| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 18:44 EDT
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I had a feeling that Inuyasha would rear his cute little puppy head...Kagome should have sat him (if she still had the power)
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 18:11 EDT
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great chapter....sorry i can't talk right now update asap please, till then, Zirra
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 17:37 EDT
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LLLMMMMAAAOOOO!! dang that wuz hilarious...cain and gin....heh when kich was on the phone i had a feeling that it was inuyasha telling him about gin...and i wuz like uh-oh but it wasnt...dang if kich was pissed at belle now i cant imagine what he'll feel when he finds out about gin and cain...wow this story is great
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Reviewed By: RatherFabulous On: May 26, 2005 17:36 EDT
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The whole Purity series has been a lot of fun. Can't wait to see how this turns out. (Belle is annoying, isn't she? Ah well, been there myself...)
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Title: It is sooo hard to read when Mom, nephew, roommate & phone keep distracting you.
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 17:03 EDT
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I thought it was all over when Daddy showed up and saw his little girl sitting with a grown male. I could almost hear the snarling from a dog-fight. LOL InuYasha is so predictable and Gin is so quixotic. The slightest encouragement sends her joy skyrocketing past the clouds and one harsh word drops her heart below her feet. She is keeping Cain so off-balance, even his youkai is in a state of confusion. "Can I touch it? Pleeeease?" I thought Cain was going to have a coronary over that one! LMAO!!! -- Poor Belle, she rubbed Kich the wrong way without trying and now she's having to re-think her regular habits. She's been daddy's-little-girl for too long and, while she always wants her daddy close, she's ready to explore being and independant adult. Her fear of losing her father is holding her back from asserting herself, convinced that if she shows she doesn't need him to protect her from the world, he will carry through on his promise to join her dead mother. Pushing Gin at him may sound like an ideal idea, but has she considered Gin's feelings if Cain decides against living? Belle is very impulsive and her 'foresight' is very rusty and incomplete. I wonder what will open her eyes to how wrong her manipulation is, no matter how well intentioned. "The path to hell is paved with good intentions" is a quote that is still very true.
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Title: SOTFLMFAO!
Reviewed By: Wlfhund On: May 26, 2005 15:27 EDT
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LMFAO! That was way to good! That was hysterical! He thought, he thought, his uhum! OH MY GOD! I am still laughing. That was just to good to be! Way to go Sue! Although I don't see Youkai uhum's being soft and fluffy! Way to go Cain! That was a great time not to be paying attention! See what it costs when you don't pay attention! No dignity in that one! Oh, on to other things... Inuyasha is just gonna explode isn't he? I can see his head exploding! I just have to wonder how Kagome is gonna keep him under control! Do Hanyous spontaneously combust?
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan (not loged in ) On: May 26, 2005 14:26 EDT
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BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH Oh man there are too many great things to say about this chapter WOW just WOW!!!! One Belle so rocks she is easily one of my fav OC's in your story's "the girls are just great" its nice to see such a self assured confident woman taking on one of fav hanyou's. Kich NEEDS a woman like that to keep him in line. SHe soooo rocks Kich has so met his match in Belle! But WOW what a B@ST@RD he was I couldn't believe it!!!! I mean I totally understand why Kichiro is the way he is but WOW Belle should so make the boy grovel she won't but hell I would! And the Cain Yasha meeting?! Well you KNEW it was going to be big but this was HUGE!!! WOW they are so always going to hate each other! Baby girl LOL thats too cute LOL. Gin so cracks me up between her babbling and her off the wall comments.. LOL she is just too funneh!
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Reviewed By: lesaleenotsignedin On: May 26, 2005 13:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO! I loved this chapter... even if you didn't update this story for a month, this chapter would hold me over. Poor Gin bwa hahahaa! As usual, awesome work!
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 13:24 EDT
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LOL!! I thought Gin and Cain would run into Belle and Kich not Inu and Kags! I'm still very curious as to how you'll work out the whole fact that they'll be dating there in-laws or whatever. I shouldn't really matter since they're youkai and the age differance isn't a big deal, but I'm curious about any other twists that happen. Love your work!!
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: May 26, 2005 13:11 EDT
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Lovely! Not totally a disaster for Gin and Cain, but damn close. I'm sure InuYasha has not finished scolding Gin about it either. It's Cain's own fault for not listening to Gin the whole time, no wonder he was confused about the subject matter!-his youkai - to funny! I think it is just a matter of time before Cain tackle-glomps Gin. As for Belle, I guess it's time to grow up. I wonder how the office tension will be? I also wonder how Kich will handle finding out the Gin is who Belle has hopes for saving her dad... Good stuff - I'm looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: May 26, 2005 12:01 EDT
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*sigh* I love your men! (and women too but Cain has me seriously amused)
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 11:44 EDT
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`Bad dog, Cain! Bad! Leave Gin alone! Down, boy!' LMAO! That has got to be one of the funniest lines you've had in any of your fics! hehe :o) I loved the whole coversation at the end with Cain and Gin. You're... just awesome. I love you. Great chapter. Oh, and I would have to say that Kichiro is way more spastic then Ryo... lol
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Reviewed By: werewolfpixie On: May 25, 2005 04:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say thank you very much for helping me to get out of my reader's rut. for some odd reason i have not been able to read anything. be it fanfic or just my fav book. thanks and this story is great. i really like belles character. oh and another question. what is the correct way to pronounce her full name? is it bella and niece or is there some special silent syllable type thingie? sorry late at night and drank too much mt. dew. my smarts left me the moment i took my first sip. keep up the good work. oh i remembered the other question. where did you find the name?
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Reviewed By: Simply a Lady (NSI) On: May 25, 2005 01:35 EDT
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All I have to say is this...lets just not hope they end up going to the same restaurant..... Even though it would be kind of funny....
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: May 25, 2005 00:02 EDT
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wow...why can i see the snowball rolling down the slope getting bigger and bigger, ready to crush the town. ...kich is gonna figure this out and blow an ass gasket, isn't he? i just stopped dead with a very loud 'ohhh no' when belle called kich. as cute as that is (which it really is adorable that they are going out to diner) i just see it ending in him seeing gin and cain (and leading to some really interesting material!!!) GREAT story as always, i really can't wait until Kich and Yasha find out who Gin is 'seeing'. hehehehehhehehehehe. also, really great way to handle belle and gin meeting, that really flowed well!!!! i love it!!!
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