| "A Marriage of Convenience for Whom?" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Title: inu 4ever
Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 01:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yup it was a good chapter. will u plz post up more soon?And look at: One Hanyou Pirate, One Noble Hanyou
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 23:35 EDT
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*no biggie on the editing thing, so dun worry* But waaaaaaiii the chapter ended there?! Please update soon, i want to know what happens to Kagome, and the low down on what inuyasha is feeling. Will Miroku confront him? *grins* now that miroku actually knows the whole story... What will kagome say to Kikyo and Sango? Will the paparazzi get pictures of them (kik and kag) together. If that nosy f*ckin tabloid reporter was able to get all that info on kikyo's real marriage, what about info on her family? Will the sisters be exposed for siblings?! Oh im dying to know now. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 17:31 EDT
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Chapter Seventeen: Thanks for the update! This chapter was, as always, wonderful. You write so well! It's amazing how you showed Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship (have I told you this already? *thinks* I might have. I'm telling you again). It all seems so real! It's a wonderful privilege to be reading such a story. Good job, and I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: jullun On: May 06, 2007 10:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Romantic chapter i must say. i have some stories i maybe will put up. i just wanted u to know what jeez was so u wouldn't take it as something bad, but update more plz. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: grace317 On: May 06, 2007 02:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! i love your story! and am super glad that unlike other fanfics i've read it hasn't been discontinued..... :D by the way..you don't like kikyo? =/ i like the way you write, perhaps you could do an inuxkikyo fanfic if you have the time. or inuyashaxsesshomaru! *blush* anyway, point is-good writing!(and you're asian, aren't you? you said ni hao.)
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 13:32 EDT
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Oh Gods, no! Nononononono! People CAN'T find out about Kikyo and Kagome's scam, nononono! It'll be the end of everything, all of it, for everyone! No! No no no! Now would be a good time for Kikyo's husband to turn out to be the best cover-up liar of all times. Now would be a good time for Kagome and Inuyasha to reveal their secrets at the very same time and thus be able to laugh about it. Now would be a good time for Sango to dress up like Kikyo and pretend to be her stand-in, despite how crazy the idea is. Now would be a good time for those things to happen, but you're going to let them have it, aren't you? That's a SNEAKY AUTHOR! And I SO LIKE YOU! : )
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 13:22 EDT
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Verbal Diarrhea... I like that, im gonna have to use that in an argument when my roommate starts swearing at me. *grins* Wow, this chapter was like the calm before the storm. Kagome got it right on the head with that one. :) I like lemons. Im a shameless hussy when it comes to them. At this point, I feel as if the characters havent known eachother long enough for a lemon. But later on, when Kagome and Inuyasha find out about each other, and can forgive eachother.. there should be a lemon. A small one at least, In my opinion. And if you need help writing one, i can help you. But no matter what i say, this is your story and you can say, "Autumn... shove it up yer arse!" and i will instantly back off and cover my arse protectively. *grins* I do like this story. I hope you continue to write it. Even if you need to shorten your chapters. And if you need an editor, I'd be more then happy to help you. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 12:59 EDT
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yay! great story! If you do end up taking a break, im sure we *the readers* will understand, but i do hope you can find some inspiration into writing out a few more chapters. After all, you said it was only 7 more chapters left. *grins* Sorry im anxious to read the ending of this story. Im glad that Sango finally put two and two together. Its about damn time, imo. lol. Is the next chapter going to be about Sango telling Kikyou about Inu and Yasha being the same person? And the beginning of Inu and Kagome's Honeymoon? What made you choose the mediteranian? Which Island are they going to? How long is the honeymoon going to be? Will you bump up the rating and write a small lemon? Will Inuyasha ever come face to face with both Kikyou and Kagome in the same room? Will Miroku come face to face with Kikyou and kagome in the same room? *I personally think Miroku should know that Kikyou and kagome are not the same person, just like Sango knows that Inu and Yasha ARE the same person. lol talk about split personalities* Miroku should follow Sango, when sango goes to call Kikyou.. It might explain a few more loose ends. I dunno. Its your story, i just have questions and such. Keep up the good work and i hope you get inspired. p.s. The wedding was great and the vacation was beautiful. thanks
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Title: NO BREAK
Reviewed By: lese majeste [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 20:49 EDT
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OMG I LOVE THIS!!! NO BREAK!!! Although, i'm very very very thankful for your hard work... Anyway, PLEASE!!! don't take a break. I want to know if Inuyasha's gonna have sex with her at their honey moon (god i'm such a perv) and I can't wait 'til he finds out she's Kikyo's sister and stuff... Okay update SOOON!
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Reviewed By: amumregisteredatthemomentmember On: April 29, 2007 07:48 EDT
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something to wait with anxiety!! more!!!!! you just can't leave it hanging!
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am for shamed. I haven't reviewed at all till now and I should have. You have made a very interesting premise that is fantastical to begin with and have made a MOST enjoyable story of it. You have taken the washed-out AU of 'movie-star' and made it not only intriguing, you've made it very readable and fun as well. I understand real-life commitments, however I hope to see more of this most original take in a properly written and formatted take. I thank you for this, most sincerely and want you to try hard on it. I like it very much. :D
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Title: thanx
Reviewed By: jullun On: April 28, 2007 05:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanx for the new chapter. i really liked it. hope u have more time to write more.so go on. and don't take jeez as a bad sign from me.jeez means YAY in norwegian. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
durn, im so gonna miss this story if you take a break, its a totally amazing tale youve woven, and i cant wait for each chapter you add! i thought this chapter was very good...it was well written, and totally beautiful, just like always. i love inuyashas promise to kagome...and YAY sango knows now!!! thats so crazy!!! i have some weird feeling that kagomes gonna find out before sango tells her and shes gonna be mad at him for not telling her...i cant wait.
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: Cherryblossombabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 21:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what agome is gong to think when she finds out about inu, i ope she's not mad they're starting to get along so well, their wedding was sooo romantic even if it was supposidely just for show cuteness update soon thank you Sincerely Cherryblossombabe
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 19:58 EDT
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Latest Chapter: Brilliant update, as per usual. I love how your updating more often now. Keep up the good work - and update soon! This new twist in the plot is wonderful.
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