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| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] | | Pages (148): [ « ‹ 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 › » ] | Title: Ch 18
Reviewed By: LavenderRose (nsi) On: June 08, 2005 10:20 EDT
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Just one question: For WHICH Gin comment are you giving thanks? I spotted at least two in this chapter. I'd have thought with Kich and Ryo running around, she'd be a little less inclined to say things like that, but maybe not. One other thing that's been bothering me: If they're all wearing concealing spells, how come their hair color didn't change, and how can Belle and Cain see their fuzzy little ears to tweak? And yep, Cain IS done! Has his youkai begun to recognize that fact as well?
| Reviewed By: fairia On: June 08, 2005 09:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Being sick - or getting sick when you're trying to move - sucks. But reading your chapter today made me smile, especially Gin's unknowing remarks. And yep, Cain's done for. Belle and Kitch seem the kind to go down kicking and screaming, and most likely at each other. Veeeerry amusing, even through a headache from hell. Bleh. Anyway, can't wait for tomorrow's chapter.
| Title: LMAO
Reviewed By: kamackie(nsi) On: June 08, 2005 09:30 EDT
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I knew that was a Rach line in there. Dang Sue....got me falling out of chairs again. I love your chapters!
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: anime is the best On: June 08, 2005 08:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Purity 4. I'm still trying to figure out how to review on this site.This review is for chapter 1. Keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 08:12 EDT
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OMG Gin is just too cute! Even her youkai is rather naive. She reminds me of a colleague who would spout innuendos without even realising what they mean. Me, being hentai-minded, can't help but laugh when she does things like that. I wonder how Inuyasha would react if Gin said something like that in front of him. Poor Kich, even his youkai is confused about their sexual orientation. Hehehehehe.... I hope Kich and his youkai come to an agreement regarding Belle soon because I think Kich would really do the IV thing just to get his youkai to shut up.
| Reviewed By: notzathros On: June 08, 2005 07:48 EDT
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Pop up "like an antenna." ROTFL! She's got a good point though. Thanks for the great chapter. Great dialogue between the characters.
| Title: Oh my God!
Reviewed By: TheGreatMinionRalph [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 04:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! Ohmygod, this chapter had me rolling around covering my face with a pillow laughing so hard!(it's midnight here, dont want to wake people up) "I'll rip it off" & "You're gay, aren't you?" So hilarious! I cant wait untill the next time they see each other! This was great!
| Reviewed By: EAP On: June 08, 2005 03:21 EDT
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If i had been drinking milk during Belle's gay comment, it SO would have come out my nose. Very funny scene there, I loved it. I also enjoyed Cain little pep talk with junior, I'm surpirsed the kid didnt...well, embarass himself. "I'l rip it off.". Great line, I loved the whole chapter! I hope you keep writing and updating, i really enjoy reading your work!
| Reviewed By: nazi_ally_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 01:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sueric, your stories make me smile, make me cry, make me roll in the floor laughing until I'm crying! You bring out personalities in your characters that most un-published authors can't seem to grasp. (You should totally get published!!) Thank you for sharing your stories with us, your loyal fans. I don't think you have written a story yet that I don't absolutely LOVE! I'm SO sad that the purity series won't continue, but I do hope that maybe once in a while you will be plagued with little plot bunnies and come back to write one-shots about Ryo/Nez, Inu/Kags, Se/Tog, Gin/Cain, Bel/Kich, and all the rest...if I missed one that is. ^_^ I am patiently awaiting the new chapters in P4, and I hope that Desideratum isn't all I have left to look foward to from you. I love your stories SO much that I would be heartbroken if you didn't keep posting! I haven't found anything else out there that is worth reading...because, lets face it, when all story options are put up to your stories...they pale pathetically in comparison. In all honesty, I have found only one more author (BrethlessM) who even comes close to being worth reading. I bow down and praise your wicked killer skeelz ::bows and worships:: I lobb teh Sueric storiez! Thank you for such wonderful reads and for sharing your beautiful gift with all of us! I will pay you in mass amounts of pocky and coffee if you PLEASE keep posting your stories for us!! Great chappy, as always!
| Title: Wanna-be-InuTaisho
Reviewed By: Crolynx(Not logged in) On: June 07, 2005 23:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Great story love the newest update. Cain and Gin are making progress. I still feel sorry Kich though, Belle and hime need to have a big heart to heart talk. Anyways I love the work and your other story Desider...huh? i have a hard time pronouncing that one. I love it. I look forward to the new chappie in that one. I don't know whay anyone would flame you for that story it looks very good. Ja Ne, Crolynx ;p P.S. I borrowed some of your names for a character I play in D&D. It's a Hanyou and the name just fit the way I designed the character. Thank you for such great and unique names.
| Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: June 07, 2005 22:54 EDT
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Oi!! Goodness. Cain's wearing the shirt. I'm still wondering if Gin smells like Cain... and what Yasha has to say. But, such a conversation in front of the movies... LOL .. and Belle finding Nez and Sierra helping her out, adding to the fire that is Kich's ego! LOL.. Can you fire someone that is working for free??
| Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(i'm lazy, get over it, i have) On: June 07, 2005 22:16 EDT
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great chapter...too bad kich, i'm pretty sure belle won that round... lol....cain and gin are so cute...too bad cain has that promise...well, update asap, till then. Zirra
| Title: Ch. 17
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 22:07 EDT
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*giggle* Uncle Yasha has two little girls hanging on him...I can see that so clearly. Two little black-haired, black puppy-eared hanyou girls. Coral and Cassidy. I'm sure he romps all over with them, dog that he is! LOL - Oh my...Belle sure hit Kich below the belt with the 'gay' comment, and with Sierra & Nez playing her chorus, he was put on the spot and very hot under the collar. I hope that Belle is ready for any repurcussions. Nez might be a bit blind to emotional evidence, but Sierra spotted Kichiro's jealousy right off. Maybe there will be a little side-betting going on in the Izayoi-Inutaisho factions whether Kich has met his match or not. Again with the ear comparison? Kich just might have to tackle his brother and do a little tweaking himself to settle his own mind if it bothers him so much. Can you imagine Ryo's reaction to being held and tweaked by his own brother?? Priceless! And Kich's reaction to softer or not? Oh, how my mind wanders...thanks for the fodder, Sue! LMAO
| Title: chapter 17
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 07, 2005 21:13 EDT
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LOL, oh sue this chapter was awesome! BAHAHAHAAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA I officially love Belle. Calling Kich gay was brilliant. lol, and Sierra and Nezumi coming in with their little comments was perfect and completely sealed everything. Heh, I also liked the little beginning bit with Cain and Belle's date. Yasha isn't the only overprotective father around there! ;) Great chapter Sue :)
| Reviewed By: BOWJAY [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 21:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Like It. I wonder where Kich went and I wonder if Belle's data will ever make it back. I guess it shows that Nez has come to terms with her mother's death well since Sierra always wants fried chicken and that was what was cooking when Nez's mother died. Cain didn't ever mark Isabella did he? If this is true then doesn't he think that he should follow Isabella in death out of duty and honor, not due to his blood. His blood reminds him, but isn't that more because of the promise he made. Isn't this like the promise to protect which is so important to Inuyasha and his family.
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