| "A Dark Past" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 22:14 CDT
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You've done it again.. there's a huge sloppy grin on my face and although Rin seems a little to Delta-delta-delta for me... you made it work....like, omigad, Fluffikins! The whole "Mexican standoff" thing with the wallet. ROTFL. Promise me promise me promise me Rin sings to Fluffikins before the journey's over. (or if it wasn't meant to be... alas... just showing enthusiasm... not orders...) I'm inclined to agree with those who feel sorry for Kikyo. What a sucky way to live/not live. I enjoyed enjoyed!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While it's clear what's wrong with Kikyou, I kind of feel sorry for her. It doesn't seem to me like she's truly guilty of anything other than being a complete idiot. She meant well, and didn't really seem all that evil until her last comment about Kagome never getting Inuyasha, which I suppose was understandable, under the circumstances. Inuyasha's completely right when he said that she did it to herself, but still, part of me does hope that there's a way to save her in the end. While still allowing Kagome and Inuyasha to live happily ever after, of course. :-)
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 17:42 CDT
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i am both worried about kikyou and at the same time slightly scared of her, she seems a little out of it...
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was SO funny! I can see kagome being all devious and putting on disguises. When she did the ramen thing I just about died, that was hilarious. Congratulations on going to Japan. Hope you have a lot of fun! ~Amber :)
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 00:10 CDT
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Hey girlie!!! My internet is fixed!!! I'm so happy!!! I am sending as we speak and hopefully it works!!! I will call you tomorrow morning & babble on so talk to ya later byez byez!!!!
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 21:52 CDT
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Leave it to Kagome to stick her cute little foot in her mouth! LOL.. Loved the end of this chapter. I really liked Kagome's inner dialog. Your descriptions of Jaken put a very clear picture in my mind. Bravo!
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 21:03 CDT
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oooh ooh oooooh! that was rlly funny! i had to quote parts of it to my sister who doesnt even really like inuyasha. The Jaken parts wre the funniest tho i think hehe. i will be waiting for your next update on tuesday!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... inuyasha's back home with his family but lots of issues... and funny how kagome is trying to see inuyasha but is never able to... then she meets sesshoumaru... wonder what happens... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: FrenchFry On: March 24, 2008 09:14 CDT
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Awesome closer! That just needed to be said. Mor'ranr
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Reviewed By: cartel lover On: March 24, 2008 02:51 CDT
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one of the best chapters yet! it was so good! yay for assigned updates. happy easter to you as well =].
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love how you have Kagome pick up and say Inuyasha's nickname for Sesshomaru. That was a priceless moment in the annuls of fanfiction. One that will be told with laughter for generations to come! Anyway, great chapter as always. I hope you are doing well and that you can update again soon. Sincerely, Zach
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Reviewed By: KittieCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 21:39 CDT
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I love this story. I hope this wasn't the last chapter. Please update soon, this is a great story. Well written, well thought out and well executed. Keep up the stellar work!
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Reviewed By: penguinsrule [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv it!!!!! Hurry up and write the next part, im gonna cry until u do...... its sooooooooooooo cute!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 22:49 CST
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TSK TSK TSK what have I told you about posting unedited stuff??? LOL Oh well I just finished editing so I will send it to you.........someday!!! LOL ok well soon but you need to write your little butt off cause March 17th is coming fast!!! And April 1st & 5th & 17th sooooooo write write write!!!! OOO ok well im going now. I havent left a review in a long time so this was way way way fun fun fun!!! lol mwahahahahaha oooo this chapter was cute but sad & i wish you would hurry up & write ooo & read Twilight!!! Byez byez Lexis
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Reviewed By: luxurious [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really did enjoy this chpt a lot...U really need to update. I hope its a happy ending like the story she wanted.
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