| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: May 24, 2005 12:25 EDT
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the plot thickens - Belle is going to catch it from two directions! Gin probably will too. Cain is so lost already! He's so funny trying to rationalize that it's just dinner. Great stuff!
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Reviewed By: tatooinehomebound On: May 24, 2005 10:54 EDT
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you know, if humans found out that they talk to themselves insides their heads, they'd think they were crazy.
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Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: May 24, 2005 09:50 EDT
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I actually feel sorry for Belle - she does have the best of intentions but she is so very much going to get in trouble with both men!! *grin* My Favorite line: It is so important to our sanity that you just not answer that, Cain. *falls out of chair laughing*
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 24, 2005 09:23 EDT
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Interesting. Bell's right, if Cain isn't good enough for Gin, no one will be. I wonder what the implications might be for marriage between two Taj-youki families. Hmmm. It's actually a shame Belle got involved in the Gin/Cain relationship; Kitch is going to be mad and think she started the whole thing. Of course the relationship was already cooking along before Belle found out. She's going to get blamed though. Kitch is right, Belle is too manipulative. It's hard to trust someone like that and it's a shame because Belle actually seems to be a nice person. She just needs to find other ways to get what she wants. It's interesting watching these two relationships develop in parallel. Thanks for the great chapter!
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Title: Hoo boy!
Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 00:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cain's in trouble, all right. Heheheheheheh! Can't wait for the next one!
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Title: woho!
Reviewed By: book_worm_lover On: May 20, 2005 17:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great! i finally made it to the end of all of your purity storys, well the ones that are finished. they are fantastic! i love reading them. you update so fast. i just have one question from this chap, now that i am cought up to ask one, where was Bellie during this argument between Gin and Cane? i was just wondering. thanks for the story. i love the "there is someone arguing almost everything that you do, who is smarter than you, in your head" thats great keep it up, i can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: Bandit the Army Brat On: May 20, 2005 14:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Sue!!!!! Hope your well.Love the new chapter.It is great. See ya ^_~!!
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Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 23:08 EDT
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Drama, its wonderful. I think Belle was lying when she said Ryo's ears were softer. She's trying to deny her feelings for Kich. I wonder what Inuyasha is going to do if he finds out about the model and Cain.
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Reviewed By: nancey not signed in On: May 19, 2005 22:35 EDT
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I just wanted to say that this was my favorite chapter so far. I love the way he got worked up because he was told that his ears are not a soft. Keep up the wonderful writing, I love your work more and more with each new story. Thanks for sharing your talient with us.
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Reviewed By: Lisa C [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel sorry for the poor cake. Though being thrown into a, more than likely, very attractive man's chest has to be a pretty good way to go.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 19:17 EDT
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I bet I know what's coming...I bet I know what's coming...I bet I know what's coming.....but just in case I'm wrong...I'm not sayin a word...:D...can't wait to see what happens next...:P...till then...Zirra
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 17:40 EDT
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whoaa gin got MAAAAAAD! but thats pretty cool that cain could handle it well...and poor kich hes "annoyed" cuz of belle lol this story is turning out really well!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 17:28 EDT
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Poor Kich....will anyone ever think his ears are softer? That cake sounded good...untill Gin smashed it against Cain.
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 16:56 EDT
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I am loving this! Yep, it's the quiet ones you have to watch out for. They have the most volatile tempers. I loved his youkai's reaction to her temper. I love their youkai voices. They're so great! Another awesome post from you, Sue! Ah, this story is so awesome. I check my e-mail hoping you've updated. That's what my e-mail is for! Fan fiction! Anyway! I have to go study. I love you and the betas! You rock! ~pagan_sedjou
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Title: Cain's oswari
Reviewed By: yasha 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 16:46 EDT
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Cain has an oswari and it works a lot better then inu's. 1 little tear from Gen and he's begging for mercy. I like Gen's temper I guess she is not so sweet and inocent after all yasha 101
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