| "Sex Days: Shinji Ikari" Reviews/Comments [ 177 ] |
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 02:01 EDT
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Well that was an ok chapter kinda short I just hope we don`t have to wait MONTHS for the next chapter like the other ones oh well please update soon
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Reviewed By: Knight2 On: June 12, 2007 06:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn... Asuka is really on bitch gear now. I really hope her great plan backfires on her face. Waiting for next chapter, keep up the good work.
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Title: YYYYEEEEESSSSS
Reviewed By: EVA-09 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES you updated. And the chapter was pretty good even without sex. But even if Kensuke forgot to tell Shinji about Asuka, then why he doesn't call him on his cellphone and warn him? But aside from that, I really really really want to see an update.
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Reviewed By: Mayhew On: June 10, 2007 20:37 EDT
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Glad to see you are continuing this. Some people start on a good idea and then vanish.
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Reviewed By: Satanic Park Of Madness On: June 10, 2007 20:07 EDT
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Please make a Asuka,Rei,Shinji threesome in yor ifc if you can. There isn'tt many lemons featuring them. I like how Shinji is scorign with all of the girls in NGE. I knew he had it in him. But I wonder who will he stick with in the end. You rock and do update soon.
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Reviewed By: trekie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 23:12 EDT
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theres something i never thought asuka would do but theres a first time for everything
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Reviewed By: The War General [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 17:20 EDT
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This story is great please update soon.
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Reviewed By: The War General [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 17:19 EDT
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This story is great please update soon.
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Reviewed By: trekie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 02:07 EDT
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very nice but when will there be more
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Reviewed By: bigguy1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome keep up the work
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Reviewed By: NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 06:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best stories I have read. I can't wait until you update this story. Update soon.
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: chakal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 03:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good lemon fic but your chapters have to be longer but it is a realy interesting fic please up date fast I what to know how is that shinji end up in bed with the tree girls and what happen to mana atte:mexicano_310@hotmail.com ps: is you realy like evangelion go to youtube.com and in the serch are put evangion live action movie you are going to like what you see there
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Reviewed By: dfesf On: February 14, 2007 19:58 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Updaye soon. I like the way this fic is going.
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Reviewed By: Master of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 12:15 EST
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Those last two chapter could have been better developed. Outside that, is perfect.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: EVA-09 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 15:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang. Shinji having fun with Hikari and Rei. That was hot. And Kensuke didn't deserve to get that lucky, since he is about to ruin all the fun our heroes are having because Touji whines: "Hikari broke up with me, but she still isn't allowed to fuck with anyone." But great chapter. And Kensuke is now in deep shit since Asuka found him. Write on.
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