| "A Marriage of Convenience for Whom?" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: ra On: July 08, 2007 23:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep going!
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Reviewed By: babyblueyes On: July 08, 2007 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ppplllzzzz!!!! write another chapter!!!!!! i wanna know what happens next ppppllzzzz!!! =D pretty plz?
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 19:52 EDT
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Yes, I'm guilty of having written My Little Pony. I took all the fanfiction I'd written offline because after more than a year of not adding anything to any of them, I re-read them to see if they were worth resurrecting...and decided unequivocally, irrevocably...no.
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Title: nooooooooooo
Reviewed By: Bri-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 07:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Please update soon!!!!!!! This story is addicting and really amazing. I can't wait until the next chapter. There were soo many times where I was yelling at the computer for them to just tell eachother. PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 03:55 EDT
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great chapter update... so here comes the moment of truth... i hope... it's getting good... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 12:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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SNIFFLE...WHIMPER ...SOBBB!!!! MORE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 11:15 EDT
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Chapter Nineteen: *growls* Grrrr.... How could you stop there? *sob* It was so good! *sob* Wahhhhhhh...! Anyways, please, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 09:19 EDT
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Hey there! You let Kikyo's husband present himself as such twice, and it wasn't until the second time Inuyasha went ballistic. Was that intentional? Because it seems a little strange that he's so calm first time around. And I am happy Inuyasha FINALLY sees that there´s two of them! Let's hope he can bite back on his anger and feelings of betrayal and just accept that what was supposed to be an arrange marriage turned out to be one made in love. All good, ne? But you won't do that, will you?
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 04:53 EDT
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eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehhhhh!!! *jumps up and down with glee* you updated you updated!! yippie yippie!!!! Oh that was a bad place to stop, but finally finally Inuyasha gets a clue. Finally he figures/finds out that Kagome is Kagome and not Kikyou. Whooooo hooooo... And i loved the talk in the basement between Kikyous husband and Inuyasha.. I love the name down plays. Anyways, I hope you get inspired to whip out another chapter soon. I absolutely adore this story, and the suspense is killing me. Keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: bbbeleana On: July 07, 2007 04:25 EDT
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YAAAAYYYY!!!!! XD Thanks for the fast new chapter. LOVVVVEEE it!!!!
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Reviewed By: nat9380 On: July 07, 2007 01:58 EDT
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Love it. More. Soon. Please.
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 01:52 EDT
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ACK!!! You stopped right at the best part!!! Damn I can't believe Inu finally got his head out of his behind and realized that the two were totally different people. I wonder what Kagome will say when she finally puts the pieces together about InuYasha's own little secret. OMG! You're killing me here!!! :P
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 00:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story! I've seen it around mm.org and never took the time to read. But now I'm glad I did! You're very creative and this story is goin on my faves list.
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 18:24 EDT
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Thank you for updating! Poor Kagome. :( Dear Author, you have the power to make her happy! ;) Anyways, I just wanted to say thanks for the chapter, and to point out one annoying thing...you italicized something early on in the chapter, and forgot to close the italics < / i>...so almost the entire chapter is italicized. it made it a little difficult to read. Well, thanks!
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Reviewed By: StarSakura46 On: July 05, 2007 13:11 EDT
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Have I mentioned that I love this story? I was so excited when I came online and realized that it was updated! It's such a fun story I can't wait to see how things will work out. They will work out, right? You're not going to leave me with a sad ending? PLEASE!!! Update soon. Update often.
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