| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Title: adamile
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! great chapter so far this is my favorite chapt. Since she had the gun I've been waiting to see how this confrontation between Serena and Baz would play out. I gotta say I was touched by the emotions that poured out between the two in that short meeting. Very impacting and beautifully written. Serena was truly a woman of dignity.***Sue, did Sydnie kill Richardson? Also, you always seem to have the joy and incentive to write. I always wanted to know if you ever have writer's block and if so, how you overcome it. Also, what is the best way to get over a fear of writing and obtain the courage to write. thanks much. J
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 20:52 CDT
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This story is very "mature" ... I am not sure if that is the right word. It is rich in plot and true in its emotions ... just really well written. Thank you for sharing it.
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Reviewed By: Inu_sesshomaru_luver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 17:41 CDT
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i love this story!!!!! in fact i love all of your storys (i've read them all) and i'm sure Shameless will be the same
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 15:34 CDT
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Poor Bas, poor Serena... So much angst... It's been so long since I had a good cry, and this chapter was beautiful. I can't wait for the next update! ^^ ((I can't believe I forgot this yesterday: Welcome back Sue! ^^))
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 15:30 CDT
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I almost cried in this chapter, but I don't think I have enough moister in my tear ducts to do so lol. I was wondering when Serena would pop back in. I feel so bad for her.
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Reviewed By: Ayita [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 22:20 CDT
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Oh Sueric. Sueric, Sueric, Sueric. I love your story telling. Especially that chapter. It was just amazing. As time goes on and my own writing develops, I find myself drifting away from Media Miner and the whole fan fiction genre, at least until I finish my own story. Except I find myself continually coming back to your stories and never losing any enjoyment in them. I sit in anticipation for your next chapter and I can't wait till the next Purity starts. Is that in the near future by any chance? I hope your break was enjoyable.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I have to say is, "amazing!" That chapter had me at the end of my seat, not b/c I didn\ 't know what was gonna happen, but b/c I couldn\ 't wait to read what was going to happen. Outstanding job as always!!
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Reviewed By: Sweetprincess 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey,another great chapter done. Wow, you're an absolutely amazing author I've ever seen. Your fics are so incredible and the angst are piling up. I love it and I can't express how many time I wish i've have your talent and ability to write. Anyway, Bas is such a sweetheart and Sydney is a very lucky girl to have him as a mate. Btw, purity 6 is looking great. I hope you can update soon.
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Title: Final Confessions
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Intense writing at its best...I love that your writing style is unique. Thank you for the updates and for your passion. Take care of you.
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm speechless. Very awesome chapter. Maybe now Bas and Sydnie can move on with their lives! w00t!!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 18:30 CDT
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Okay I completely feel like an addict now I need more stories, lol. I can't wait for the end to seee how she reacts to Cain. As far as the 6th one is there going to be action in that also. I know you once said that you don't like writing action as much as you like writing romance?
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad that you are finished from your break the way you describe your home life though means that you must've needed it lol. I just wanted you to know that you are hands down my favorite author and I think that you have so many great stories. I can't wait for you to continue onto the second.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 18:02 CDT
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Thank you, Sue. I seriously needed this chapter; especially after putting up with my friend's crap all day! Action, love the action!! Lol.
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Title: Oooh 0.0
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 17:23 CDT
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Yeah plot twist! It was awesome (kinda) that we're ahving the thunderstorm of the year, massively huge storm, and just as I read the name this HUGE thunderclap happed and all the lights flickered. Did you plan that 0.0 ? Great update, even if it wasn't for the natural special effects. The sneaking out reminded me of Skeller's cat save for the sex part... 0.o I think I'll just shut up now. Uh... ::pets ego and runs::
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this was a most excellent chapter indeed. So intense. Loved also how you went back a bit with InuYashas memories and then his understanding in what Bas had to do. I had also wondered about all their swords, so Im glad you mentions them. I do have one question about them though: What exactly do they look like? I mean, I know what Tetsusaiga and Tenseiga look like, but what about the others? Where Tenseiga is long and straight, Tetsusaiga is long but curved and is larger than Tenseiga, or so it seems to me anyways. I really started to wonder what they all would look like when in the one chapter when Bas used HIS version of the Wind Scar. That really got me to thinking about them. That was also an awesome chapter. Cant wait till next chapter. Update when you can.
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