| "A Dark Past" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Reviewed By: KemicalRomantik [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 18:47 CST
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YEAH! You updated and surprisingly I think I loved this chapter even better than your last one. Believe it or not. Anyways. Love the story and I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: hfjdhgf On: November 02, 2007 08:55 CDT
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love it!!!!
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Title: AW....
Reviewed By: Ender_kb [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved that Kagome asked if he'd miss her. That was great. The fact that he couldn't give a smart come back was awesome. His feelings are starting to control him. I had hoped for a little more tension between the two, but I guess I can wait for that in the future chapters. Keep up on the good work.
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Reviewed By: cartel lover On: October 31, 2007 01:53 CDT
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oh em gee! this chapter came out of nowhere. i was about to turn off my computer but i saw i had a new email so i checked and there was the notification. i was so very happy.=]. i missed this story alot it is one of my favorites! and i loved this chapter too. i can not believe miroku is coming back .tear. but kags and inu will still be able to see eachother. right? [i hope so] =].happy halloween.
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Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok well basically i am loving your fanfic as it is one of the est i have read woth only a few spelling mistakes and it actually has a great plot. (i know i sound so surprised)but yeah thats all i have tosay and ican't wait to see what you ill do with hte stoy and i wnt to know whats goung to happen between kagome and inuyasha!!!!
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 15:48 CDT
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I read this and the way you talk is cute! Thogh the story is pretty good I'm guessing that the woman on the phone a few chapters back is his mom.
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Title: Chapter 33
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 23:09 CDT
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I'm happy that Inuyasha has finally come to terms with his feelings and is able to admit them to himself...the next step being admitting them to Kagome. ^^ Welcome back!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 21:27 CDT
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dude I loved it! yeah! Inuyasha said he loved her!!!!!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To tell you the truth, Iwas suprised to see this update. And yeah I thought you died off right then and there, but hey you updated and thats all that matters. Hopefully you'll update again and keep it up. Peace... P.S Love the kiss scene (smirks)
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Title: Emotions
Reviewed By: Ender_kb [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this fic for a long while and I was so upset that you were gone for so long. It's okay though! 'Cause you're back and that makes it all better. I love the tag scene. It was great and I really felt the emotions involved. Beautiful. I only wish that your chapters would be longer. :( Welcome back! I look forward to many more chapters!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 18:14 CDT
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Good chapter. I enjoyed it. I don't normally go for AUs, but this one caught my interest and has held it.
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Reviewed By: Aozora_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 19:04 CDT
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ack! I love this story! I'm so wrapped up it was a bummer when I got to where you last updated. *sigh*. And so the plot thickens. Little Inu is falling in love, AWW! lmao xD. Great job so far. Love, Ao. P.S. I've got an idea as to what Kikyou did. A certian friend-turned-bastard had something to do with it yes?
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Reviewed By: Photographing Poetry [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Jesus, you've got me really curious as to what Kikyou did to make Inu so hesitant to tell anybody. Did she like, rape him or some shit?! ... Oh good lord... I can just see it. "Oh, Inu-chan, drink this soda, you must've had a long day at work..." and while poor, unsuspecting Inu drinks it, he has nooo idea that it has the rape pill in it. So she rapes him and when he wakes up and gets one-helluva'-shock, she asks him "Aren't you happy?" and he just goes crazy. Hm. Or, maybe, she found a way so that he couldn't take a mate... is that why he's so mad and angry? Jesus, I'd kill the bitch. Anyway... I'm lovin' the story. The mystery as to why Inuyasha's there and what Kikyou did is killing me, but all of that will be revealed in due time, eh? And who the hell was that on the phone? Was it Kagura, or maybe Inuyasha's mother? I'm wondering. Does Kaede have something evil pulled up her freaking sleeve? Jeez. And why would they call Miroku away from work? Did they want Inuyasha to spend time with Kagome? Hee, in one of those afternoons of "fun", Kagome should really throw him off his rocker and take him to a rock concert or some shit. I'm sure it'd kill his sensitive hearing, but at least he couldn't complain about it being boring, eh? Anyway, I'm hoping you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kiri On: July 09, 2007 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh geez...I feel bad for the unresponsive patient... All the patients at psychiatric clinics must get extremely tired already, just from having to go to a session EVERYDAY...but having to go see their psychiatrist TWICE everyday?! And for TWO hours?! And DOUBLE on WEEKENDS?! O_______________O That would just be so...so exhausting...so incredibly emotionally draining...I think I'd just collapse on the ground and stay there for a month... That phone lady is an evil...EVIL woman... And Kaede...so many secrets...at first, when she was plotting with phone lady and Sango and they said "We'll have him out by his birthday", for some reason, I got the impression that they were gonna throw him a surprise party......XDDDDDD;;; God, I'm stupid...= w =;;
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Title: Great!!
Reviewed By: etaotn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 10:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! You are great!!! I love this story and now that I have read it I need more!! Please Update!!! I NEED to know what will ahppen next. Who is at the phone? What is Miroku Kaede & Sango preparing? Is Kagome falling for Inuyasha as well? Please update ASAP!!!
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