| "A Dark Past" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aozora_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 19:04 CDT
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ack! I love this story! I'm so wrapped up it was a bummer when I got to where you last updated. *sigh*. And so the plot thickens. Little Inu is falling in love, AWW! lmao xD. Great job so far. Love, Ao. P.S. I've got an idea as to what Kikyou did. A certian friend-turned-bastard had something to do with it yes?
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Reviewed By: Photographing Poetry [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Jesus, you've got me really curious as to what Kikyou did to make Inu so hesitant to tell anybody. Did she like, rape him or some shit?! ... Oh good lord... I can just see it. "Oh, Inu-chan, drink this soda, you must've had a long day at work..." and while poor, unsuspecting Inu drinks it, he has nooo idea that it has the rape pill in it. So she rapes him and when he wakes up and gets one-helluva'-shock, she asks him "Aren't you happy?" and he just goes crazy. Hm. Or, maybe, she found a way so that he couldn't take a mate... is that why he's so mad and angry? Jesus, I'd kill the bitch. Anyway... I'm lovin' the story. The mystery as to why Inuyasha's there and what Kikyou did is killing me, but all of that will be revealed in due time, eh? And who the hell was that on the phone? Was it Kagura, or maybe Inuyasha's mother? I'm wondering. Does Kaede have something evil pulled up her freaking sleeve? Jeez. And why would they call Miroku away from work? Did they want Inuyasha to spend time with Kagome? Hee, in one of those afternoons of "fun", Kagome should really throw him off his rocker and take him to a rock concert or some shit. I'm sure it'd kill his sensitive hearing, but at least he couldn't complain about it being boring, eh? Anyway, I'm hoping you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kiri On: July 09, 2007 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh geez...I feel bad for the unresponsive patient... All the patients at psychiatric clinics must get extremely tired already, just from having to go to a session EVERYDAY...but having to go see their psychiatrist TWICE everyday?! And for TWO hours?! And DOUBLE on WEEKENDS?! O_______________O That would just be so...so exhausting...so incredibly emotionally draining...I think I'd just collapse on the ground and stay there for a month... That phone lady is an evil...EVIL woman... And Kaede...so many secrets...at first, when she was plotting with phone lady and Sango and they said "We'll have him out by his birthday", for some reason, I got the impression that they were gonna throw him a surprise party......XDDDDDD;;; God, I'm stupid...= w =;;
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Title: Great!!
Reviewed By: etaotn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 10:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! You are great!!! I love this story and now that I have read it I need more!! Please Update!!! I NEED to know what will ahppen next. Who is at the phone? What is Miroku Kaede & Sango preparing? Is Kagome falling for Inuyasha as well? Please update ASAP!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 22:53 CDT
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I meant story, not artwork, sorry... I was using a form letter.
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 22:46 CDT
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Your artwork has won an award from the Feudal Association for the April 2007 term! Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month. http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/april2007awards/Best-AUAR-Fic-3r d.jpg After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/Awards_April2007/Awards.php The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. We just finished our sixth term in existence! Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: December Love 05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is one of my all time favorites! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Articulate girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 22:36 CDT
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This is good for a 'fluff beginner' lol, I enjoyed reading that, I always love reading about the fluff between those two (no matter how brief it may be) it's the feelings, words and atmosphere that the author puts into the scene, it what makes the fluff well.... *Extra fluffy*
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 07:46 CDT
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lol! I love this oh so much! However that voice in his head is rather irritating. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: cartel lover On: April 10, 2007 01:24 CDT
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i noticed that you like to update on holidays! thats fine with me as long as you update this awesome story. oh oh kagome gets collect her prize and you didnt tells us what it was! thats so evil =)
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol...oooo love is in da air...hehh^^ chessy i no.....anyways update soon.....by the way is ellen coming back in anytime soon to make the two "lovebirds" start another blushing contest? hehh^^
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Title: Chapter 32
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 06:31 CDT
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It's nice to learn more about Inuyasha and Kagome. ^^ They both had lives after all before they ended up in the institution. Inuyasha arguing with his youkai is perfect and hilarious. Those moments are definitely special, as are his moments with Kagome. Inuyasha certainly has a deep and intricate past. Poor guy, I'm glad he has Kagome there with him. I'll be on the lookout for the next chapter. ;)
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 05:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, very well done. Its funny how you make Inuyasha and Kagome act around each other, too funny. I hope you update again and keep it up. Peace.
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Reviewed By: anubis_himura nli On: April 08, 2007 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!! Happy Easter! Nice update!! kee up the fabulous work! ~ Anubis
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 18:00 CDT
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Your story/artwork has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open April 1, 2007 - April 30, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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