| "Seductive Embrace" Reviews/Comments [ 157 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 21:45 PST
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I'm glad that I've been able to be of some help :) I liked this chapter, poor Shippo is probably ready to butcher anyone that comes near him at this point, if he were able to anyway. I can't imagine Kagome's reaction to finding out what's happening to him. Hiei seems to have certainly triggered Kurama's curiosity with his questions. He should have known the Kitsune would pick up on what he was really wanting to know lol Awesome chapter, can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work and update soon please.
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 11:08 PST
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cute. So the pairing is Hiei/Kagome or are you trying to lead us in circles?
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 16:07 PST
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Hehe looks like Kurama just got a whole lot more interested in Kagome. Hmmm I don't blame her for daydreaming over a half naked Hiei. At least she has him thinking now, he's certain to want to keep a closer eye on her now. Good chapter, update soon please
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 14:18 PST
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I can wait to see how everything plays out! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 13:34 PST
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*claps hands* YAY!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kiros_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 13:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue. I like a bit of comedy with angst. Angst always seems to be dominate in a story but not this one. I like Kurama's descusions with Youko aswell. Kagome/Hiei? Kagome/kurama? kurama/kagome/hiei? Update soon please.
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Title: seductive embraces
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 12:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^sigh^ and to think this is a hiei/kagome pairing, it looks like a kurama/kagome pairing to me ...... ....... ..... ^cry!^
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 08:34 PDT
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....... THAT WAS EVIL!!! UPDATE!!
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Title: Review Chapters Nine and Ten
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 21:07 PDT
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I'll write a more detailed review later, bu tI have to say that I love the two newest chapters. Please continue to update.
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Reviewed By: Kougalover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 22:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter...well how to explain the broken glass.....the puzzle gets more interesting for Kurama...Please Update Soon.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 02:35 PDT
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I think a Hiei/Kag/Kur pairing would work perfectly for this story. And I cant wait till everything starts to fall into place. I ADORE your story PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Title: Seductive Embrace
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 13:58 PDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Hiei and Kagome or Hiei, Kagome, and Kurama please?
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Reviewed By: reimei-kage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 18:57 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay! An update! Please don't keep us (me) waiting that long again...please. I just can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 13:09 PDT
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irony, I just reread it and you updated ^_^
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Reviewed By: hiei1969 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 19:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so good, I would hate to see it abandoned. You are a very talented storyteller!Please update as soon as you get a chance!
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