| "On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 441 ] |
| Pages (30): [ « ‹ 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 › » ] |
Title: my mermiad haten' chicken says hi... bye
Reviewed By: gcdv (nli) On: August 10, 2005 21:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
WOW! I REALLY LIKE IT. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOO!
|
Reviewed By: reimei-kage (not logged in) On: August 10, 2005 04:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'd say more please but that's being redundant (Quote of last review: Two words: MORE PLEASE!) so instead I'll say this: I frickin' love you. Please update as soon as you can. (Hiei/Kag, Hiei/Kag, Hiei/Kag! *dies*)
|
Reviewed By: SilverRyu On: August 09, 2005 16:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter even though it kind of confused me a little. I guess there are friends in unexpected places for Hiei and Kagome. Hope you update soon.
|
Reviewed By: reimei-kage (not logged in) On: August 08, 2005 18:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Two words: MORE PLEASE!!
|
Reviewed By: kiwi93089 ((not signed in)) On: August 07, 2005 02:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story i can't wait to read more please continue soon!
|
Reviewed By: Elemental_Tenshi_Youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 23:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write some of the best stories that I have ever read! They're very descriptive and I'm very happy I like anything from horror stories to romance... I really hope you update soon!
|
Title: my mermiad haten' chicken says hi... bye
Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 19:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story, please update really soon. ASAP! I really like this chapter. I totally was off, I never thought that that kind of twist would happen. Anymore, because if there are then bring em' on because it just makes the story that much more interesting. Please hurry, Im not o patient of a person, but I am goofy...LOL
|
Title: gore
Reviewed By: black tigeress On: August 06, 2005 15:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can understand how the gore and vivid discrption in your writings can effect the readers, and disturb most of them. But is that not the point in what you are writing. This story depicts a very desperate and sickening scences, and I beleive that if those discriptions were removed then the overall effect of the story would not be so strong. In writing it is some times necessary to depict the horror so your audiance can better understand the characters that take part in it, but I also believe that their could be some warning. The warning does not have to be in the story, it could be at the begging of the chapter so your readers know to prepare themselves for the horror that is to come.
|
Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: August 06, 2005 15:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is such a good story. What happened to 'you will be mine' Why'd you take it down? Hope you decide to repost it, I really liked it. Hope you update everything soon, and I hope you feel better.
|
Title: On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 01:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
|
Reviewed By: SilverRyu On: August 05, 2005 13:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had better keep writing. This is a bad ass story. Please keep writing.
|
Reviewed By: sisko66002 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 23:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is not often that I find a story that is this good. I shall eagerly await the next chapter. Fanfiction needs more authors as good as you are.
|
Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 01:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
Well, I skipped the icky parts, as I don't read NC17 material, but... I had no idea you'd updated until you mentioned it. 'fter all, it wasn't on FF.net. Ah well. Very interesting chapter. One has to wonder- would the jewel not eventually recover energy, as all of Kagome's powers are unleashed but unable to go any where? It would seem plausible that the power would store itself in the jewel, so as to avoid harming Kagome. I was wondering (again) about the reactions Kurama might have upon finding Kagome and Hiei in the hypothetical future. I've decided that I don't think he'd jump to conclusions, but would very carefully wait to make any judgments. He knows that Hiei can be evil and cruel, but that Hiei is honorable. ...I was pleased to see I'd pieced out part of the story right- Hiei hates humans in part because of what Midoriko did. Who could hate a pure creature? I would think that betraying such a person would be one of the more abominable things possible. It sounded as if Midoriko herself were unsure about her decisions, and that she was trying to convince herself she'd done the right thing- I definitely got the impression that she has been working on her own. One other thing I was wondering about was her scars. The healing Ryuji did didn't heal them, if I recall. I am curious to see just how far you'll take the scarring. Presumably some of them would fade, but... it'll be all that much harder for Kagome to heal, when it's engraven into her body.
|
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879NSI On: August 03, 2005 22:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
Oh please oh please oh please update soon. I absolutely love this.
|
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879NSI On: August 03, 2005 22:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
Oh please oh please oh please update soon. I absolutely love this.
|
| Pages (30): [ « ‹ 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 › » ] |
