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| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] | | Pages (148): [ « ‹ 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 › » ] | Title: Purity 4
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 13:15 EDT
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Oh, how I love Cain's Youkai, "Respect, sure....I could take him", and how they argue with each other. Sounds like me and my inner self. Is that where you got the idea from? I'm starting to get REALLY excited about the possibility of a physical confrontation between Cain and InuYasha. One of your reviewers said something about the age difference, not bad, just a comment, but I think that Youkai are so long lived, that age is meaningless. Gin and Cain actually have a lot to offer one another. Don't cha just LOVE the way intellegent people back into stuff. This story is giving me warm fuzzies. I love warm fuzzies.
| Title: Hooray
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow (Not logged in) On: June 06, 2005 11:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like they might get somewhere soon... Hooray! I actualy really like the large age gap between them, I never liked the way people put such odd restrictions on who you're supposed to like. So then, is this really the last Purity? That's quite a shame, but I guess it frees up some of your time for other amazing stories as well, eh? Also, I'm not sure if you answered this somewhere already, but what's up with the whole "oh balls" thing? Just wondering since that's the first time I've heard that used in place of "damnit" and "shit," unless you just didn't feel like cussing in which case it makes sense. Anywho, keep up the great work, I love it.
| Reviewed By: darksquire(not logged in) On: June 06, 2005 01:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really liked that chapter. Lots of lovey dovey with Gin and Cain! YAY YAY YAY YAY! I can't wait for the next chapter. Tuesday then? I suppose I will just have to wait untill then! I have now officially decided. The purity stories are my very favorite on mediaminer. I am not kidding. They are really really good. The only part that was hard to read was the middle of Purity 2, but that was because it was so depressing! I loved that one too though. Don't get me wrong. Someday I need to post the novel I'm writing. I can't do it on here though because it isn't about anime and it isn't a fan fiction. So yea. Well I am going to go to bed now. Mmmmmmhmmmmm. I'll be back on tuesday!
| Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 01:12 EDT
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I can't wait for more, chat whiners or not, please keep updating. And if those chatters get to you - well, there's always cyber tomatoes to throw. ;) Cain and his youkai are lost without a hope, the perverbial spell that Gin has wrapped around them both is beyond defeat.
| Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 23:40 EDT
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I enjoyed the way Cain teased her with the sketck book. I was a little confused about him asked her to sit down without questioning why; I'm going to reread that part because I think I missed something. He's holding her while she falls asleep? He has no chance of winning a battle with himself; not if it's about the dangerous evil that is Gin and his feelings for her.
| Reviewed By: fireflyskies (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 23:11 EDT
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Another great chapter. I'm just waiting for Kichiro to see Cain and Gin together, or for Cain and Gin to see Belle and Kich fighting. That would be hilarious, but it's your story. Keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Pioden (who is still too lazy to log in) On: June 05, 2005 22:45 EDT
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Gin shifted her legs to turn toward him as he sat down. "I thought you said you were tired of standing." Um... should that be sitting at the end? Just something I noticed. If that was meant to be there, disregard it! Heh... Anyway, Pioden would like to say that Cain's dialouge with his youkai makes me giggle. A LOT. Sad, really, but that's that. I have no reason to find it so amusing, either, but I do. I'm strange. Also: Cain is really, REALLY cool. I love him to death. This review was not constructive in the least. Nonetheless, I love your stories. I am now a Cain fangirl. This spot was previously only commanded by Sesshoumaru. You win, Sueric. You win.
| Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 22:44 EDT
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great chapter, sue, can't wait till you update again. update asap, please. till then, Zirra
| Title: nice chapter
Reviewed By: kialla(not signed in) On: June 05, 2005 21:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful chapter! it was so cute! now, i normally dont reveiw, unless it's a chapter you just posted, and i just LOVE all of your stories! keep up the really good work! jaa! kialla
| Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 17:09 EDT
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Hey, Sue! This was an awesomely intense chapter. I don't know why it's intense, it just is. Uh oh, Cain and his youkai are starting to agree! And talk about wandering into dangerous territory! Hoo boy! I hope Inuyasha doesn't decide to come check on his baby girl! I think it's great that the entire family is calling her! And she really can't say, "I'm safe! Cain's here!" Cain's and Gin's obsession with each other is bordering on the pathological. It's so fun to see them living in denial (Does the sun shine there? Haha!) and trying to deny it, and just doing a really bad job of hiding it. I love this story. It's so great. Your characters just kick ass, Sue. XOXO! ~pagan_sedjou
| Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 17:06 EDT
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The fluff, the fluff, the fluff. *sigh* Wow, Cain's youkai said that he likes Gin *cheesy grin* the sketch pad scene was adorable!!! Gin is so cute and innocent, she's such a breath of fresh air. It's amazing how well Kagome reads people, and it was a nice mother daughter moment when she called. In all I just have to say that I love this chapter! Love your characters, and love this story (OMFG-fangirl moment, please forgive me, lol) Thanks sue for the smile!
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 15:50 EDT
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Aww...how sweet!!!! Gosh, I hate being a hopeless romantic, but then again I love it. When are they going to admit that they like each other...or at least admit it to themselves lol. I just love the fluff and it'd be better if they told each other how they felt. Oh well, I can wait ^_^
| Reviewed By: notzathros (again) On: June 05, 2005 15:20 EDT
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Somehow managed to post my review AND my previous review in one fell swoop. Sorry. As always, looking forward to your next update!
| Reviewed By: notzathros On: June 05, 2005 15:17 EDT
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Just finished Monday's chapter. Poor Inuyasha shares the same human night as Gin. Do all his kids share the same night? It must be tough on him to lose his powers and have a vulnerable child and mate to protect at the same time. Probably not something he endures gracefully. I think Cain really understands how difficult it is for Hanyous. Cain vs. Inuyasha? Hmmm. Tough to pick a winner. That whole noncorporeal flying skill is a real advantage. I think Sess can beat everyone though. He's just too aloof to bother:-)
| Reviewed By: notzathros On: June 05, 2005 15:08 EDT
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Aw. That chapter was really, really sweet. I loved it! Thank you! Now I'm going to read it again.
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