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| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] | | Pages (148): [ « ‹ 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 › » ] | Title: Chapter 22
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 14, 2005 14:55 EDT
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Great chapter, Sue! The beginning part with Kich was perfect...it was insightful with his character and what just happened with Belle, and it was nice to see how much he really did regret what he said to her (the title of the chapter was perfect for that!) And the ending with Belle, aw whenever I read that she cried I just want to hug her! I know I would be upset too! But I really like that she found Cain's mokomoko-sama and used that for comfort, and that he used to do that when she was little. But that it couldn't heal the hurt Kich left on her soul....awwwww ::hugs Belle:: It'll be interesting to see what happens the next time they meet. The part with Gin and Cain was too adorable. I just love little scenes like that, they're so playful and just fun! Heh, I love that he touched her ears, that was great! lol, I'm surprised he had been able to resist that long ;) The clay fight was so fun! lol, Gin really got him good!! And then she gave him a little kiss, that was cute! ::happy sigh:: Great chapter!!
| Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 13:39 EDT
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You can't stop there! Man, cliffhangers, they get ya every time.
| Reviewed By: Inu-Kag15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 22:50 EDT
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Hi, I love all your stories...but I have a question, you know your little conversations you sometimes put at the end of your chapters...like when someone asks a question about some of the characters and when you have the characters answer them themselves, I was just wondering if I could use that idea...just asking if I could, I wouldn't want to be caught plagerising or anything...ya know?
| Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 21:38 EDT
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Craptastic? lol That's a great word, I have to use that somewhere... :o) On another note, YAY! Everyone has finally kissed!!! lol I love how you make us wait impatiently for stuff like that. It makes it so much better when the moment finally comes. As for Kichiro kicking Cain's ass... That would be an interesting fight. Does Cain have all the same abilities as Sesshomaru? I know he has an energy form, but does he have like the whip and the poison claws, too? I've always wondered that, ya know, whether or not those powers were only unique to Fluffy or if they were common in all inu-youkai... Anyway, awesome chap, can't wait to see how Kichiro and Belle manage to piss each other off next, and what kind of embarrasing comment poor Gin says to Cain to make him get all red and flustered. lol :o) Tchao for now.
| Reviewed By: Gold Wings On: June 13, 2005 21:35 EDT
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'The Girls'? LMAO! My mother says the exact thing, and it's hella funny! Oh my, I laughed when I read this chapter! I love your story, please continue!
| Reviewed By: Skyhawks On: June 13, 2005 05:35 EDT
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Good job. Keep going.
| Reviewed By: frostyshake On: June 13, 2005 00:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've always loved your stories, but I'm wondering did Gin inherit any miko powers from Kagome?
| Reviewed By: crolynx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 20:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your work nice to see that you still have your fire. Well I don't have much else to say, except "I love you man!" LOL. Anyways I GTG. Ja Ne Crolynx
| Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 15:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After all the times Cain has been completely disarmed by Gin being unbearably cute, it's a moment of...guilt maybe, when he finally loses control. No, guilt's not the right word. But whatever it is, it's interesting. Refreshing to see Cain didn't go berserk after, I guess making her wings was the big catharsis (horrible misuse of the word, I'm sure) for him. Is it just me, or is Gin's youkai sounding more like Belle? Or maybe Kagome. I can't see Gin calling herself "doll", but either of them might.
| Reviewed By: lesalee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 12:55 EDT
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I completely understand about Gin's sheltering... many an embarring moment I have had from my father staring down some poor, unsuspecting boy (even people who just gave me rides from school). I KNOW it would've been a lot worse if my dad had two 'minions' (hehe, brothers) to chase them all off before they even made it to the house. Luckily, my husband never had to endure such torture. lol Cain appologizing to Gin's panties, classic! I really love the awkward moments in this story and the chaos that ensues. Monday's chapter... I can deal with that... will there be a Tuesday chapter? ^_^
| Title: hey
Reviewed By: monkie On: June 11, 2005 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey Sueric, Just wanted to say I enjoy your stories alot. The quality of your stories is so much better than alot of other fanfics that are floating around. Correct me if I'm wrong, but this fic contains alot more inaction between the youkai blood and the actual character. Because in Purity 2 Toga never really had a conversation with the youkai blood, neither did Inuyasha in Purity. I think it is an interesting developement, a different way to tell the story, though sometimes it seems like they are schizoprenic(?). Just wanted to tell you that I really enjoy all your writings, and hopefully I'll be able to read more in the future. ^^ Good Luck (My grammer sucks, sorry)
| Title: Whoa what a ride...
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus On: June 11, 2005 14:32 EDT
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That chapter shall henseforth be titled the PMS chapter. First it was pissy, then it was angry, then it was cute, then it was sad and bitchty, then it was happy, then it was REALLY cute, and then it was confused. Not to mention there was at least two conversations revolving around panties. So basiclly like Petra around 'that time of the month' Can we kill the guys at the bar anyway, cause I'm sure other people are mad at Kich, but we don't want him to die, 'cause that'd be bad, and we angry at Cain...kinda...but we really don't want him to die, but I don't think random bar hounds are important to the storyline are they? Sheltering children is setting them up for one hella of a fall, I have another friend like that. She saw people kissing and didn't get it. She saw guys kissing and she REALLY didn't get it. How did Cain manage to have a conversation about painties with a straight face? You can't even say the word without laughing. It's just so... I'm done.
| Reviewed By: Darksquire(not logged in) On: June 11, 2005 13:59 EDT
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Now that I think about it I think I am going to have little visions of Gin kicking Cain's ass playing through my head all weekend. It would be funny. Si si. Then she could prove to him that she can handle her weapon. Mmmmmhmmmm. Anyway, I will shut up now. It is your story, yes yes. I just get to inact my own little fantacies inside my brain over and over again! How lovely.
| Reviewed By: Darksquire(not logged in) On: June 11, 2005 13:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They both got kissed! Yay! I'm so excited! Now Kitch just needs to stop being an ass and Gin needs to let Cain that her that he loves her and that he wont kill himself. But of course you will make it much more exciting than that and more dramatic and fun because your stories are simply awesome. Voices in background chant: "Hai soo desu!" Oh how fun! I can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks again for writing these stories! They are absolutely wonderful!
| Reviewed By: CheshireAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 13:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sueric, I absolutely love your stories, and I do hope you don't stop writing them. I've even copied your first two purity stories to CD just so that my friend, Jessica, could read them since she's not allowed on the internet. She's just as hooked on them as I am. I look forward to being able to come home after a long day at work and just sitting down and reading the newest chapter to one of your stories. You have given me hours of enjoyment with your writings and I thank you for that. I hope things get better for you. Best wishes, CheshireAngel
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