| "A Marriage of Convenience for Whom?" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 06:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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also... maybe a one shot sequel to this story once it ends to find out how everyone is... just a wishful suggestion... can't wait until you finally end this...
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 04:55 EDT
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Hmm, I've always tried to be honest when writing a review, and I usually read stories I like... So here goes. I really adore this story. I like everything up until the ending. I feel that you ended it too quickly, summed it up too fast. maybe its because I want more to the story, but i feel the way i feel. Don't get me wrong, I love the characterization, and the plot line. I just think there should have been more too it. But Keep up the good work, and I will read more of your stories.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 19:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter update... so it ended... glad they're together in the end... great work... will wait for the epilogue... good job...
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 14:32 EDT
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OMG! Is it really over??????? *is sad* Beautiful story, I'm just sad it over, but glad that I get some type of closure now.
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 01:30 EDT
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The truth is finally revealed. I absolutely love this story! I finally finished reading up to this point and I feel like I'm feeling the emotions of the characters the way you describe it. Oh...this is so romantic and beautiful. Hope you update soon, but I don't mind when really...okay maybe a little ^ ^.
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Reviewed By: ra On: July 15, 2007 22:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep going! i must know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: shexshe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 16:44 EDT
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Finally the mystery is revealed. Nicely done. I will be waiting for your update.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 02:40 EDT
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great chapter update... kinda sad though... i feel bad for Kagome... i hope something good happens her way... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 00:07 EDT
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awww how sad
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 23:57 EDT
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*sniff sniff* wahhhhh.. Poor Inuyasha. Poor Kagome. They are just too dense to realize they are perfect for each other. Too trapted in what ifs, and tangled lies. I can't wait to see the next chapter. I hope you get a chance to update sooner, but I understand either way. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 18:51 EDT
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Aww... sadness that you won't be with internet for a while. I remember when I didn't have it and I had to go to the library. It was ...just so sad. Anyway. Good chappie. I wish Inu and Kags would stop missing on the important things like their actual feelings. Inu thinking Kags don't like him and vice versa. Those two will never learn... or will they?
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Title: fantastico
Reviewed By: Bri-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 17:55 EDT
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I'll be looking forward to when you return home ^^. Have fun at your friends house.
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 17:37 EDT
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*sings* When four becomes two...(pharaphrases Spice Girls). That...was.. Oh. I guess there's just no good way to handle reintroduction during those circumstances... perhaps kidnapping isn't a good way to break the ice anyway? Inuyasha also handeled that whole mate business really neatly. He said exactly what he ment in a totally clear and understandable way so there was no risk for misunderstandings. *breaks down* WHY?? WHY do they have to make EVERYTHING so DIFFICULT? I sewar, next up Inuyashas manager says that everyone thinks he would lose popularity in taking Kagome back or whatever. But you said next chapter will be happy, ne? Wait... don't tell me you're throwing in a Sango/Miroku-stall on us??? GAH!
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Reviewed By: babyblueyes On: July 09, 2007 11:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plzplzplzplzplz write again! i would love to read another chapter!!!! plzplzplzplzplzplz!!!!
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Title: @O@
Reviewed By: baka_mai_28(not logged in) On: July 08, 2007 23:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God i just love this story~! :D I cant WAIT to see what happens, keep it up~! ^_^
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