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| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] | | Pages (148): [ « ‹ 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 › » ] | Reviewed By: IfIcoulfmarryInuyashaIwould (nsi) On: May 31, 2005 18:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Normally with fiction, I make it a habit never to read anything that has characters/children of characters that aren't in the actual manga/anime without cringing. You are the exception to that rule, and I commend you for it. It takes me a while to ever to feel like I know characters as well as Inuyasha and Kagome, and to care about ther problems (unrequited love, drama, life threatening events and the like), but you've done it. You've fleshed them out and integrated them so well into the classic plotline that it's as if Gin, Kich, Ryo, Cain, and Belle have been there all along. Screw anyone who thinks differently. By the way, I thought Belle would be more partial to baths, like Kagome. Any reason why you chose a shower instead? And for the chapter before last, why did Kich order for Belle? Kich must have balls if he orders a "salad and water" combo on all his other dates, because regardless of his resemblance to his stunning father, I'd still be pissed as hell if he did that while I was on a date with him. Salad and water? Give me a burger and fries anyday. ~Ja ne! I.I.C.M.I.I.W.
| Reviewed By: coniving [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 18:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love reading your fanfics. Yuo have awsome story lines, I especially love the Purity stories. Plus i was curious to know if Cain is going to break his promise or not and if Kagome and Inuyasha will be having another baby as it has been mentioned.
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 17:53 EDT
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Well said....I don't understand why people have a fit over stories...if you don't like them don't read them...how simple is that? I think it's cute that in't a Kich/Belle Cain/Gin story....twice the fun, twice the action, twice as many chapters, twice as much reading from a wonderful author...what's there to complain about? Just one question...in Purity 3, when Toga and Sierra had Coral...what nights does she become human?
| Title: THAT'S IT!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: hanyouwings21 On: May 31, 2005 16:59 EDT
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TO ALL SMART ASS, INCOGNIZANT, ASININE, SIMPLETON, COVETOUS, PIECES OF SHIT: Sue works her ass off to write awe-inspiring fanfiction that takes the reader into realms of utmost imagery and realism, a combination that is rare and difficult to achieve. If you are lacking the brain compacity to revere and bask in the talents of such a gifted writer, than I suggest that you silence your imbecilic mouths in order to save us all from your obvious lack of astuteness. In terms that you might understand, shut the fuck up!! As a final note to Sue, I am sorry that you have to put up with such obtuse and insular reviewers who are obviously so egocentric that they can't appreciate your genious. Oh and by the way, I love your site ^_^!!!
| Reviewed By: fairia On: May 31, 2005 16:55 EDT
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Are you really getting that much static about this being a double romance? That beyond ridiculious, and I'd venture to say that the people giving you grief about it are narrow-minded asinine fools who have no concept of what a real story is...and "Goosbumps" isn't it. Sue, I know that rude or degradding comments hurt, even when left by children and idiots, but please, for the love of little green apples, don't listen to them! You know you're an excelllent writer, and the only comments that should carry any weight are of trusted friends and advisors, not random idiots who only say such things because they have anonymity on their side. And, truly, they wouldn't have they balls to say what they do to your face. There are many, many people out there who truly and deeply enjoy what you do (myself included) and truly don't want your stories to stop. So please, don't listen to idiots and keep on doing what you're doing. We know the difficulties of writing a true story, even if they don't!
| Reviewed By: leyley On: May 31, 2005 16:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT. You just keep getting better as time goes on. WOOHoo you go girl.
| Reviewed By: Firedemon86(not signed on) On: May 31, 2005 16:27 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Please keep posting I love reading your stories and this one is just awsome. I love it!! Please don't let a few people destroy these stories for the rest of us. Oh and I do have one question for you is about Cain, Can the youkai and the master -Cain's demon voice and himself - really go two different ways? I mean it seem all Cain's demon does is argue with Cain about Gin and it seems to want to stay away from her. Also I thought that demon voice or iner demon knew their mate on sight, Ryo's did, it seems Kich does so I'm just a little confused. Thanks for writing and posting I can't wait to read more. Update soon!!!
| Reviewed By: kiaraecko On: May 31, 2005 16:02 EDT
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Hey Great Chapter!! You're doing an awesom job! :)
| Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 13:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The last few chapters have been by far my favourite to read; the adrenaline rush I got just thinking what would happen... my first thought was Kich and Belle-chan were going to meet with Cain and Gin, and happily surprised to see that is was Inuyasha and Kagome lol! That was classic! Inuyasha and Cain eyeing each other up, lol. They have too much in common to dislike one another in theory, but then again, we are talking about Inuyasha here (chuckles). Cain calling Gin "Baby Girl" was so sweet! Great stuff is bound to happen with the interaction between Kich and Belle, as they nearly hit it off. Though today's chap had my head spinning and the anxious feeling in their lack of communication and the obvious, stubborn pride. Especially Kich, I think there is more to Belle and her true self; Belle has to be one of my fav OC's from the Purity series thus far. People judge her too quickly (like Kich) and won't give her a chance (Like Nez in P3); shame really-still the annoying thing about this is your still being made to feel bad about writing and posting. It is really sad to think your feeling that angered by it that it may lead to you putting a stop to posting and/or writing all together. I think a report abuse link should be added to all fiction sites, where IP's of flamers and abusive reviewers can be stopped.
| Reviewed By: Raniatlw [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 13:37 EDT
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Awesome chapter! Update soon!
| Title: yeh
Reviewed By: Cake_fariy On: May 31, 2005 13:24 EDT
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so i just finish reading purity 3 and it was great i love it.....and now i just finish reading this chapter....and it was great as well....but i was just wondering how old everyone is in this story i know that gin and kich are in there 20's but don't know where and bell is like 17 and does she go to shcool...well i guess not concidering she's working with kich....and how old is cain? well all in all this is turing out to be a great story like all your stories turn out to be...well thats it for me i'm off to go to school....(i don't want to)...matane
| Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 13:03 EDT
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omg this chapter went really deep into the feelings of belle and with kich wow...i wouldve never thought that was the reason she acted as she does...heh yea i was wondering about those two cause like i mostly read about cain and gin but dang with kich and belle i can tell there will be some real problems with those two becoming mates as well with cain and gin...dang sue how do u come up with these plots with these couples???!!! their great! ....and i also read ur authors note and the first thing that popped into my head wuz "not again..." it sucks that there are ppl reviewing about how bad the story is when mainly other ppl are enjoying it...grrr they like to take the fun out of everything...heh well im enjoying this story a lot...cant wait to see wut happens next!
| Title: well...
Reviewed By: tessiefanfic(not signed in) On: May 31, 2005 12:55 EDT
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i have one thing to say...U BAKAS SHUT UP AND LEAVE SUE ALONE OR ELSE I SIC MY DOGS ON U!...now that i got that out of my system, lmao, i love this story. who knew this would be so good? i live for ur updates...i've been rereading ur stuff, i'm right in the middle of Meta(and falling in love with it all over again), and to see that u updated this story makes me so happy! till the next chappie! ps..ALL BAKAS WILL BE FED TO MY DOGS!!(lmao)
| Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: May 31, 2005 12:26 EDT
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So lonely - so sad - and a whole bottle of whiskey - no wonder he nearly kissed her. Ah the course of true love never runs smoothly - but it's sure fun!
| Title: i love it...
Reviewed By: QamarNoor [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 12:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't beging to tell you how much I love this story. How you protray the characters emotions is amazing, I was crying throuhgout this chapter. another reason I think why i've come to like this story so much is because I can relate to these characters, especially Gin- the sheltered innocent girl with an over protective family. and I too am quite like that. thank you for writing this wonderful story, i'll be eagerly awaiting more of it. Take care sue
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