| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: May 25, 2005 00:02 EDT
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wow...why can i see the snowball rolling down the slope getting bigger and bigger, ready to crush the town. ...kich is gonna figure this out and blow an ass gasket, isn't he? i just stopped dead with a very loud 'ohhh no' when belle called kich. as cute as that is (which it really is adorable that they are going out to diner) i just see it ending in him seeing gin and cain (and leading to some really interesting material!!!) GREAT story as always, i really can't wait until Kich and Yasha find out who Gin is 'seeing'. hehehehehhehehehehe. also, really great way to handle belle and gin meeting, that really flowed well!!!! i love it!!!
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Reviewed By: wlfhund On: May 24, 2005 23:28 EDT
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Oh My! I really really needed that! I needed a good laugh today. Gin - Harem - Gin - Harem. Oh my! Thanks for that visual! Bless you Sue. I loved this chapter! That was great. Oh my is Belle is in for a round with Kich or what? I can't believe she asked him out! That is great! Wlfhund
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 21:33 EDT
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yay more to read. great chapter. i love how belle set up cain and gin...perfect. and then she calls kich and now they're going out, absolutly lovely. i love how at the end belle's trying to avoid thinking about exactly why she called kich. this is a great story and i can't wait till the next update...update asap please, Zirra
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Reviewed By: Esther Tan On: May 24, 2005 21:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv yr stories. Read all your stories & luv everyone of them even Metamorphosis which U hv indicated as a contraversy but hey truth is sometimes stranger than fiction. Purity Justification is kinda different as I find it fun & light hearted. Boy! I luv when U put Cain in a fix & he's so cute (somewhat a little like Inuyasha). Imagine a Tai-youkai tongue-tied, really blows the mind. I like Kichiro too (more mature than Inuyasha guess because like what Kagome said in Purity 3, Kichiro is a balance between Kag & Inu so product "GREAT"). Keep up the great work. Rooting for yer.
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Reviewed By: bloomz-baby On: May 24, 2005 20:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHMYGODS!!! YOU CANNOT LEAVE IT THERE!!!! I'M DYING!!! *blood gushes out of wounds* YOUR EVIL AND MEAN!!! BUT I STILL LOVE YOU!!! POST MORE B4 I HANG MYSELF FROM SUSPENCE! You're awsome!!!
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Reviewed By: btrains126 On: May 24, 2005 20:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done. Ooohhh - is she gonna get it - I wonder who will be first. Kichiro or Cain? Where did you come up with his name anyway (you've probably answered this somewhere already). I was laughing all over the place. I wish I was actually there (in the story) because it was histerically great. Hope your next chapters are as good as this one. I'm reading Purity 3 also, Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 20:21 EDT
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whoa...AHAHA...throughout that whole chapter things seemed to be falling into place with setting the couples up, but then BAM! kich still doesnt like the idea of his younger sister going on a date and i forgot about that...silly me haha but belle is very smart when it comes to these things...cant wait till the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Lisa C [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 19:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, I like how Belle operates. Brilliant girl. Question, I seem to remember you mentioning that Purity 4 takes place about four years after Purity 3. Does that mean that we'll get introduced to Toga and Sierra's daughter/son? *breaks out the puppy-dog eyes* Pretty Please! And another question, What ever happened to Aiko? She was so cute when she was little in Purity, like when she would curl up in Inuyasha's lap. I kind of miss her really. We never got to know her like we did with the rest of the second generation. But that's probably just me. Anyway, love this chapter! You are the highlight of my day when I get home from work and I look forward to seeing what comes next!
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: May 24, 2005 19:12 EDT
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Oh boy...I sense lots family/relationship issues in the future. Now I understand the summary a little better. All Hell's gonna break loose, isn't it? Whoo boy...
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 18:01 EDT
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LMAO!! Belle just dominated this chapter from beginning to end. Her Machiavellian tendencies are going to get her in trouble, no matter how good her intentions. I'm worried how bad she's going to take it when all her scheming comes to light. Cain knows what she's up to because, apparently, this isn't the first time she's played matchmaker, but this time it's serious because he's already dangerously attracted to Gin. Kichiro has already figured out her habits, but he doesn't know 'who' she fixed her daddy up with, and after grumbling about how "no one is worthy enough for his baby sister", Belle is going to have to scramble to keep that quiet...at least until it's too late for the Izayoi males to stop it. Whew! Belle has her work cut out for her, don't she? Hehe, can't wait for that particular explosion. -- *sigh* I've had my fix...I'm good for a while now. Have to clean my kitchen, do the shelf-paper thing and start really unpacking now. Yay!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 17:46 EDT
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I just hope Cain and Gin, and Kichiro and Belle don't go to the same place for dinner. Would be pretty funny if they did though!
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 17:12 EDT
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I love it love it love it! I was wondering when Belle and Gin would meet. I'm glad they get along. What Belle did... that was just mean! Perfectly bad with the best intentions. But, oh what tangled webs we weave. I hope Belle doesn't get caught in one of her own weaving. Hmmm... things are definitely starting to get more interesting! Hehehe! Cain can't fight Belle and Gin. Another awesome post! XOXO! ~pagan_sedjou
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Reviewed By: yasha 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 16:38 EDT
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Everyone is in trouble especialy Belle. I reely cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: May 24, 2005 16:33 EDT
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(howls with laughter) you sure can set up some fun situations. seriously, when you write humor you set it up with the kind of finesse i see in neil simon comedies...excellent! now i can't wait to see what happens on the dates/dinners...
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Reviewed By: FarVistas On: May 24, 2005 16:17 EDT
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Lovely, lots of fun. I'm very eager for the next installment! (Need to work on my patience, I know. The principles of Zen elude me.) Yes, as has been observed, Belle has some growin' up ta do. (A common enough problem, youkai, hanyou or human.) Gotta cut her some slack, however. 17 is practically a baby. (Really, Kich, robbing the cradle! Uh...okay, I met my husband at 17, but of course that was different.) _______________________________________________ BTW, you don't have to have youki to have drawn-out arguments with yourself. (What's that old quote about arguing with a fool?)
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