| "A Marriage of Convenience for Whom?" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: cougiecat1 On: April 14, 2007 19:25 EDT
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yeah! you started updataing again! :) I've been having a lot of fun reading your story. I'll read your other story too, but I'd be very happy if you kept up this one. Especially since you seem to have found your muse again.
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 13:22 EDT
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Well hells, I can't believe I haven't reviewed for you yet. For that I'm, sorry. You've taken the well-overused ploy of 'movie-star' Inuyasha and given it a refreshing twist. Your style of writing is enjoyable and your plot is moving along nicely, especially with the latest bit of having Sango actually talking with Miroku, and showing a bit more what's going on with Kikyo. I hope you concentrate on this story for the next while. (to be honest, I haven't looked at your other works, but I will change that now and check them out.) You're doing a good job on this one and hope to see more of it soon. Cheers!:D
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Reviewed By: Kat_Castle On: April 08, 2007 13:36 EDT
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i love this story so much!!! it is so addicting to read!! cant wait for u to update!! *you rock like a mineral*
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Reviewed By: lil_one [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 19:47 EDT
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GREAT!! i loved it!! i really hope you update soon!! well if you can.. college is crazy, i understand
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Reviewed By: KaIvAl On: April 07, 2007 13:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hi there! well i'm amazed!! you write soo well i've been a great fan of your story!! Everything is perfect and i have to say this work is really one of the best i have read. You mixed a lot of things in the story making it wonderfull, i don't know what more to say because you are wrong when you say your story is a ''piece of shit'' well i considered a exhalarating, wonderfull and hilarious. Please continue it soon you left me in suspence!!! great fan of yours, val
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story...
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Reviewed By: Kikyo_must_die2 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 21:12 EDT
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NO! You HAVE to keep updating! Update until you're blue in the face. I love this story, it's funny, witty and fun to read. If you don't update I can garantee there will be some very angry and agressive reviewers. Which reminds me, I should update my story before my reviewers tell me to hurry up again. Oh, and what's with the name Mr. Kikyo? I'm sure the guy deserves better than that, even if he did get married to Kikyo. Anyway, keep updating I want to see how this ends.
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Title: meh
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 20:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update update update... update until its over!!! update until you cant update anymore! Dont stop the presses for this story! Its wonderful and witty and i love the switching and confusion. I cant wait for Kagome and Inuyashas' wedding. I cant wait for the honey moon and to see what happens. Will they finally figure out who is who, before the wedding, or after or durning the honeymoon. Will there be any hentai in this story? Will Inuyasha finally figure out that there are two of the higurashis due to the photographer taking kik's and her husbands' picture? And did you have to name him Mr. Kikyou? lol thats such a terrible name. :) You could have called him Hojou or Onigumo or something. *grins* But yes, please oh please keep updating this story. If not for your fans, then for yourself. *tries to bribe you with pocky* Keep up the good work and i look forward to the next chapter as soon as you get it out!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 19:44 EDT
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YAY! this story is so amazing. Im so glad that i found it again. i love that little bit with kouga! that was too awesome. great update!
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 17:39 EDT
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I'd never thought I'd like a story set in Hollywood, but you have indeed worked miracles with this. I understand why Inuyasha believes Kagome and Kikyo to be the same - after all, isn't he like that, too? But I do wonder why Kagome doesn't bother correcting Inuyasha when he calls her Kagome in Kikyo- form. Too chocked? Not noticing out of habit? and me, as probably many others, wonder who Kikyo's husband is and what he thinks about it all... however, the more Kagome/Inuyasha-stuff, the happier me! Take your time, enjoy, and ganbatte ne!
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 08:00 EDT
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I don't really get Inuyasha's plan, although that MAY have to do with the fact that the female brain is insanely superior to the males'. However, I still LOVE LOVE LOVE your writing style and the idea of the story of Inuyasha loving Kagome and Kikyou... as the same person (I admit I've been toying with the idea but couldn't find an angle I liked about it, not to mention the biggest writer's block). I hope you update soon even if you're out of the country, wherever that is. Even if it DOES take a couple of months, I still want to continue this story no matter what. InuKag forever cuz they're the perfect couple! But MirSan isn't THAT imperfect, either! Will there be any MirSan action soon? And will Sango ever realize that Miroku is Inuyasha the actor's agent (well, at least I assume Miroku is his agent) and Inuyasha the hanyou's friend??? And once again, intellect proves to be inferior to a woman's intuition!
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Reviewed By: @___@ On: March 24, 2007 05:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
After all this time. You have finally updated! I'm so .... HAPPY!! Please update soon
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 17:21 EDT
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yay! i read this story last year and you stopped updating so i freaked out and now i'm going insane because you updated again! this story rocks hard. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 11:33 EDT
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Wow, good job. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story - please have the rest out soon!
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Title: Love the story
Reviewed By: Cougiecat1 On: January 23, 2007 22:40 EST
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You shouldn't put your writing or this story down. It has a nice refreshing plot with plenty of angst and a lot of personality. I'm sorry to hear that you lost your original outline, and I hope you can figure it out again. I have checked mediaminer regularaly specifically for this story for months because it IS original and fun. It is one of the better AU pieces out there. You have taken a basic fiscally poor Kagome is paired up with super hot rich InuYasha plot, but you have removed the class differences (because Kagome is related to someone in that class so money and fame and fortune become liabilities instead of bonuses). Because of this you spend more time focusing on the emotions and confusion of the characters involved than in reinforcement of the fantasy setting. You have done a very good job keeping the characters separated not just by saying Kamoge-disguised-as-Kikyo but by using the tone and emotions of the other characters involved. It also helps that you havn't done any real Kikyo bashing :)
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