, Pwease an Tank ou... ^_~
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Title: On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 15:31 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: starwind327 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 14:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waiting eagerly for next chapter!
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Title: cont'd
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 12:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
P.S. plz contine to update a.s.a.p!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 12:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that is dark and u know what, i like it, notice i say like? not luv? anyways, when will hiei and kagome get da hell away from where they are now? and r u going to make a hiei and kagome lemons soon? yes i met LEMONS
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Reviewed By: kccranfield On: September 22, 2005 15:59 EDT
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Just want to say that I love your story. I am one of the people that twiddles my thumbs waiting for each new chapter. Please keep up the good work and don't let others negativity influence your writing.
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Reviewed By: gcdv (nli) On: September 21, 2005 22:01 EDT
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that was a very interestibg chapter, atleast hiei isn't suffering anymore... i think...?
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Reviewed By: MidnightRain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 20:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the last few chapters, they are awesome. Things are getting more and more interesting with each chapter and I can't to read more. You do a really great job with the plot and the characters. Keep up the good work!!!
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Title: On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 18:23 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Soleius On: September 21, 2005 03:34 EDT
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I've tried to read this more than once, thinking maybe it was just a bad day or some other reason was preventing me from getting into it. But after repeated attempts, I realize that I was wrong. The blatant use of shock-factor violence over and over manage to detract from the story so much that it comes off as flat and contrived. I feel that you could have accomplished the "vision" I imagine you had for this as a darker piece without the unnecessary repetition of what you perceive to be gory and violent. Yes, rape can be dark, but you're not succeeding in portraying it appropriately. You're lessening the impact by revisiting the same scenes with slight variations. This isn't creativity or originality. This is coming across as a very young and very naive person attempting to be creative and original, deep and dark by slapping together every "horrible" or "atrocious" thing they can think of. You need to learn how to guide your audience to draw the picture for themselves. This way is not interesting. A single, stark description of violence in a scene intrinsically affects the reader far more than an overload of forced descriptions. A smell, a sensation, a sight... one thing. And THAT will haunt the reader.
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Reviewed By: reimei-kage (not logged in) On: September 21, 2005 00:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I absolutely loved it, especially since not many people think of Hiei as the masturbating type. This chapter was amazing, I'm so happy that Hiei and Kagome kissed! Oh, I practically died when I saw that! Please update soon. -rei
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