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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 10:30 CDT
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Wow. Kagome has a speech for everything! Does she stay up at night thinking about how to make speeches about random objects? I can see it now, "Oh Inuyasha! You're just like this Reese Peanut Butter Cup! I mean, it's made up of chocolate and peanut butter, they're two different things that you wouldn't think go together. Just like your demon and human sides. But look, they combine into a delicious treat. Oh sure, some people don't like chocolate or are allergic to peanut butter, so they're incapable of enjoying it, hating it for what it is because it can kill them. It's delicious, deadly, and hated, just like you! Don't look at me like that, I spent all night coming up with this metaphor when I could have been eating my candy!" And you're such a tease with the Menomaru stuff. But how good could he have been at his job if Inuyasha could find out the gory details by googling him? And it took 22 chapters but they finally kissed! I bet that's coming up in the one question game soon. This is going to get interesting because it looks like someone's gonna get fired (which would make their relationship ok) because she's stepping into the one thing that makes Kaede get off her ass: making her patients miserable! Seriously, when he gets out, I hope Inuyasha hits her with a malpractise suit. How could he lose once he plays the "They had me going to an 18 year old who just finished high school and whose family wanted me dead instead of an actual doctor!"
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Reviewed By: cartel lover On: September 04, 2006 00:35 CDT
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you know this is the only story i review. its my ultimate favorite! its about time they kiss i can't wait til you post the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 21:15 CDT
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You can NOT leave it there!!! I have been waiting for that kiss and you can't leave it there!!! Nooo!!!! Not fair! Not fair! Good chappy but update soon!!
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Reviewed By: amayahime1 On: August 31, 2006 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your back! Finally. Hmm... Well your story is very well written and enjoyable. You have minimal spelling and grammar mistakes. This type of plot is not one often used in the Inuyasha fanfic universe, and the ones I have seen done are less than perfect compared to yours. All-in-all... GOOD JOB! GOLD STAR FOR YOU! *pulls out star sticker and sticks it on computer screen*
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 13:15 CDT
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how did he get in his room in the end??? cause how would he open a door 4 kagome if hes on the outside of the door???
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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 20:58 CDT
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YAY! It's back! Well, that session was certainly interesting... Though I can't really blame Inuyasha for telling his friend's girlfriend about his friend's past, er, employment... That's really the sort of thing that a girl should know about her fiance. And that blow up at the end... I'm not even going to try to guess what that was about. But now they're going to tell Kaede... Why are the words Sodium Pentothal popping into my head? Hey, it has been used in psychiatry. Could happen. Kaede seems like the type. Speaking of Kaede, how hasn't she noticed that one of her employees hasn't been coming in for a few days? Does she only pry into her patients' lives and ignore the conduct of her employees? And bad Kagome! Encouraging Sango like that. Sure, it's just like Kagome to not point out other's shortcomings (unless it's Inuyasha), I mean what's the mental wellbeing of countless future mental patients compared to the feelings of one incompetent, unqualified, and clueless colleague?
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Reviewed By: cartel lover On: August 28, 2006 20:31 CDT
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oo wow best story ever i waited all summer for the new chapter! glad your back
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Title: Sad
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I you UPDATE one more time before then!^_^ I love this fic alot till then have a save and happy summer!
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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 23:41 CDT
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Sigh... Why is it that all of Kagome's fun seems to involve harming animals? Not only is she a bird killer, she's now a puppy taunter. The puppy will probably be put down if nobody adopts it, and here comes Miss "I Hate All Slang And Animals" to get its hopes up of finding a home and not being euthanized. After that stunt, Kagome should never lecture anyone about bad manners ever. She completely wasted that shelter worker's time with her loitering. Though that was a nice moment later in the car. And why is she asking him why he doesn't hang out with his friends? He can't. He's locked up in a loony bin. Doesn't she realize this? See now, why wasn't Kagome on the ball like that when they were playing 20 questions? She'd probably own him (as much as you can own someone at 20 questions) now if she tried to play again. And Sango possibly becoming a good shrink someday? Ha. Wayne Szalinski couldn't get a good shrink from her. (Oh yeah, 80's movie reference)
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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 14:54 CDT
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I started off feeling a little sorry for Kikyou. Inuyasha was just HARSH in that flashback. But on the other hand, she had to have known how he'd react. She just kept picking at that particular scab, so from that perspective I have no sympathy for the pain, but he could have been less blunt. I can just see Kagome as being so anal that she wants to wipe all slang off the face of the Earth. I bet she was one of those kids in school who went around going "You can't start sentences with AND or BUT!" (even though you can) It makes me happy to think of her like that, gives her some quirks. And them fixing eachother. It sounds so... dirty. And sexy. But dirty. I seriously thought they were going to get it on from the chapter title. And more sessions with Sango? W00t as the hacker wannabes say today. So Sango doesn't like it and gets uncomfortable when people pry into her personal life. You'd think this would make her ask less uncomfortable questions, but no. She should be commited, just so she'd know what it's like. She actually asked if he was a Hanyou? Even if that was just an uncomfortable segue after realizing she was talking about the positives of Youkai exterminating to someone who's part Youkai, she just keeps showing a stunning lack of awareness of people around her. Is she so self-unaware that she doesn't realize she has this flaw that will keep her from ever helping anyone in the capacity that she wants to? And don't her bosses notice this? Do they not screen the volunteers that will be working with the crazy people? How did she get the ok? Does Kaede secretly hate the people under her care? Or is she just senile? And we get the real reason Inuyasha wouldn't touch Kikyou with a ten foot pole, and doesn't seem interested in pursuing anyone; it'd be forever. But I really don't think Kagome should be complaining about him being mean when she's threatening to starve him because she's nosy.
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Title: Update!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok why is Sango so damn supid!? I mean did she just ask him if he's a half-breed? I like that he feels he can trust Kags. Well ya know what I want....UPDATE UPDATE!!!! so can read all about!^_^
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 23:33 CDT
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Awesome I love this story I can't wait till you update again
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! I loved it update soooooon!!
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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 23:17 CDT
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Ack! How'd I miss this? Anyway, the great mystery of the door is revealed and it's... a hereditary clumsiness with doors. That was unexpected. You'd think that sort of thing would make him not actively seek out the finger jamming, ear mutilating monstrosities. But he got passed that, so good on him. It gives me great amusement that Inuyasha was in an argument over sunsets and flowers that was bitter enough to help lead him to screwing over his friend. It seems that friendship was dead long before the colouring fight, they just didn't know it yet. And I now officially believe that Kagome is Kaede in disguise. There's no way anybody under the age of 90 goes to feed ducks in a pond as an afternoon of fun. (What's next, a wild night of bridge?) I don't think they've had a scene together either... Kind of like how Clark Kent and Superman are never seen together. I wonder if Kagome will think feeding them bread is fun when it swells in their bellies and they die of Avian Botulism, or when the leftover pieces decay and make Algae bloom out of control and screw over the fish. And that great feeling of dependancy she gets won't help the birds once they've gotten dependant on human handouts and starve in the winter because they can't find food for themselves. HA! Take that, sappy blah blah blah speech! And what kind of hospital are they, giving inedible food to patients... Nevermind, answered my own question... And ain't is in the dictionary. I looked it up once so my mother would stop saying that exact thing. Doesn't make it correct to use, but it does stop that particular argument cold.
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inu so cute when he play mad about something. I have one thing to say......................UUUUPPPPPDDDDDDDDAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTT Update SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNN! Soon!
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