| "A Dark Past" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 02:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so Rin is basically you?? then i wish i could met you in rl XD no one understands the hyper side of me :P anyways i completely love this story XD interesting tiwist with Kikyo, she didnt really made me wanna kill her lol but i do hope you win the Fourth Quarter at Inuyasha FanGuild ^____^
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 17:35 CST
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Congratulations Sayo124-your story A Dark Past has been nominated for Best Completed Serial at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! ThisIsMeSmiling
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Reviewed By: BlueKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 04:24 CST
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awesome :) I love this story :D
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Reviewed By: taji On: December 31, 2008 03:27 CST
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awesome storyy! loved itt :)
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 20:16 CST
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p.p.s. FLAME!!!
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 20:14 CST
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P.S. Rin was to over the top get it fixed you bum.
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 20:13 CST
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Good story took ya long enough to finish it!!! Love your Beta Tiffy
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2008 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations on finishing this story! Happy Holidays and I hope everything works out well for you with all your issues. I look forward to reading more writings by you and I hope you do well in all your endeavors!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2008 20:49 CST
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I am quite impressed. When I first read the epilouge, I was like "Holy crap, maybe this is HER story!!!" but then you said you were fifteen, and I was like "bummer..." but then I realized you were my age and then I was like "Whoa, she has way more commitment than me!" Seriously, four years? crazy awsome!!! Haha, I'm a hyper kid, too. This was an excellent romance story, and the part I appreciate the most is the fact that you admit having the kids so young was just a pre-teen thing, and even then you had an excellent reason for having them young (you know, the whole 'kids getting misdiagnosed with depression' thing, a topic rather close to me.) Anyway, I hope you enbark on another IY fic, till then...here's your flame! Graaah! I hate this fic, this is terrible! Where's the sex? Where's the swearing? Blah blah blah realism blah blah blah angst blah blah! Well, I tried.
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2008 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
enjoyable. Sort of wish you could've gone on with the InuYasha-Kikyou-Kagome angst, and their ages are completely unrealistic (plus, don't you think 18 is a little young to be getting married?) but still, not bad. Post the epilouge!
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Reviewed By: bubble buster On: November 23, 2008 00:43 CST
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why is everyone so young in this fic? by law Sango can't be her age and be the pysciatrist. I can see some of the nurses being lpns and 19 at least. I work in pysch. maybe if you fix Miroku's age and title from whatever he is to head rn and be 29 and Sango can actually be a psychologist and be 29. the youngest doc in my department is 26 and they were a child prodigy. as for the others, Kagome could be 18 taking her 1st shot at interning. or she could be a 1st year medstudent. next time do reserch on the subject
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 23:57 CST
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Yay! You did it! You rock! And I liked it, too. The story, the ending. It doesn't really need an epilogue, but if you feel those ends need tying up, go for it.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I...LOVE...Rin! And I loved this story! Rotfl @ "Does the deranged one speak the truth?" It really was an interesting ride. Definetely do an epilogue! It'd be nice to see the wedding or some sort of glimpse into everyone's future. Congratulations on completing your first fic! ~Amber :D
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Reviewed By: Ikichira [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 22:34 CDT
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(nods philosophically) I totally understand. That happened with me too many times before...but you, my friend, are better than I, for I had two stories I hated that were going in circles, but I didn't finish either. (grins) Actually, I'm more like Kagome. People wish I could act dumb sometimes too, to which I promptly respond, "There are plenty other people to act dumb for you monkeys. I ain't one of them." It saddens me that Inuyasha's throwing himself back into the old spiral once more, but I do hope good things soon happen for our lovely couple.
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 20:38 CDT
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Oh my. I want to bitch slap Inuyasha for the last two chapters. Thank you for the next installment. I totally understand being tired of your own fic. It happens. XD I'm looking forward to the next chapter. You may hate it now, but I'm still enjoying it.
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