| "Sex Days: Shinji Ikari" Reviews/Comments [ 177 ] |
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Reviewed By: Taro MD On: February 25, 2006 15:51 EST
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Hmmmm toys huh... interesting concept but then again it is up to me as Krauser said, glad to see a few of my fans sticking up for me. EVA-09: Don't worry I'll be reading more on your story apparently you got the writing style perfectly done. Now wish I had a forum or at least a livejournal page so we can move all the chats and views over there without having to write a comment about it.
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Title: Message to Shran
Reviewed By: Krauser On: February 25, 2006 04:35 EST
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I have read the So Happy Together and I agree with you. But this story is not it, which means that Gendo doesn't get stuff to Rei or anyone, because NERV is not his business. But if Rei would go and ask him to get her some sex toys, he would get suspicious and it might cause problems. And if anyone else would go to a store to buy them, they wouldn't get them since they are underaged. But i would like the idea of them using toys, but it is just my oppinion what would happen if they go and try to aquire them. But it depends on Taro how he writes this story, not us.
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Reviewed By: Marine Brother Shran [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 01:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I for one will wait until you have sufficently recover. Because who would want a half-assed story, just because the writer was sick? But two weeks? Ouch that has to be bad. Anyways, get better, especially since this is a lemon oh pleanty story. I can't wait to see what happens next, and more Shinji/Rei please. Oh and a request, TOYS, TOYS, AND MORE TOYS!!! LOL. I'm just a weirod lol. But I find toys rather entertaining lol. Read So Happy Together by Kimberly. It's a really good story, if you read the scene where Shinji and Rei first have sex, I swear you just might find some ideas to use between Shinji and the three loves of his life. Well anyways, that's all from me. Cheers ^^ Ja ne
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Title: EVA-09
Reviewed By: EVA-09 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 09:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chill up man. You should be happy that you have so much fans and readers that praise you're story. But I say that take your time with the story and don't rush it. In my oppinion, this is little bit more than average lemon fanfic, but I still want to know how the story comes to an end. I suggest that in some chapter, Shinji get's to fuck Hikari's sister Kodama, or Rei and Asuka share him like in his dream that you told in first chapter. But that is just my idea. Also, you should check my story again and review, if it's not much of a trouble.
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Title: A message to the people out there...
Reviewed By: Taro M.D [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 18:35 EST
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You people can be impatient sometimes, I mean jeez I've recently got struck down by a flu virus that's been spreading all over my area and you guys want me to write even more smut than usual... I am not a mother-fucking machine that can produce smut instantly, I'm getting sick of all the comments saying update or else. Look I'm a writer that has written an average lemon and all I deserve is constructive critism which will help me write an even better lemon and all I get lately is mindless praise/flames, I will not let you people force me from the net like what you did with Kimberly, she was a talented writer to which demand from you lot forced her to disappear and we lost a great author and a discontinued story that went over a thousand reviews. Stop sticking to me like you want to suck up to my writing skills but I can't stand brown-nosers who give me mindless praise and the fools who give me mindless flames because they find it crap and can't give me a legit reason, if this trend continues then I will put this story on hiatus and work on my other fanfics. This is one author that will not falter.
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Reviewed By: reis friend On: February 11, 2006 16:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just readed this and you haven't updated in a while. Please don't do that, because you are pissing the audience and you don't want that. You don't do you? Because I you don't.
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Reviewed By: klondikeminer On: February 08, 2006 16:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is too good to be left unfinished so please in the name of all that's unholy, update.
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Reviewed By: mehimself On: February 03, 2006 16:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story so please update. Just because you are not getting as many reviews as you hope, there are still those who want you to finish the story, so we will know how it ends, so don't dissapoint those who are reading this. I'm getting quite impatient about the new chapter.
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Reviewed By: leon23 On: February 02, 2006 15:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a genius, so please update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: Gyver On: February 01, 2006 01:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic, so please, update 'cause I want to know how this will end.
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Reviewed By: lil lento On: January 29, 2006 18:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: krauser On: January 29, 2006 08:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome and erotic. Update please. And just for the record, I know where you life. So update or make the preparations for your funeral.
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Reviewed By: writer&reader On: January 28, 2006 06:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update, because I love this story. Also check out the story that EVA-09 is writing, because it's pretty intresting.
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Reviewed By: Taro MD On: January 26, 2006 20:11 EST
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someonelikeme: With the amount of reviews coming in, it's hard not to get an ego. :)
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Reviewed By: Zenithar On: January 26, 2006 18:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah a good chapter this was. Keep it up your doing great.
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