| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Title: Chapters 13 - 16
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 21:03 EDT
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Sorry for not reviewing in a timely fashion but I just got my dsl to behave itself. :P -- I have to say that I got all choked up over the wings that Cain made for Gin. How adorable. And I about died laughing when she just had to touch them...his stripes/crests! LOL I wonder if Belle will find her a 'fairy' costume, all frilly and gauzy, to go with them? - I loved how Gin has managed to keep her promise of silence and is ready to kick Kich's tail over his treatment of Belle. That would be fun to see. Ah...mind candy! - Hey...wait a minute! Gin's youkai is talking to her on her human night?? Wouldn't that be the one time that her youkai's voice would be silenced as her youkai blood is supressed? Hmm... - It was the television? Oh, Gin is a bad liar. Cain just can't help himself and fall for Gin...and neither can his youkai. Hehehe Awwww, Cain is going to hold Gin till she falls asleep. Shouldn't his youkai be sending up warning flares about now? "Danger! Imminent Meltdown Detected!" He is such a goner.
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 20:18 EDT
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Kich gay, MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That was hilarious!! Poor guy. *hugs Kich* But he did deserve it though, for being rude and obnoxious to her. I really like Belle. She can swing the insults like the best of them and she can hold her own with Kich. Cain is still in denial about his feelings for Gin, poor thing. I hope we get to learn more about Belle's mother in the following chapters. I just lobe this story so much!
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 19:01 EDT
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YAYAYAYAYAYA Poor kitch..i feel for the poor guy.Is this gunna be the last purity? cuz i love em and they keep me goin during examsa....BLAH HATE EXAMS....keep writing!!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 18:47 EDT
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LMAO!! Poor Kich, but I can't say that he didn't completely deserve it. I wonder what'll happen next???
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Title: Jovial
Reviewed By: Odgamre On: June 07, 2005 17:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been a long time fan of yours, and i think i have read every single inuyasha fic that has been posted. I really love reading your fics. They make the characters really come alive. I've stopped reading most other fics because i find them flat and sloppily done in comparison. It is really a shame that you've been flamed so much. If they don't like it they should not read it, and leave more for the rest of us. Checking if purity has been updated or not has been the sole reason for me even getting online for the past few weeks. I just love your work, and even if you don't continue to post here, i really hope that you keep writing. In this fic in particular, i love the intereaction between Belle and Kichiro. This fic makes me laugh and sit on the edge of my seat at all the right places. I really can't get enough.... so.... going to update soon? :D
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: June 07, 2005 17:31 EDT
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Heh. Funny argument. Those two know exactly how to push each other's buttons. They are either in love or siblings. Grin. Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: Darksquire(not logged in) On: June 07, 2005 17:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha ha that is hilarious! I love it! Belle calling Kich gay! It is too perfect! He is so hopeless. XD Well things are moving along nicely. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hurray!
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Title: CAIN!!!
Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (not signed in...whoops) On: June 07, 2005 14:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish it were possible, once again, to place large + signs after the enjoyment factor. This fic rocks my teeny-tiny college world. I just want to grab Cain and take him home with me (though my newly aquired fiance might disagree...hmmmmm). He's so sweet, and I'm so glad that you've reassured us that this is a Gin/Cain fic (well, in part, which makes it even better that there's more) and I know there won't be a horribly sad ending... I hope... Then again, you do have the flair for angst...... oh no, now I'm scaring myself! Anyway, i did have a question: is it harder or easier to write fics with two couples in them? I mean, I know you often write InuKag and MirSan but they're already established couples... is it more difficult or more fun to connect two seperate couples from the beginning? I really like it because we get to follow two stories, and it makes it all that much more interesting, especially seeing as how the couples are intertwined. Another Q: Kichiro and Belle... would that make Kichiro the up-and-coming American Tai-Youkai? Or would it skip a generation to Belle's offspring?
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 14:29 EDT
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haha belle definitly got to kich with that one heh...it must be obvious that theres SOMETHING between kich and belle if sierra seemed to have figured that out =P
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Reviewed By: werewolfpixie On: June 07, 2005 14:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story. still keeping up. now all i have to do is read toga's story. phewww...that means lots of reading. oh well reader by heart. how many chapters do you plan? just curious. werewwolfpixie@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: lesalee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 13:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, this just keeps getting better between Kich and Belle. Sierra to the rescue! Hurray! I seriously can't wait until the chapter where Kich meets Cain... Soon, right? Right?! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kialla (not signed in) On: June 07, 2005 12:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this chapter!!! i practically have tears comming out of my eyes right now! lol! and i just love sierra! the ironic thing is, she acts exactly like my friend, whos name is Sierra! dude... that's weird... but sooo cool! update soon! --kialla
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 12:16 EDT
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I must tell you dear, I'm quite addicted to this story. I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: LavenderRose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 12:07 EDT
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Very good--Belle REALLY got Kich's goat, huh? Does this mean Sierra's going to "help" them get together now? Gads, I hope they didn't pick the same movie--the theater will never be the same! Is Cain rediscovering love here? It almost sounds like his marriage to Isabelle was more one of compromise and convenience than it was one of unconditional love. Is that why he's finding it so hard to finish the sculpture--not enough tenderness to create the emotion necessary for something of the depth he was looking to make?
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Reviewed By: Descendant of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 23:23 EDT
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Can their youkai be separated from them? It might sound dumb but when Cain was talking to his youkai in one of the pervious chapters it sounded like Cain left his youkai in the room. Maybe I just missinterpreted.
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