| "A Dark Past" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Reviewed By: KittieCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 21:39 CDT
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I love this story. I hope this wasn't the last chapter. Please update soon, this is a great story. Well written, well thought out and well executed. Keep up the stellar work!
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Reviewed By: penguinsrule [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv it!!!!! Hurry up and write the next part, im gonna cry until u do...... its sooooooooooooo cute!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 22:49 CST
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TSK TSK TSK what have I told you about posting unedited stuff??? LOL Oh well I just finished editing so I will send it to you.........someday!!! LOL ok well soon but you need to write your little butt off cause March 17th is coming fast!!! And April 1st & 5th & 17th sooooooo write write write!!!! OOO ok well im going now. I havent left a review in a long time so this was way way way fun fun fun!!! lol mwahahahahaha oooo this chapter was cute but sad & i wish you would hurry up & write ooo & read Twilight!!! Byez byez Lexis
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Reviewed By: luxurious [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really did enjoy this chpt a lot...U really need to update. I hope its a happy ending like the story she wanted.
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Reviewed By: luxurious [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 13:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really did enjoy this chpt a lot...U really need to update. I hope its a happy ending like the story she wanted.
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 01:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep updating please. it just keeps getting better and better and im going to try to wait patiently but i dont know how long i can hold out... LOL so please update again soon
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Reviewed By: kjcvhsckljvds On: February 17, 2008 12:28 CST
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plz write more i love this story
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Reviewed By: kjcvhsckljvds On: February 17, 2008 12:28 CST
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plz write more i love this story
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Reviewed By: kjcvhsckljvds On: February 17, 2008 12:28 CST
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plz write more i love this story
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Title: Ur mean!!!
Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 04:54 CST
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Write soon!!!! Vewy sad ending made likkle dwagon-girl cry! Funny music at the time I was reading.... For some reason I was listening to James Blunt Goodbye my Lover..... Extremely depressed now..... Love Draca
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 02:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... lots of drama... feel sad for kagome... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now thats what I call a Valentine's present.... Great ending, either though it was a sad one but hey they're going to meet again right? So worries. Well hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 12:16 CST
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Thanks for the present! Glad to see InuYasha get to leave...but now what happens? And have fun with the Stand. That's one of my favs.
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Title: another review
Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 06:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
so you have me thorouly intreiged. yay inuyasha finally opened up and told kagome, the day before he leaves. what does menoumaru have planned for them? will there be any sango/miroku bits later on? does kouga find out about kagome being inuyasha's nurse/babysitter/girlfriend? why didnt you just call this story 'a million questions' instead of a dark past? lol jk. but oh yah, i liked the game of tag, that was cute. and you should really put in some more about ellen. and im really sad that shippo was killed. =( but i guess it was neccessary. oh and are you gonna have kikyou killed? cause thatd make me really happy.. and menoumaru too of course. will inuyasha invite kagome to his birthday party? i really hope you'll be putting in a nice amount of rin in since he's going home soon, she's one of my favorite characters. and umm yah i guess thats all heh. like all the questions? can you tell im ACTually entrigued by your fic? =) please update again soon. really really soon.
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Title: quick review
Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 05:50 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
im only on chapter 23 so far but i just wanted to say.. awesome story so far. but theres one thing thats reeaally bugging me. you repeated SO many questions that went between Kagome and Inuyasha. i mean ALOT of them were repeated.. like 70%. it gets annoying to read the same shit over and over and over again. but yah good story otherwise.. so imma keep reading it now. =)
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