| "A Dark Past" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 04:14 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder if Kagome is ever going to see Inuyasha's human form soon, hope so. Anyway great chapter, really love it, and hope the others will come very soon. Oh and I really, really hope you get better. Well until then.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: rerererere On: November 09, 2006 02:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really nice, update soon!
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Reviewed By: cartel lover On: November 08, 2006 19:29 CST
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love this story!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 07:27 CST
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I love it! Love it love it love it! SAngo was really off. I can't be;ieve a center would hire people who diagnos people with the wrong treatment. You're going to be my girlfriend! FINE! lol priceless. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the ending to that chapter was beautiful!! :) Thanks for brightening up my night!!!
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 16:04 CST
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OMG!! That was awesome! I am still laughing over it! Hahahahahahahahaha!!! Update soon!! We need more fluff between the two anyway!
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Reviewed By: yashamaru1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omgosh wow I cant wait till next chapter... I love this story alot... update soon! Ja
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Title: update...
Reviewed By: ominousfog [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 22:39 CST
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update.update!Update!UPdate!UPDate!UPDAte!UPDATe!UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 14:18 CST
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O_o... cliff hanger? CLIFF HANGER!!?? WHY?! please update asap! this story is so... so WOW! i can't wait to read what happens! OMG OMG!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 12:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this last chaptrer is funny as hell!!!!!!!!! please update.
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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 23:18 CST
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Wow, that was quick. You're going to spoil us... And yes I know that Kaede knows. I'm just saying that Kagome and Inuyasha should be suspecting that Kaede knows, because none of them are that profoundly stupid. So I was wrong about the activity Kagome had chosen, but I was right in that it involved loitering. And did she take him to Chuck E. Cheese (or a reasonable knock-off)? I can sort of understand that though, if she had to take Souta there anyway she'd probably want to share the pain. And holy PMS Batman. That blow up of Kagome's was completely uncalled for and rude. Inuyasha's opened up to her (well, a little anyway) and she just completely threw it back in his face with that finding a perfect slut comment. Nothing he said warranted that, especially since he didn't say anything bad. I would have smacked her. Though I guess getting her fired for dating the patients will suffice. It also looks like Kagome has a weakness for not thinking things through when she's angry. It's only fair since Inuyasha has that whole crying girl thing. Though I hope for their relationship's sake that Kagome doesn't get to choose all the dates. Who goes to a baby clothing store for fun? I mean really. Everyong there probably thought she was a pregnant, unwed teen mother. Eeep, looks like another short one.
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Title: kudos
Reviewed By: InuLuv [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kudos to you =) Some fics that contain "disable" themes dont come out to well. I really enjoy the inu kag feelings in the story. Cant wait to read more. I am a new fanfic writer can you give me any tips on how to start a story? InuLuv forever/ Jstanz
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Reviewed By: inuyashalover1221 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 21:44 CST
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FIIIIINNNNNNNNNAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!! That took forever didn't it? God,I can't wait for the next update! Thank your beta for me,LATER!
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Reviewed By: cartel lover On: November 02, 2006 19:28 CST
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ahh this has to be like a top 3 chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Demons_Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 16:08 CST
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Ha! Love it. The whole story is hilarious. Took me about a total of three hours to read the whole thing, but I preservered and did it. Just got one thing to say to you....and I forgot it. Well anyways, awesome idea, awesome story, awesome little voice in InuYasha's head. ^.~
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