| "Seductive Embrace" Reviews/Comments [ 157 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: August 18, 2005 11:25 PDT
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OMG I love this story soooooooo much its just great and i cant wait to see what happends to Shippo and if Sessy goes to Kag to tell her so update it really soon thanks tootles.
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Title: Seductive Embrace
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 17:12 PDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (nli) On: July 23, 2005 02:19 PDT
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I ADORE THIS STORY! Its very incharacter. And a beautiful plot. The pairings kept in mystery. Strong hints toward Kagome/Kurama yet Hiei is interested in her in one way or another. Could they posibly develop more? Once again Im wishing for Kagome/Kurama/Hiei. Also I cant wait till Sess & Kouga encounter Kagome. Lets not keep your beloved reviewers waiting, huh? PLEASE!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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Title: Seductive Embrace
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 09:07 PDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Hiei and Kagome please?
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Title: ngh!!!
Reviewed By: Rock LobsterCA On: July 20, 2005 02:15 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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its interesting!!!i wanna see what happens next. pls update soon.
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Reviewed By: Eppy_dono [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 14:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This story is a good one, as well as believable. And you misspelled KUWABARA's name. Poor guy, they always do that to him. -hands you pocky- And I also am surprised that you matched their personalites closely. Quite a feat. -claps- I'm looking forward to any future chapters, so please, UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 14:07 PDT
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please write more! I love this story!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl(nli) On: July 09, 2005 20:58 PDT
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good chappie, update soon please
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Reviewed By: starwind327 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 18:04 PDT
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loved this line -`Go get another ice cream and do it again, except drop it on our chest.' lol. could not stop laughing. this is one of the few stories that i like then idea of kurama+kags, usually im all for hiei+kags. please update!
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Title: Review Chapter Eight
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 13:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
[First, let me apologize for not reviewing sooner. I've been taking late night driver's ed, and I'm extremely busy during the day.] Okay. I like this chapter, filler though it is (for the most part). We learned what happened to Rin and Kirara, there was fluff and "innocent" seduction. I like it a lot. Just let me see if I understand what happened. Kurama skipped out on the final part of the search (Genkai's shrine) to go see Kagome, leaving Yusuke and Kuwabara (or Kurabara) to do that part. So as far as I can tell, next chapter will be the more human half of the tantei at Genkai's, possibly including a meeting of all the tantei that evening to re-hash what the two learned (or failed to learn) from Genkai. I'm still waiting on Sesshoumaru's appearance here. Are you nervous about writing him or something? Will anything happen during the night at Fluffy's place? When will they notice Shippou is gone? When will the messenger get there? Will he get there? What will the Tantei (and Kurama) learn of Genkai's possible student? What will Hiei divulge (or refuse to)? What will Fluffy be like after 500 or so years? What was Fluffy's relationship with Kagome like before she left? When will Kurama pump Kagome for more small talk? Will Kagome ever get any training? Remember to keep straight how many days you've written so that you can write the next Kagome, Yukina and Genkai scene at the right time. ... ... ... ... Thanks for another great chapter (even if it was filler), Kin.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 12:53 PDT
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Love this chapter. Youko's character is coming out well. Playful, teasing and seductive but at the same time intelligent. Wonderful job, please update soon.
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Title: dragonpixie14
Reviewed By: tuskimiko On: July 05, 2005 21:49 PDT
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this is a good story keep it up, please inform me when you update it via email(dragonpixie14@aol.com) thank you tuskimiko aka dragon
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Reviewed By: White Fox 612 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 02:04 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very interresting, I wonder who Kagome ends up with, or if she would end up with both. The fire and the forest both need love. Do continue very soon ne?
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Reviewed By: puritygoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 13:16 PDT
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update soon
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Reviewed By: dangerangel On: June 29, 2005 20:56 PDT
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I thought this was very good, even for it's size. I know how hard it is with writers block, but it seem that you got through this one very well. I understand why Shippo is acting the way he is, with the temptress in all, I just think that you should keep in mind that he is a kitsune, so he would most likely have some kind of trick up his sleeve when it comes to mind controlling. I'm sure he has run across it during his travels, and he would have learned from it.
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