| "A Marriage of Convenience for Whom?" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 12:41 EDT
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Chapter 18: I don't see any problems... but then, I don't suppose I remember half of what went on before, so I'm not much help. Sorry! I thought this was a great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 11:50 EDT
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Thank you so much for upsating! Getting the email notification for an update to this story always brightens my day! I can't wait for the next update! But don't strain yourself! Thank you so much for updating! Are they going to lock Kagome and Inuyasha in a closet? It should be interesting, I'm sure. I'm looking forward to the next update! Thanks again for another great chapter! -Vagabond
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 09:53 EDT
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(Don't ask questions, don't preassure the authour!)Hrem... It felt so RIGHT when Kagome found Inuyasha at her apartement after they split up. I hoped that he, somehow, could use his twofaced situation and try the conversation again with new eyes...but no. If I was Kagome, I would have blazed as soon as I pulled myself together. Despite the heartache, I'd left the scene to regroup somewhere quiet where no one with personal interest could give their piece of advice. And if I was Inuyasha, I'd demand a better explanation - after the stages of rage and denial, of cause. But I am not, so...(loosing her mask) will you throw in Kouga again? Who is Kikyo's husband? When will Sango and Miroku stop using Inuyasha's and Kikyo's lives as an excuse to postpone their own? Will an apologize really make amends in Kikyo's heart, concerning she's the one really feeling guilty? I think she's just projecting her guilt on Inuyasha and that it will all backfire and make it worse! Gah, I'm sorry, but I get so excited reading this fanfiction, so the questions and ponderings about what's going to happen just flows out! I'm not expecting any answers, I'll just read and see, but I have to ask them still, because... because otherwise I'll burst! Fight the hardships, we are many who will remain your loyal readers!
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Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 07:33 EDT
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hey man i really enjoyed this chapter can't wait to find out if inu and kagome make up...and if the both find out their secert identities...
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 06:14 EDT
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*sends you waves of adreneline.. life time supply* lol I love the chapter. I'm glad you managed to get it out. Now If you can get the next one out in, lets say three day, I will be super happy. LoL. I wont ask any questions this time, I will just wait to see what you come up with, even though i sit here dying. In agony really, hoping and praying that the next chapter has goodies. *grins* keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 03:22 EDT
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that was good, so cool kagi is his mate awsome. but wat is so complicated about this i still can't pin point it.keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 02:12 EDT
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interesting story... good plot... but Kagome seems to be weak... eventhough she's just playing a part she can't seem to stand up for herself... she should just leave to get away from everything and everyone... without telling anyone where she's going... sorry just an observation and a wishful suggestion... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 02:02 EDT
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Eee! An update! I was wondering if this story had died.. I'm glad it hasn't. I really love it. Please, please, please!!! Update soon :) Don't leave poor little Kags waiting on pig-headed Yashie for too long.
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 01:48 EDT
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really great chapter! wh00t!!!!!! i love you! (not really, but you know...)
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Reviewed By: darkdork [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 18:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update!!!
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 16:53 EDT
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You need to update SOON!!! Pa-pa-pa-please?!?!? With many cherries on top!
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Reviewed By: ra On: May 20, 2007 15:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is soOo good! Keep going!
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Reviewed By: 102692 On: May 09, 2007 20:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"'Marriage of Convienence'" is SO good. Every time I get on MM, I look to see if it's been updated, and the last couple chapters were fantastic, I can't wait 'till there's more. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: tif On: May 09, 2007 06:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
inuyasha is a looser can you like make kagome leave the country and start a new life and make inuyasha suffer especially when he finds out the truth and cannt find kagome.. pls... make inuyasha suffer thanksss update soon pls...
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 02:14 EDT
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Wow. You sure let them have it, didn't you? This is going to be one hell of a cirkus in both media and privately. The best would be for Kagome to hide, wouldn't it, and leave Kikyo to explain since she's the one who has a career in Hollywood to protect - but then what about her relationship with Inuyasha? Is it time for Kouga to make a reappearence? Will Inuyasha officially be the one rejected by both in the media? When is Miroku going to get the hit of love from Sango? Will my questions ever end? I eagerly look forward to next update - I love this!!
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