| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: bloomz-baby On: June 05, 2005 14:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why did Cain want Gin to sit down?
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Reviewed By: hanyouwings21 On: June 05, 2005 14:19 EDT
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...mumbles curses under breath...where's some friggin tissues when you need some!! okay...breathe...gets big wide goofy smile on face...AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWW SOME GIN~N~CAIN FLUFFINESS!!!!!...wipes tear from eye... that was way too cute......damn...now I gotta go piss somebody off...after all, gotta reputation to uphold...laughs evilly...^_~
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(not sign on) On: June 05, 2005 14:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a cute chapter. I loved it!! OH so sweet so nice, now why can I find a Cain in real life. oh well... But why no chapter on monday, :*( your Killing me. But if the authoress commands it I'll suffer quietly - not silent - Oh and just to add something I thought for sure, after read the first paragraph or so, that the cat would be let of the bag in this chapter. I thought maybe Kich was going to make a comment of Gin being safe cause the tai-Youkia(sp) - Belle's father - lived in the same building. But that would be to easy. Well great chapter anyway all fluffy goodness. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: June 05, 2005 12:15 EDT
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They are just so cute! Now both sides of Cain's brain have admitted to liking her too- I see angst in the near future! lol I look forward to Gin seeing Papa in the morning.. she reeks of Cain now... That's going to go over very well I'm sure lol. Oh, and Kich - what will he think?? He'll probably yell at Belle again. You confirmed that Gin is short... but I had to get a tape measure out to better understand the visual of 6'8". (i need a life!) My daughter is now reading Purity - and has giggled, and gasped her way though the first chapters, I don't know how far she got, but she now understands the need to keep reading 'just one more chapter'.... LOL - Oh and she adores the five year-old Toga - but that's not to surprising, he's just so darn cute!
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: June 05, 2005 10:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chat whiners? what the hell's a chat whiner? :P so, what's your normal posting days? do you have particular ones? ohhh!! and now that P3 is done, you'll be posting more chapters here right???? :D yey!!!!!!!!! are you starting any other fics? ohhh!! and i hope that cain falls asleep, and inuyasha comes to check on gin.... muhahaha... and a fight ensues... ;) oh yeah. i'm excited for that fight... oh! and i want cain to meet kich! :D yey!!! and ... update as soon as you can!!!!!!!!
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Title: Another wonderful chapter!!!
Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 09:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sweet! Cain is just a big softy and sexy to boot! The interaction between Gin and Cain is just so sweet. He's trying to deny his feelings and she's just confoozled. Inuyasha's really worried about his baby girl, like a fathers, no matter how old they get. Great chapter!!! Can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: June 05, 2005 06:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter! Cain was just lovely, he's really a sweetie. And I was sure InuYasha would come banging through the door. But, the nights not offically over, I can still dream. I think this was a good enough chapter to hold me till tuesday...Maybe...Probably not, but what can I do (besides reread it a few times?). Write on, Sue, write on. (
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Reviewed By: kiaraecko On: June 05, 2005 03:32 EDT
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WOW great chapter!! you are doing an awesome job. can't wait till the next chapter is posted on tues. thanks for all the hard work you put into writing these wonderful chapters! have a good rest of the weekend.
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Reviewed By: PrncessS (not logged in) On: June 05, 2005 02:11 EDT
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awwww!!!! attack of the warm and fuzzies!!!!! ^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^
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Title: I wish I could find a man like that
Reviewed By: Nadene On: June 05, 2005 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man. Reading all of your fics, I wish to any holy being that youkai were real. I mean, come on. Cuddling on the couch?!?!? My dog cuddles, but just try to get my guy to sit down and cuddle is like pulling a ridiculously painful tooth. I sent you and email telling you how much I love your fics, and I threw in a request that I would never hold you too, it was more to show how much I love your stories, but your beta got a little upset I think, told me that it was selfish... And I honestly wasnt trying to be, just wanted you to know I love your writing. Tell Sari-15 to read the next email. Im apologizing in it for coming off wrong. I wanted to let you know that your writing, and that fact that you still find time to raise a family has inspired me to start writing again. I stopped a while back, and after reading your stories, Ive started up again. You are the master of plot timing. You dont rush, nor are you too slow. And your character developement... lets just say I read your stories and I discover that I have a lot of boring people around me, and I seriously need a new man. LOL. Thanks for writing. And if you never touch another keyboard, I want you to know that Im thankful for atleast being able to read the stories youv'e done so far. Thank you for enlighting the imagination I thought I lost years ago. Nadene
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Reviewed By: TenshiKaika On: June 05, 2005 01:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fall asleep, Cain! Fall asleep with her! LOL he's got it bad! I can't wait 'til Tuesday for an update! What if I get hit by a bus and die before then?! So far, my guess is that Isabelle (sp?) died when Cain tried to mark her. LOVE the story! Can't wait for the next chapter! - Love Tenshi
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy(not logged in) On: June 05, 2005 01:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cain is bad, LOL. I love the end. Cain is falling so hard. Touching and amazingly real for such an unreal story
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Reviewed By: Eshter Tan On: June 05, 2005 01:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still looking GREAT !!!!! I truly look forward to your story of each chapters.
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 01:23 EDT
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this chapter was so sweet! and *sigh* no chapter monday? =( haha i cant wait...aww so cain and his youkai like gin!! yayayay lol and the ending was touching too...but heh i cant help but wonder the reason why he was standing up...haha i think i know...
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 01:18 EDT
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Yeah! It was wonderful! Cain is in trouble isn't he? I loved it! (course what can I say, I love them all!) Whining? Maybe a little. LOL. But, I would beg to if I had too! That's great! Gin is gonna grow up even if daddy doesn't like it! (Sweet!)
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