| "A Dark Past" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kira562 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my lord! I was going through all of my favorites, you know rereading them and deleting the ones I didn't want anymore and well, when I came to this, I was surprised. I'm not the type of person to like dark fics. But now that I have reread it, it is amazing! The chapter when Inuyasha admits to himself that he is in love with her - I'll tell you, I just started crying. This is a beyond amazing story and you need continue writing it so I can figure out what happens and everything so I'm not hoplessly confused at all anymore. Okay? I would have never guessed about Kikyo and what she did - that was a huge surprise! Gah, thank yo so much for writing this. And I love how you made Inuyasha have conversations with his Youkai, tell you what, that made me giggle. So basically, after I have basically written too much, thank you for writing this and please hurry up and update.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Love the late present you updated... don't even care its late. And the 'lovey, dovey' stuff at the end was sweet, I like it. But it kinda sucks for Inuyasha that he was there because they 'asumed' instead of 'asking' about the problem... (sighs) Well they'll learn the hard way, I guess. Anyways, hope you update and keep it up. Peace.... P.S. Merry, late, Christmas to you too....
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 12:27 CST
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^^ sayo i completely agree with your editor - GREAT story i loved this chappie!! Almost made me cry at the end tho - which is a good thing XD Merry Christmas!!!! - Ookami Hime Suriya
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 05:59 CST
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Glad that you updated.... Now I'm really looking forward for the next chapter. Can't beleive Kikyo just showed up out of the blue like that... I wonder what MenouMaru is planning to do to Inuyasha and to Kagome if she gets in the way.... Well hopefully you'll update so we can find out soon. Peace...
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Reviewed By: KemicalRomantik [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 18:47 CST
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YEAH! You updated and surprisingly I think I loved this chapter even better than your last one. Believe it or not. Anyways. Love the story and I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: hfjdhgf On: November 02, 2007 08:55 CDT
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love it!!!!
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Title: AW....
Reviewed By: Ender_kb [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved that Kagome asked if he'd miss her. That was great. The fact that he couldn't give a smart come back was awesome. His feelings are starting to control him. I had hoped for a little more tension between the two, but I guess I can wait for that in the future chapters. Keep up on the good work.
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Reviewed By: cartel lover On: October 31, 2007 01:53 CDT
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oh em gee! this chapter came out of nowhere. i was about to turn off my computer but i saw i had a new email so i checked and there was the notification. i was so very happy.=]. i missed this story alot it is one of my favorites! and i loved this chapter too. i can not believe miroku is coming back .tear. but kags and inu will still be able to see eachother. right? [i hope so] =].happy halloween.
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Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok well basically i am loving your fanfic as it is one of the est i have read woth only a few spelling mistakes and it actually has a great plot. (i know i sound so surprised)but yeah thats all i have tosay and ican't wait to see what you ill do with hte stoy and i wnt to know whats goung to happen between kagome and inuyasha!!!!
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 15:48 CDT
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I read this and the way you talk is cute! Thogh the story is pretty good I'm guessing that the woman on the phone a few chapters back is his mom.
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Title: Chapter 33
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 23:09 CDT
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I'm happy that Inuyasha has finally come to terms with his feelings and is able to admit them to himself...the next step being admitting them to Kagome. ^^ Welcome back!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 21:27 CDT
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dude I loved it! yeah! Inuyasha said he loved her!!!!!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To tell you the truth, Iwas suprised to see this update. And yeah I thought you died off right then and there, but hey you updated and thats all that matters. Hopefully you'll update again and keep it up. Peace... P.S Love the kiss scene (smirks)
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Title: Emotions
Reviewed By: Ender_kb [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this fic for a long while and I was so upset that you were gone for so long. It's okay though! 'Cause you're back and that makes it all better. I love the tag scene. It was great and I really felt the emotions involved. Beautiful. I only wish that your chapters would be longer. :( Welcome back! I look forward to many more chapters!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 18:14 CDT
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Good chapter. I enjoyed it. I don't normally go for AUs, but this one caught my interest and has held it.
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