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Reviewed By: AMZ On: January 23, 2007 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey umm I dont rember my mediaminer name thingy so..abyways .. Ive been reading ur fanfic for 3 days and I think its great .. Im not much of a reviewing type.. actually this is VERY VERY rare .. and Im not really good at it anyway lol ..T_T Im just wanted to say ..pwease update soon lol =)
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 22:35 CST
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KAWAII!! That was so cute and fluffy at the end there!! We need more moments like that one! Good chapter!!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 10:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update as always but i wish he would've said more!! well till next time then.
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Reviewed By: silvershadow1551 On: January 19, 2007 02:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: werxa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 10:37 CST
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oooh, soooo sweet, I realy liked it.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 05:09 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the fluff you put in there, it was... sweet. And I was wondering what took you to update, thought you wouldn't update on this story but glad you didn't. So in hopes that you would update and keep this up. Peace.
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!! That made me happpy. I'm not particularly loquacious however I must say that this update was absolutely fabulous and that I look forward to more - as I always do from you and from this piece. I adore Inuyasha's human night because it means he'll be so much nicer! I just adore when the kindness that really inhabits him deep down can come to the surface. So, enough of my babbling, without further ado yay! and thanks for a fun update! :) (PS. I ADOORE Wicked - I bet it was brilliant! Hope you had a good time!!!) ^-^ - Ciao ~ Anubis
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Reviewed By: cartel lover On: January 17, 2007 20:24 CST
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yay! finally i was so worried you werent goin to finish the story. i really enjoyed this chapter its about time inuyasha cares for kagome like that and i loved when he got jealous =) thats always good so it shows that he does care about kagome. update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Articulate girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 18:36 CST
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I think that was a good attempt at 'fluff' i write 'fluff' all the time, i really enjoyed your fluffy chapter!
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Reviewed By: ac135 On: January 07, 2007 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really have enjoyed the uniqueness in your story. So far out of all the other fanfics I have read your's has been one of the best. Although you have a style of writing that does not go into detail, I still enjoy you story because you allow the reader to use their imagination to a certain extent. The thing that I love the most about your story is that Inu and Kag do not immediately jump into their relationship. So many other fanfics just jump striaght into them having a serious relationship but you took time into developing a mind capturing story. Well done and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 22:32 CST
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Okay here is all the stuff I think that has yet to be revealed. Inuyasha is not in a more private facility because quite frankly that is where everyone would look for him. This is probably a small reason his family doesn't visit. It would just bring more attention and any good mother would not want people to have a reason to stomp on her "lowly hanyou" son's success. As far as Miroku treating him badly. I don't think that's true. He volunteers to take care of him. As for his behavior well he has been dealing with him a lot longer than Kagome so I think some of her accusations were a bit harsh. Sadly people get tired when they are around someone negative all the time. Mikrou is overly peppy because that is the sanest way to deal with an overly negative person. Who else noticed Kaede was going to have Kagome care of Inuyasha? I think they were shocked Inuyasha approached her. They wanted to see if they could help him help himself by letting Kagome be around him. I don't consider Kaede the way you described. I think that she is fed up with some of the people there and can't do anything about it. Patients that just refuse to or can't get better. Workers that don't necessary help them in anyway other than carting them around. I know Ayumi helped Kagome take Inu out but I disliked her as soon as she opened her mouth. She insulted all three of them in her own way. And she was rather nosy. I think Inu (and Koga) was TOO polite. For all she knew Koga could have been in a major break through and she interrupted. If their caregivers thought there was a problem they would have came over there. I'm not saying asking personal questions was right but the problem should have been better dealt with. How will Koga react when he finds out Kagome has been looking after Inu? I like your "interpretation" of Koga's problem. ADD was it? In all honesty it would explain a lot in the original series. The things I could say about Sango. I am happy you state she is NOT a psychiatrist as an aspiring relationship counselor would feel beyond insulted if you had. At best she should be working on her bachelor. This is why I am not so hard on her counseling skills or lack there of. She doesn't have any because she hasn't yet learned anything. I don't understand how she got that "job" usually a replacement would be called to see the clients until the doctor's return. But it is just a story. I would love to say more on her but space is limited. . Like the whole "depressed" thing. Not everyone is depressed and even if he was why in the heck do you keep saying the word over and over? That's like telling a person with bulimia not to put their finger down their throat over and over. Are you trying to help or make it worse? Moving on. What did Kikyo do? I think she did something that was 1st of all stupid and any normal, sensible person would just not have done. She was trying to figure out a way to further his career only to find out she had to pay some high, possibly backstabbing favor to "help" Inuyasha. She did it all in the hopes to prove to him she was ready to be his mate. She betrays him in but could only see in the aftermath. Thus making it more obvious that she just didn't understand youkai ways until he lost his temper with her. I'd like to say it was as monumental as I am making it sound because while he can't forgive her he doesn't hate her. But this is Inuyasha here. If you have the classic Inuyasha/Kikyo relationship then he forgave her for many, many, many things that one should never even consider. I also noticed that you have made Kikyo a bit whinny. Is this done on purpose or does it just look that way because we don't know what is going on? I look forward to your update. Sorry about any spelling errors here or in my email. I had meant to review long before now but at least it's here now. Good work and I hope to see an update soon.
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Reviewed By: a_h nli On: November 16, 2006 19:35 CST
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o0o0o its his night of weakness isn't it! ooooohhh!!! *happy jumps for joy* i need more! hehe great update as always!!!
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Reviewed By: luxurious [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 15:33 CST
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I think you have a really good story on your hands. I love the characters and how there personalitys on the show fit with thier roles. I think you should also definatly update real soon. =]
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 21:37 CST
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lol cute!! I loved it! We need more fluff in this story! More cute moments more kisses! I love it!
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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 22:50 CST
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Oh, can't you just feel the love between them? I like how their anger over a stupid argument overpowered the awkwardness that's sure to follow. And Dr. Dai... Nothing but a glorified guidance counselor. Somehow I doubt that trying to gossip with him is the way into Inuyasha's head. If he really wants to know what's going on he should just drug Inuyasha's food. Even if it didn't work, it'd still be entertaining, which I would think would be more important. But then again I'm kind of a misanthrope, which means Kaede would probably diagnose me as a vegetable. And awww.... he likes Rin. (no I don't know why I just did that) And why would he apologize for calling Souta names? There was no name-calling. In addition to being excessively gullible, Kagome's now delusional. Well, at least she's working at a mental hospital, so it's not like she'll have to travel far. (Oh wait, looking back he called him a twerp. But I'm still standing by my Kagome needs to be locked up statement. I mean, her ideas of fun always involve loitering and hurting animals) And it looks like the new moon is coming up. We've had a lot of normal Inuyasha talking to his demon, I wonder what it'll be like when he's a human. Is the demon more chatty? Does it get along with his human? Or is it even more useless? And how and why Kagome's going to stumble into his room while he's human, because there's no way that's not her last question.
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